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04-14-05, 11:11 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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ASAP ft. Phenom, 20 GraND, D-Banks
IP: E4BC ABA0
Ight peep it
ASAP... JEA http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm order Phenom (chorus also) D-banks 20 GraND LINKS: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186209 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186007
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04-14-05, 11:43 PM
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"Click Clack"
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IP: 05FA D226
woooooooooooooo
hot shit...feelin phenoms verse word 20's and debits too hook was nice gimme beat hoes...lol but foreal nice track.........
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04-15-05, 12:20 AM
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L.E
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IP: 03A1 A28A
Fuckin' soundclick isn't working for me...I will peep this when it is working again.
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04-15-05, 01:30 AM
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IP: 03A1 A28A
Listening...
Hmmm...I am likin the beat...Phenom...nice quality, flow, lyrics...the works...good shit...good verse...Nice hook...D-Banks...a little down on quality...nice flow, good lyrics...good verse...20...dope shit as always...good track...keep it up... Return the favor..."No We Won'"... |
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04-15-05, 07:49 AM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
some odd beat but blah....
intro: im feelin the intro phenom: shit was sick wit it. your verse was very strong. and your flow was sick. good with the beat. lyrics is koo. till i heard (soft as a butterfly) LOL. your emotion was SICK it was the exact type for the beat. 7.5/10 beat: the intro was sick famz. the ASAP effect in the back was dope. D-banks: good punches mayn. his lyrics were strong as hell. and they were easier to hear. shit was fiya. good quality. your emotion was good for this song. LOL "YOU aint hard cuz u took a piss in public" damn this is fuckin ill. this shit was crazy mayn 8/10 20 grand: good quality.....word...the opener lyrics was sick...the jeweler line was dope. jea mayn 20 grand elevated like DAMN. your emotion was fiya aswell. im feelin this to def. real nice shit manz honestly. good flow aswell 7/10 overall this song gets a 22/30 shit was fuckin FIYA another one of the doper songs on RV....good shit famz
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04-15-05, 04:26 PM
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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IP: 2B9D 28F8
really good track ya'lll
phenom, you was real nice on it...i loved the delivery on this, really helped open the track up....you had tight flow through your whole verse, real solid... banks had da best verse in my opinion...you had crazy ass punches here, i loved dat piss in public line also, shit was crazy! good flow throughout too... 20 you was hot on here man...some of my favorite shit from you prolly....i was really feelin your verse, it was solid man... only thing i didnt really like was the beat at the begining, it semed fucked up like it was warped or some shit...or maybe it was jus me, lol good job though guys...
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04-15-05, 06:51 PM
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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IP: A597 E53E
^^ That soft as a butterfly line is gangsta - c'mon now. lol. Thanks for the feed yo - I'll be returnin feeds tonight. 1
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04-15-05, 07:14 PM
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IP: 77BB B7AD
Phenom - flow felt choppy to start. I recon you don't usually spit this slow. Quality seems pretty good. No really standout lines. Chorus is coo except I thought you cussed too much.
D-Banks - delivery seems whack to start, but gets better as it goes on. Flow is better than Phenom's IMO. Lyrics are blah also. 20 - Flow is coo. Delivery is pretty nice. Lyrics are on and off. As in highs and lows with no in betweens IMO. Overall it's coo, nothin special really, but i'd listen again. Like 7/10.
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04-15-05, 09:16 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 666C F77E
uppin for more feedback
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04-15-05, 09:37 PM
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El Padrino
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IP: 3240 794D
peeping..........
beats tight............. hook krazy.........and all three flows complimented one another...... dope track for real... keep doing it yall "ez"
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04-15-05, 09:58 PM
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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 93A1 BBCD
Listening on my sotck G4 speakers.
Beat is bananas. Period. Hook matches. First verse seemed a little uncomfortable with the deliv - like it wasn't in the emcees comfort zone, but that's only dectable to other emcees really. Otherwise would a been a pretty dman solid verse. Lyrically it was prety good - whished it hadsome more activity init, but tha's personal prefference. Good voice. Second verse is forgettable. Quality on it was lumpy. Lacked enrgy in a big way and almost sounded liek it was emulating T.I. Shoulda been re-recorded on a way clearer set-up if they wanted to pull off that lazy sound. Third verse made a nice compliment to the other two. Some of the concepts stood out and some fell flat. Quality matched the first verse which made the second verse soudn even worse. Nice flow for everyone. The stuff I didn't mention is the stuff I didn't notice, lol, so that's a good thing. Overall, def a track worth a second listen. Would be album quality if not for that second verse's quality. Second verse needs a higher quality re-recording.
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04-15-05, 10:06 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 666C F77E
wow what hate response from doomsday...ya audio is far from mine kid...get ya game up...aren't u the guy who knows 16 guys who are better then someone and 16 guys who are better then them...lol...that means u know alot of guys which is kinda gay but anywas thanks for the feed people...lol
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04-15-05, 10:06 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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IP: 6BB2 BE06
jea my boi debit aint got the best mic, but its all good
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04-15-05, 10:12 PM
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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 93A1 BBCD
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Why'd you even up the track for feedback if you didnt' want honest feedback? I haqd no idea it was you and now that I do I still dont' care. Your mic blows. You won't be the last person I told. Your lyrics were typical and your quality sucked on top of that. Wouldnt' have semeed so bad if you didnt' have two dudes with good mics surroundning you. I told you what the prob was and told you how to correct it. Don't like it? eh, boo hoo. Don't like me however, you know what to do. Same goes for anyone.
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04-15-05, 10:14 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 666C F77E
wow at u acting hard...whoo...ya scared me...all this comming from someone with the pope in his sig and i took the honest feedback...i thanked u and everybody else for their feedback...so have a nice day...lol
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