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Big City vs Stanza
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8 bars max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 04-29-05 at 05:05 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-27-05 05:09 PM.
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You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins
You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work" Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit* BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette".............. With *fully Loaded-Guns*
Done You Betta Not Duck This time |
Come on man Dont Bitch out You Dont Need all that time to post a verse
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Big City has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-28-05 03:36 PM.
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i didnt' say i did need all that time to post a verse, but i got important shit to do son, prom is tomm
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chea......dog its nothin
stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp" im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped? aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you? niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog Just in case==== *peeps used to get on Ashanti cuz she had sideburns *Wilson makes basketballs *Whose the boss? is an old ass show *C-4 is explosives if u aint know |
i didnt duck hoe, i got shit more important than you lol
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This was feedback posted for Big City
You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins
You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End Set-up was eh, but punch was funny... No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work" Eh.......not feeling it... Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit* BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits Nice.... you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette".............. With *fully Loaded-Guns* Played concept, but good closer.. stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face Ha....nice connection, I'm still laughing about those semi-mutton chops.. you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one OK... ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp" Played concept, but aight... im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch Eh....so-so.. how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza Hah...alright you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped? OK....... aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars Played.... u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you? niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog Played... Some played shit, but both of you brought some good lines.. Don't have enough posts to throw a vote yet, but this was a good battle, I'm upping it so peeps can get a look.. |
Oh You Wack ass hell I Got This win
Go Lay Down SOmewhere Yo Wack ass and dont forget to tell them niggas who toke yo wack ass down |
hahaah son you're crazy, i raped ur sorry ass get on wit that
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Voted For: Big City
stanza loses you have to drop 10 lines or more to win on rv strobes rule Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Stanza
Oh, I dunno this was a close one. BC had him with lines. I think stanza was confused about the bars and lines thing. But stanza did come hard. The last line in stanza's verse prolly took it. I dunno though. This is a tuff one. BC had a lot of not so good lines and his punches werent all that. I can't vote though.........
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Voted For: Stanza
Stanza's verse. You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End Couldve been worded wayy better, but a nice opener No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work" Almost played, but you worded it wayy better. good punches/diss here Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit* BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits Kinda forced this one to make since, but it was just ight for me you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette".............. With *fully Loaded-Guns* This was dope. Your best bar. This was worded good, and unexpected. I think this one prolly got him Your verse was pretty descent. Kinda a slow start, but you picked it up near the end of ur verse, and started dropping some nice lines. Ur structure was on point, and your verse flowed together pretty good. Some hard punches, not too many personals, and a few good mettas. Nice verse. You take it in my opinion Big City's verse stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face Worded bad, and off wit structure, but a nice bar if the voters can understand it you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one Again, this was worded kinda off, but an overall nice punch ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp" Worded bad, but it was still dope. This was ur best so far im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch hahaha..creative. And definately not played. Nice how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza ehh. This was wack to me. No hate you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped? Kinda the same concept as eminem. If you wouldnt have said this first, it wouldve been mad dope, but because em played off this dick/pussy line, it took some points outa tha creativitie category for you aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars Stretched a lil, but still understood. Descent u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you? niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog Ok ender. But still a lil stretched. Your verse was kinda stretched as you should know. It was ight though. It made your flow look/seem kinda terrible, but besides that, creativitie in this wasnt all that, but a few punches were nice and wouldve landed right if worded correctly. I think you should work on that. But this was a nice verse. Made it a competition, but I dont think you took it. If personals were placed somewhere it wouldve been a win[/b] Nice battle. |
Voted For: Stanza
Stanza's verse. You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End Couldve been worded wayy better, but a nice opener No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work" Almost played, but you worded it wayy better. good punches/diss here Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit* BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits Kinda forced this one to make since, but it was just ight for me you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette".............. With *fully Loaded-Guns* This was dope. Your best bar. This was worded good, and unexpected. I think this one prolly got him Your verse was pretty descent. Kinda a slow start, but you picked it up near the end of ur verse, and started dropping some nice lines. Ur structure was on point, and your verse flowed together pretty good. Some hard punches, not too many personals, and a few good mettas. Nice verse. You take it in my opinion Big City's verse stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face Worded bad, and off wit structure, but a nice bar if the voters can understand it you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one Again, this was worded kinda off, but an overall nice punch ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp" Worded bad, but it was still dope. This was ur best so far im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch hahaha..creative. And definately not played. Nice how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza ehh. This was wack to me. No hate you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped? Kinda the same concept as eminem. If you wouldnt have said this first, it wouldve been mad dope, but because em played off this dick/pussy line, it took some points outa tha creativitie category for you aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars Stretched a lil, but still understood. Descent u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you? niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial......its nothin dog Ok ender. But still a lil stretched. Your verse was kinda stretched as you should know. It was ight though. It made your flow look/seem kinda terrible, but besides that, creativitie in this wasnt all that, but a few punches were nice and wouldve landed right if worded correctly. I think you should work on that. But this was a nice verse. Made it a competition, but I dont think you took it. If personals were placed somewhere it wouldve been a win[/b] Nice battle. |
wow...............................................
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wow ^^ you must have lost ur mind, i guess its in the same place you put ur skills
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uppin this ish again....................................
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hahah this is funny uppin this shit
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uppin this ish again....................................
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This was feedback posted for Stanza
im leaving feedback since i dont have 200 posts...
im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch vs You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End Big C- u have potential. but u need to work on ur disses and wordplay. like the wilson punch it couldh have been reworded to have a greater effect and u wasnt really dissin ur opponents man. any elevate Stanza- decent verse. opener was prolly the best. u was straight forward and had mediocore wordplay. but it was enough to win. v/stanza RTF. |
Voted For: Big City
Big City got this... Breakdown: stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face ^^LMAO...Good shit, 8/10 you appealin to none, stop talking, start concealin ya tongue cuz ya chances of winnin are about a million to one ^^Ok line, punch wasnt that hard, but nice multies, 6/10 ya feelin me son, ..im poppin hate in my jams treat u a ya crew like Jews, and "concentrate on ya camp" ^^Whoa this is hot...8/10 im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch ^^LMAO...Nice 8/10 how u gon put me up against this punk phony Stanza im about to show him "whose the boss" like i was Tony danza ^^Meh...alright...6/10 you small prick, how could a clique wit all dicks be SO DAMN PUSSEY, did u get ya balls ripped? ^LMAO...Good shit 8/10 aww shit, dont try and star, you'll get maligned and scarred he cou'ldnt get an explosive verse, wit C-4 in ya lines and bars ^^WHOA! FIRE!! 10/10 u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you? niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial ^^What a way to finish! Nice...9/10 Overall: 63/80 (78%) Stanza: You Think You Gonna Be the One To Put A Lost On My Wins You So Soft Id Bring My Knife & Kill You With The Plastic End ^^Played punch...Decent however...7/10 No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work" ^^LMAO...Nice...8/10 Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit* BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits ^^Nice...Couldve been worded better...7/10 you must "Lust-For-Death" I'm "Dusting-Ya-Rep Hold-It-Son U Know I Won Facin' me is like "Russian-Roulette".............. With *fully Loaded-Guns* ^^Ok closer 7/10 Overall: 29/40 (72%) Hot battle here but BC wins by a small margin...No hate to my boy Stanza, but this is just how I saw the battle...Nice verses from both of yall...RTF and hit up my battle with Morse Code in my sig...Thanx 1 |
uppin this ish again....................................
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Oh Yeah Thanx for all The Votes ............Still Uppin
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This was feedback posted for Big City
god damn..........................................
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RTF you cock-munch!! lol...Hit the links!!!!!!!
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i voted on ya battle first what u mean return the favor?
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uppin this ish again................................
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uppin this ish again................................
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This was feedback posted for Big City
Stanza: Short verse, flow was cool, punches were meh. Nothing had me laughing. Just some close to okay meta's. Quotables:
No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work" Big City Must be*Dead Crap*Bcuz Im Known to *RIP shit* BC battle on Phones so match Numbers & Letters & Call Quits Vs. Big City: Flow was alright too, punches were the same like his, just meh. Longer verse but you still didnt have anything great. Meta's were okay. Quotables: stanza, you should just retire, but don't copy Mase or you'll get ya " sideburned" like Ashanti's face im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch u at a loss for words? thank god!, did ya verbals desert you? niggas' will b askin "Where you at?" like a boost mobile commercial V/ Big City for having wittier punches. |
Yeah Wateva Thats why You cant Vote ............LOL
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Dont get angry because I left honest feedback .
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?me Angry?
No ........Tanx N E way Though.......... |
man wtf would somebody vote on this shit damnn.....
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Voted For: Big City
stanaz: nice verse, good flow an punches, effective personals too ya verse was short n sweet, straight ta the point No Ducking..Rush-Me? Even though a Loss To U Wont Hurt Cuz U known to be a "Fucking-Pussy" like "Prositute at Work" ^^^ that second line is so fuckin basic but it had me like ''oooh'' haha, good shit!! ^^ that was the highlight of the battle im oscillating you fam, get off the track, u don't run this shit no, i aint a basketball,.. but I "wil-son" this bitch ^^^ i like the idea of the wilson wordplay, but it was very uneffective for a battle, maybe could of worded it better ta have more effect an turned it into a personal, ya feel me? city: ya closer was stretched, rest of the verse had some good flow too it, punches were good, but on some occassions u bigged yourself up alot, like in the bar i copied above ^^^ on the whole stanza had the much shorter verse but remained on point throughtout, where as big city had some good stuff an very creative, but in a battle some shit was not effective because of the self glory an not personal disses on stanza |
Thanx Man......................We still Uppin ........
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uppin this ish again, thanks for the honest vote Tephlon
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Voted For: Big City
this was a nice ass battle in my point of view Stanza you had some good punches at the beginning but you fell off towards the end.....you should've went for a longer verse and you would've had a better chance of winning with how you fell off at the end of your short verse....short verses....you have to have a TIGHT ASS verse if you gonna pull a win off with one....but you didn't do good enough to get the win BC you had decent punches all thru your verse.....flow was aight you can work on yours too lol....you had a lot of metas and shit....i don't even thin k need to explain why you won....you just....ripped him Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin this ish again, thanks for the honest feedback detrimental
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uppin this ish again, thanks for the honest feedback detrimental
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