Yea we did this a month ago an its jus been sitting in my files so I figured I'd finally post it an see what y'all think about it....so holla wit some good feed plz..........1


Verse 1: Senser
Verse 2: Triple_N
Hook: Senser

Link to song:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triplenmusic.htm


Links to left feedback:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186007
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185953
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...48&page=2&pp=15
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185116
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2082390

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Listening: Beat nice...flow good i'm peepin lo-fi so i'm not commentin on quality...rhyming is good...topic nicely on point 2nd verse a bit loud but aight...adlib has been used in another track i heard i think it was Nostradamus & Traumas Drop In The Ocean...but yea good track keep em comin

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To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

*listening*

Beat is pretty dope....
Sensers Verse...i like how your sort of wispering somewhat on it...it fit the beat well...lyrically it was pretty nice....
Triples Verse....deliverance is nice..your flow is on point...lyrically its nice..you had some pretty witty lines in this verse...
Quality is good....
Hook is pretty nice....

overall this was a pretty dope track....

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nooo am on thsi beat in my new song... nooo lol i love this beat its dope.. first cat is good... quality could be better but it isnt tht bad... have ya got a lisp or summink? lol lyrics are decfent flow is on poinmt all the way through ya verse... hook is ight i spsoe too slow if ya ask me but o well... wasnt tht bad... haha take it this is triple n now.. u show lotsa emotion in ya songs which is a plusside... lyrice r koo! flow is smooth man u always have good flow nice shit... your quality is doppe man i rlly like this track keep droppin em pz

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jea you showed me this b4 trip.. im feeln da lyrics from both
chorus is iffy... not 100% feeln it, Flow was good from both only part that threw me off was when u saying muscle up for the green and had the effect that broke up the bar, seemed off to me.. idk why lol
but other than that good track fam
senser and trip holla back
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kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

listening.. damn sensor.. you pretty good man.. like the lyrics.. your flow is pretty good.. not off at any spots at all.. chorus is pretty nice man.. and i gotta admit.. damn i jealous for ur quality..

verse 2: damn.. always always impressing me trip... flow is nice as usual.. and that background voice thing.. thats tite lol.. the lyrics are pretty good and are really on topic.. nothing to help you on since your the one that helps me lol..

9/10..

everything was perfect ya.. keep it up

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aiight listenin

first verse: shit is fuckin FIRE!! im feelin this already and i know its gonna be hot...senser is dangerous man...the quality is pretty good...some words are hard to hear but the shit is sick...his flow is dangerous...and the lyrics is dope too..and his voice matches the beat perfectly...shit was hot

hook: the hook is dope too...good use of sound effects and good mixing...shit was real hot fam....i was feelin it....

Triple N: Shits fire...you have a strong voice mayn...it brings the track out...shit was hot....dayum im feelin this shit hot...lyrics is strong aswell.. fire..keep doin ya thanng.....the quality was dope too.....good shit

overall this shit was HOTT im tellin you mayn ive seen alot of trax underground.....and everything and this shit was Fire one of the best..i give this a 9/10

Word of advice...do a third verse....and put it on a mixtape or something...get that song known....and if peoples really feelin it..redo it in a studio and put it on an album or something..shits bangin

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Senser: Verse is dope. You know I always feel ya shit. Dope flow, and you all there lyrically. This beat is dope though. I'm feelin it. Flawless on this verse. hook? I'm with 20 - not 100% feelin it. It's mad different, and I am FEELIN the lyrics, but i would like to hear it flowed a lil diff. Trip: Whoa, emotion a lil hype for this track, but I guess it compliments sensers laid back flow. Lyrics not bad, verse flowed nicely. Good track over all. 1

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listening on my stock G4 speakers.

Not nuts about the beat at all. First verse, not sure if you put an effect on it but the lyrics sound liek you have a MEAN lisp. eh, maybe you do. Lyrics were pretty good - cept redundant.

Second verse - damn man, you do sound a lot liek zib. Lyrics were pretty good, felt the vol was a few dB's too high for the rest of the track - same with the energy. Seemed liek you were hype about it, but it didn't seem liek the type of track that needed it. Track felt liek oen of those 'crepping evil' type songs and your emotion on it seemed out of place. Just shootin straight. 1

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Listenin'...beat sounds nice and dark...

Senser...nice shit...nice flow...good verse, nice lyrics...I like the whisper shit too...dopeness...

Hook...Nice and creepy hook...yeah feelin' this...

Triple_N....Nice flow, nice shit...everything is good here...very good verse...

Good track...nice work both of ya'll...

Return the favor..."No We Won'"...

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Okay, let me break this down...

Lyrics (concept): I like the concept used in this one and the title really matches the song because it's got this dark, mysterious vibe over it in my opinion. Lyrics from both of you were hotn, you are both equally strong when it comes to the lyrical part of the deal. I think the concept you guys went with is quite interesting to many, easy to relate and get in to as well.

Beat and flow: both of you have an amazing flow, I was immediately feeling it which doesn't happen that often in fact. The beat was nice as well as the hook, again that dark, evil vibe over it. This was a strong and powerful track and the way you guys spit on this one, the attitude you brought only contributed to that.

You got me liking this track from the beginning because of Senser's verse, it immediately caught my attention because of the power and also the whispering (cfr. the mysterious vibe) he brought. The hook that he did was very good because of the sound effects and such, good mixing for sure. Then Triple N, we all know you are one of top heads on here and you showed it once again. Flow was good as well as lycrics and because you both have quite a different tone of voice, it brings variety to the track which is always nice of course.

Nice track without a doubt, please rtf...

DQ

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Senser - I thought it was niec b.. for real.. quality a lil scratchy here and there,, but it was straight.. was feelin the flow and lyrics were nice... real solid b

Triple - flow was coo.. emotion was abundant lol.. was also straight lyrically..solid verse here to man...


stay up

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Senser spit fiya on this verse... the chorus was aight... the whispering was heavy, but it fit the beat sumwhat, i was feeling the beat a whole lot. Triple N OMG at the trigger finger itchy line shit was nice lol... y'all flowed really well, the lyrics were pretty hot.. good job on this boyz.. stay up, 1.

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