HOTT CLUB TRACK!! (20 GraND and D-Banks)
 

jea jea
called robbn and thieving
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm


order
20 grand - 1st and 3rd and chorus
Debit aka D-Banks- 2nd

holla wif feed...

LINKS:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186209
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186038

Nice Title, Robbing and Thieving, (i have yet to leave feedback on ASAP altho i'm pissed i been lookin for that beat like forever and a day).. lol

*listening now*

"woooo ohhh wooo ohhh ohhh ohh"
nice beat, gsuz twunny where the fuck you get these beats lol.. anyways, 1st verse pretty decent.. You already know the name! BRUDDDDDDAA! "clean ya spot up like detergent.. lol" "airing out ya block like a respiratory system, cursing at the cops for tryna put us in the system" "gingerbread man we never fall a victim of the fox" lol haaa.. i like your emotion on this shit, you know you doin good, twunny.. your confidence in this song proves it. nice stuff fa real, stay up kid.

chorus= hotness... this should be a featured track off the chorus alone.

verse 2- the origamy line was hot.. and no you didn't mention no Bernstein bears.. lol Debit soundin like Banks as usual you came more off as laid back but i like your lyrics. "bitch you hood hop more than J Qwon" lol @ the CRASH BANDICOOT LINE *dies* ha that was clever mos def.

verse 3- 20 Grand:
"sonic boom just dustin the clouds..", "pockets more greener than forrests..."
just as good as your first verse, hot shit str8 up..

Like i said already, this should be a featured track, this was sum hot shit str8 up.. i like the fact you switched your style up a lil' twunny, you took your metaphors to another level, and refrained from using "like" so much and your delivery is fuckin ill, i can tell you tryna improve and that's what's needed on this site, keep elevating you gonna be hitting the top soon enuff... as well as Debit i like your comparisons lol @ the Bernstein Bears line that had me crackin up, i'm downloadin this.. i'm lettin the Wild Wunz here this shit.. this hot.

jea this like my newer shit...

and the line was "greener than photosynethesis.. lol

oh it sounded like forrest sumthin to me.. lol................ well good job, nice shit str8 up..

RTF... new 20 n debit aight, u seem to be the couple

hmm, hot beat n e one can spit flame to this, lets see if you are beter than jus "anybody" tho, the flow is nyce on this for real.20 some of the bes shit i heard from u yet. u say airin out the block on alot of tracks, the chorus is kinda hard to understand, u gotta pay close attention. the oh oh oh is like sumthin off a nelly song or sumthin. debit up now. generic style. lyrics basic... not bad, i mean honestly its bedda than 50 percent of the peeps on here. but u aint too original. chorus agin, its aight. 20 acutaly came wit emotion on dis one, thats one thing i usualy comment on. smokin a half ounce while loadin tha pound. original. finaly i can say i heard uspit a punch i never heard n e one else say n e thing like. i know im hard on my feedback most of the time but ill say that 20 came nyce on dis. wow, the shit jus cut out tho at the end. prob gionna b on ya mix tape rite 20? if u keep comin original like this shit i mite dl one of ur tracks. keep em comin.

jea this is on my mixtape...
good shit lol

those other tracks i posted like a coupel days ago are samples.. not nessecarly gonna be completed.

nice drop fam second guy kinda sounded like i unno i didnt really like his flow sounded
like he had marbles in his grill he had a dope verse though overall dope drop homie

how do u know what marbles in yo mouf sound like?
lol

hey casper do u want me to "ghost write" for u...OHH WORDPLAY...lmao...don't get "ghosted" by 20 grand nigga...lol...upppin for more feed

nice track, do i hear it in the club nearby?

na, thats fat joe...lol but nice track only thing is up ya vocab the both of ya
and that would make yall iller...........word

i dont understand why u would get mad at a person for trying to give you feedback. i mean, he's bein honest, if you could grasp the concept of constructive critizism you could take what he's tellin you and use it to your advantage. y u say what 20 will do to him? you cant man up f'yaself? dunno jus frusterates me when people dont understand that they're gettin what they're askin for, FEED!

thanks for the feed everybody...lol...uppin for more feedback bitches

i was on aim all day...lol...where were u and why do u want me to get on aim...lol...uppin for more feedback

uppin for more feedback

theres no reason to up your track if it's near the top. i think there should be a rule enstated for an "upping" limit. cuz 20 n dis man seem to b doin it alot.

it's not 20, it's me...who the fuck comes in someone else is thread and complains they up it to much...that's fucking homo but ya a hater so i understand........UPPIN FOR MORE FEEDBACK

this was a tight track.........thanks for pointin it out to me deb.......cuz this shit had a nyce beat reall shit to bump to.......haah and since i been doin a lot of smokin lately ish the shit i like to listen to..........okay well the flow was on point.......pretty good hook actually kinda hard to understand but its kewl.......felt some emotion in this piece and that was a good aspect of this track........i felt you guys did a really good job on this track.......just in some spots it coulda used a lil betta vocab but otherwise you both did this track pretty well......keep it up fellas :thumbup:

uppin for more feedback

he debit watch it homie i was only sayin

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Beat was REAL hot,lyrics was pretty good too,ill prolly add it to my playlist ;)

Africans Say I Cant Rap Cause Im White,But Its Clear As Rain Drops..
Im Just As Black As Everyone Else When You Turn The Lights Off..

^^^to the person above, this siggy was a cop off of DZK's track "take control" you jus used his line and made it gayer. ....ur not foolin me......BAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!

stop fucking freepost and get out of my thread....uppin for more feedback

Hey this was a real good track decent flows by both and i am not particularly fond of that j-kwon beat myself but yall did it justice this is my first time hearin yall and i was pleased good job overall

thank u everyone for the feedback....uppin for more feed

ohhhh...so I heard u like to talk shit behind my back 20 grand...

u fake as shit dawg


u stayed on my dick...wanna collabo?

ur wack as fuck...u can't hold a track down SOLO...and the only reason u gettin attention is cuz Im on break right now...gettin a fresh perspective...When Im droppin hot...don't NOBODY give a fuck about ur shit...and u know dats true

ole hatin ass BIOTCH

u got somethin comin...bitch

wow he's riding 20 hard...lmao...uppin for more feedback

i got Q takin 20 EZ...lol i love provokin tha flame...

wow what are u a lil bitch omen...because me and 20 exposed u as always wanting to collab with em and shit u got mad and started beef...in all honesty i ain't never heard 20 say shit about tha q but he will now...uppin for more feedback

jea wtf... its ight doe
i dont care what 2 e-thugs who have sex wif guys think....
gg

IT twas straight....the beat was cool....flow was on point..this was a decent song...7/10

wow what are u a lil bitch omen...because me and 20 exposed u as always wanting to collab with em and shit u got mad and started beef...in all honesty i ain't never heard 20 say shit about tha q but he will now...uppin for more feedback

^ i love how this man speaks for 20 and STILL claims he is not on his NUTS! u aint expose shit fellow. only thing u did was make urself look like an idiot and you know it, aint nobody said n e thing about me being "exposed" cept u. yet at least 10 ppl said how gay u were. get tha picture????i never wanted to collab with 20 as hard as u keep sayin. i maybe asked him to get on ONE track after he asked me to spit over his OH BOY COLLAB. lol getcha facts rite homey... you n 20= garbage....you're soon to knkow if you dont already,..lol....getcha e gats loaded d.

gg

jea dont steal my "gg"
nutsack

1st MC - yo voice is lackin emotion, but lyrically it's aiite....keep it up
2nd MC - nice flow, punches and metas........

Da hook is nice........

7/10

nice drop.......

pz

~1~

Good Flow Here By Both Beat Was Aight Not All That Really I Dont Like Debits Voice Fiya He Sounds Like Banks?hell Fucking No Not Even Cloes Anyways.........your Not Sounding Like Him Sound Wise Or Lyrical Your Shit Was Decent But You Need To Up Your Emotions Lyrically Your Good Here 20 Grand Good Flow Much Better Voice Then Debit Here I Actually Liked Your Verse On This Chrous Was Weak Here Lyrics Were Good By Both 20 Grand Shined On This

well u said i sounded like mase when i did my very first track cali...so that's not saying much...and no phenom i'm not upping this

he's upping it close his thread!lol@freeposting

Lets get some more feed, uppn fam

20 grand is wack.PERIOD.