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ASAP ft. Phenom, 20 GraND, D-Banks
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ASAP... JEA http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm order Phenom (chorus also) D-banks 20 GraND LINKS: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186209 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186007 |
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hot shit...feelin phenoms verse word 20's and debits too hook was nice gimme beat hoes...lol but foreal nice track......... |
Fuckin' soundclick isn't working for me...I will peep this when it is working again.
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Hmmm...I am likin the beat...Phenom...nice quality, flow, lyrics...the works...good shit...good verse...Nice hook...D-Banks...a little down on quality...nice flow, good lyrics...good verse...20...dope shit as always...good track...keep it up... Return the favor..."No We Won'"... |
some odd beat but blah....
intro: im feelin the intro phenom: shit was sick wit it. your verse was very strong. and your flow was sick. good with the beat. lyrics is koo. till i heard (soft as a butterfly) LOL. your emotion was SICK it was the exact type for the beat. 7.5/10 beat: the intro was sick famz. the ASAP effect in the back was dope. D-banks: good punches mayn. his lyrics were strong as hell. and they were easier to hear. shit was fiya. good quality. your emotion was good for this song. LOL "YOU aint hard cuz u took a piss in public" damn this is fuckin ill. this shit was crazy mayn 8/10 20 grand: good quality.....word...the opener lyrics was sick...the jeweler line was dope. jea mayn 20 grand elevated like DAMN. your emotion was fiya aswell. im feelin this to def. real nice shit manz honestly. good flow aswell 7/10 overall this song gets a 22/30 shit was fuckin FIYA another one of the doper songs on RV....good shit famz |
really good track ya'lll
phenom, you was real nice on it...i loved the delivery on this, really helped open the track up....you had tight flow through your whole verse, real solid... banks had da best verse in my opinion...you had crazy ass punches here, i loved dat piss in public line also, shit was crazy! good flow throughout too... 20 you was hot on here man...some of my favorite shit from you prolly....i was really feelin your verse, it was solid man... only thing i didnt really like was the beat at the begining, it semed fucked up like it was warped or some shit...or maybe it was jus me, lol good job though guys... |
^^ That soft as a butterfly line is gangsta - c'mon now. lol. Thanks for the feed yo - I'll be returnin feeds tonight. 1
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Phenom - flow felt choppy to start. I recon you don't usually spit this slow. Quality seems pretty good. No really standout lines. Chorus is coo except I thought you cussed too much.
D-Banks - delivery seems whack to start, but gets better as it goes on. Flow is better than Phenom's IMO. Lyrics are blah also. 20 - Flow is coo. Delivery is pretty nice. Lyrics are on and off. As in highs and lows with no in betweens IMO. Overall it's coo, nothin special really, but i'd listen again. Like 7/10. |
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beats tight............. hook krazy.........and all three flows complimented one another...... dope track for real... keep doing it yall "ez" |
Listening on my sotck G4 speakers.
Beat is bananas. Period. Hook matches. First verse seemed a little uncomfortable with the deliv - like it wasn't in the emcees comfort zone, but that's only dectable to other emcees really. Otherwise would a been a pretty dman solid verse. Lyrically it was prety good - whished it hadsome more activity init, but tha's personal prefference. Good voice. Second verse is forgettable. Quality on it was lumpy. Lacked enrgy in a big way and almost sounded liek it was emulating T.I. Shoulda been re-recorded on a way clearer set-up if they wanted to pull off that lazy sound. Third verse made a nice compliment to the other two. Some of the concepts stood out and some fell flat. Quality matched the first verse which made the second verse soudn even worse. Nice flow for everyone. The stuff I didn't mention is the stuff I didn't notice, lol, so that's a good thing. Overall, def a track worth a second listen. Would be album quality if not for that second verse's quality. Second verse needs a higher quality re-recording. |
wow what hate response from doomsday...ya audio is far from mine kid...get ya game up...aren't u the guy who knows 16 guys who are better then someone and 16 guys who are better then them...lol...that means u know alot of guys which is kinda gay but anywas thanks for the feed people...lol
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jea my boi debit aint got the best mic, but its all good
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Why'd you even up the track for feedback if you didnt' want honest feedback? I haqd no idea it was you and now that I do I still dont' care. Your mic blows. You won't be the last person I told. Your lyrics were typical and your quality sucked on top of that. Wouldnt' have semeed so bad if you didnt' have two dudes with good mics surroundning you. I told you what the prob was and told you how to correct it. Don't like it? eh, boo hoo. Don't like me however, you know what to do. Same goes for anyone. |
wow at u acting hard...whoo...ya scared me...all this comming from someone with the pope in his sig and i took the honest feedback...i thanked u and everybody else for their feedback...so have a nice day...lol
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What the fuck you talkin' about..? Doomsday is better than you at audio...statin facts. |
ok what do u have to do with this convo...stay outta my business and thank u for the feed...lol...lmao @ wishful thinking...doomsday better then me...lol
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If you can't take constructive criticism, then you won't make it far...simple as that... |
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that sounds lie kthe words of a pure hater. You're comparing your self to me whne I didn't say jack shit of the sort to compare me to you. Take two steps away form my nuts you insecure clown, lol. |
lmao...once again...i thank u two for the honest feedback...have a nice day...grab a coke and smile...lol
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youre right, that shit was.....lol |
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This track is mad hard. debit,20,then phenom ...just like that. but I was still feeling it all. perfect to me. I think tha lyrics was nice, collab was perfect...beat choice was the best...lol..,.only thing is all the talkin at the end. unneccessary to me, but other than that. I was feeling it. I'ma listen to it one more time. Vocals, and quality as usual was nice. I wanna do a collab w/ debit and 20 when I get my audition up. real talk.
RTF, battle link in sig. -peace- |
1st Cat - good flow voice was good..lyrics were ok but you came hard
2nd Cat - Good voice punches were hard...flow was ok ..delivery was also nice 3rd Cat - Voice sounds deep but flow was good..lyrics was good..delivery was nice |
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aight.. listenin now..
phenom - word i was feelinit kid.. but i did see how this was outa yo comfort zone.. felt liek you werent really content with the style but i mean you still sounded nice.. for real.. hook: bannans lol... i like that fucking hook.. on the real.. D-Banks - i wasent feelin the delivery at all really.. it sounded like somebody.. they name aint commin to my mind right now.. but its liek you tryna sound like em.. lyrically you were strait.. actually you had some nice lines.. but ya delivery fucked em up.. but i mean, it was coo overall.. 20 - delivery was straight.. you sound like senser.. lyrics is straight.. was solid verse.. cant complain peeps.. nice chill listenin song man.. really.. i could bump this in my ride.. if the second verse was a lil better lol |
Honestly found no flaws in this. Shit was hot dawg. Only thing I didnt like is when u said that shit Juelz said on Back Like Cooked Crack Pt. 2. But thats cool though. Keep droppin shit yo. 1.
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uppin for more feedback...just to point something out here...i find it funny how the people who have beef with me have said my verse should have been better or found more flaws in my verse then the others...strange but w/e...gotten more good feed on this then i've gotten bad from then the haters but like i said it's w/e and please before doomsday or limited edition or calamity come back here i would like to say thank u for the honest feedback...u guys can't say i don't take the constructive critiscism cause i do but like i said...thank u for the honest feed back everyone...have a nice day...uppin for more honest feedback
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i dont have beef with u homie, you had it with me.. remember that.. im on here like twice a month playa.. but its w/e.. i came here to post feedback on a joint my nigga phenom was on. the funny thing is lmao, i didnt know u go by D-banks, so it aint liek i knew who the fuck you were by voice, cause i dont.... so take it how u want.. be easy
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that's gay...u had beef with me...lmao...if u talk shit to somebody...that's beef in my book but thanks for the feed back killa...lol...uppin for more feedback
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