….ThE qUeStIoNaBlE rAmBlInGs Of A MaDmAn….
 

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ha first thing i notice were the hot multis and wordplay...

The ground may hurt but in the end, were merely vapor
Paced or….late or …braced for mistakes by our saviors
Save yours…of course ignorance will..Occur in tours
Realness of more …seal this by 2’s and 4’s outdoors…

^my favorite portion and what not.. i'm feeling the concept and how you made it look as if a Madman worte it with the title being half capital and have lower case, and the break offs throughout the lines.. very creative and i dun think nobody hit this topic before it's very original.. stay up kid.. get at me.
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thanx fiya..."call me kid...im older then you"!...
lol...sa'll good pumpkin..appreciate the feed........uppin...

I'm to tired to leave feed, hit me up on msn if you want feed, lol, good shit Daz, nicely shaking the rust off man, good shit, liked the structure, and the concept, one of the better om's, okay vocab, overall coo drop, 8.5/10 ;)

return the favor... links in the sig

nice shit here vocab tight multies crazy wordplay was sick structre good flow tight
8/10

you are pretty mad (for voting for marv) nah, just messing, this was a dope piece, i was enjoying how random it was, yet it all fit the context of the message you were geting across, good multies, very interesting to read, kept me reading, which is good, funny wordplay, haha, overall, this was just sizzling, keep up man.....there should be a feature open mic of the week or sump, and put this there, haha

^^thanx for the feed kesse.........uppin

thanx for the feed..^^tilt n the rest ill return feed sometime today
sup sup sup up up....

oh, come on Daz and I thought you didnt write poetry. What I inspire ya! (LoL) Keep this shit comin not really to much bad anyone can say about this one.
Late..
Sweft

nah sweft i do topicals but specialize in battlin...lol
i might start poetry....but not for a while...this was just a trial run
i suppose....more a concept ive been thinking bout for a while...

I'lll leave three words for ya...Hall Of Fame...thats all this is some of the best usage of wordply and multis i've seen on RV( though i only been here a few months)...keep this shit up fam...10/10...rtf in my sig

im glad you understood it, some didnt...lol..
ill be sure to return the favour
when i get back online.... :thumbup:

uppin............

I'll give this a 9/10 actually... lol after reading it again

uppin one last tyme.............

Yo, Daz... check your Yahoo email.. I emailed you.. THIS GAY MAC wont lemme email you.. i have to be on the DELL.. ugh.. well. yeah.. check it and himm up..

Sweft

lol, decent stuff, good vocab an used multies too good effect, ''stomp-in or stoppin lessons''...thats worthy of a quote right there, good stuff, each line came across as somewhat of a random statement if u feel me?...wordplay was on point, If this was ''the source'' i'd be givin you like 4 out of 5 mics lol, keep 'em comin homeboy

Peace out

yea this was a dope OM....i was feelin the use of multis u had sick wordplay wit good vocab....i give this drop 9/10 def one the best i've seen lately....good drop Famz....1

Nice verse...flow & structure on point like whoa!...rhyming real good some decent stuff in there you kept your topic nicely on point this was anice piece to read feelin it much...again ima say get on audio coz ya text if definitely ready to step to mp3 :thumbup:

Up Up Up,.......^^i Will Record Today(no Hang Over) Uppin

Wow, days later and still gettin' feed back.. :crazyness: Im working on some new shit. I read this again and as I said before. Just get more into this okay!
R.A.P
^^^
Rythem And Poetry!
You got this Fam! Lemme see more iight. I wanna do a poem w/ you. Really. You know what I can do and my style. Hit me up w/ a verse/topic and Ill have it to you in two days..
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Sweft

nice. i got the mad man sense from this. nice work vocab was good flow on point. u doing ya thing... keep up the good work

ya THIS HAS BEEN SLEPT ON SOMETHING FEIRCE....
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FROM YA FEEDBACK IM SURE YOUB DIDNT GET IT, BUT
HEY THATS KOO,...NOT EVERYONE DOES.,...........

werd....didn't know ya had it in you like that, DAZ!!!! hot lil topic...liked the mad version of multies...OMB might wanna holla at ya for this one..lol... shyt was cool...kinda got lost in the ramblings in the beginning but that's a good thing being that this is what it was supposed to be about...lol...good shyt par

much appreciated ig.uppin i guess for more feed......

Dope tittle.. Nice multi's wordplay and meta's too. The flow sounded "unique.''
I liked that last line the best.
"My questionable’s…at this time seem sensible to mine
Ramblings are signs.. that a madman exists within my mind"

Keep up the dopeness

Uppin This, Not Quite A Throwback But Meh....