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...E... vs DA RIPPA
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6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-02-05 at 11:12 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
DA RIPPA has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 11:13 AM.
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...E... has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-29-05 11:15 AM.
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hey yo
i come from a small indian tribe called smack a hoe,trick// they call me cheif beat a bitch aka rev. smack a hoe, dude// cause i'll preach heaven and knock the hell out of you// three bar's all it take, i can't be beat// so E Emagine that your better than me// hey best man win |
yo...yo...yo....my first yrical victim....
yo da rippa ye u real be r.i.p, when my gun clip, now listen your shit dick,u talk full bullshit kid... I fuck eat chili* and drop u in ground,..u fucking cought... battle with real E,bitches like u cant even found... nice avatar wheres u get that,rip this fag, homeless shelter is to that way,buy new crap bag... *my shit be hot for chili....and hotter than u without chili too |
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Voted For: ...E...
...E...- alright I guess, didnt really have many punches or a good flow. Best Line - None Worst Line - o...yo...yo....my first yrical victim.... yo da rippa ye u real be r.i.p, when my gun clip, DA RIPPA - whack, you didnt have a punch.. and you had WEAK rhymes. Best Line - NONE Worst Line - i come from a small indian tribe called smack a hoe,trick// they call me cheif beat a bitch OVERALL - WHACK, but I vote for E.. he actually tried to throw a punch. Vote - E |
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Voted For: DA RIPPA
i come from a small indian tribe called smack a hoe,trick// they call me cheif beat a bitch Ha.... aka rev. smack a hoe, dude// cause i'll preach heaven and knock the hell out of you// Eh....ok three bar's all it take, i can't be beat// so E Emagine that your better than me// heard closer, but ok... yo...yo...yo....my first yrical victim.... yo da rippa ye u real be r.i.p, when my gun clip, no....... now listen your shit dick,u talk full bullshit kid... no... I fuck eat chili* and drop u in ground,..u fucking cought... battle with real E,bitches like u cant even found... no... nice avatar wheres u get that,rip this fag, homeless shelter is to that way,buy new crap bag... no... I've heard indian concepts before, but I thought it was still pretty funny in the context of the battle, didn't really take much on rippa's part to win this, there was an actual flow while e's shit kind of stumbled along... RTF whenever.. |
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This was feedback posted for DA RIPPA
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Voted For: DA RIPPA
WTF was this Da RIPPa n ...E... yall could've came harder god please DARIPPA you was doomed from the start ugly structure and yeah ur flow was ugly brush up on yah skillz man u real weak but still u had a better verse than this other dude that hardly even rhymed i gotta give it to u for accually rhymeing ...E... man seriously u booty as fuck son u need to quit the game son shit u fuckin suck advice go to the totorials and learn wtf rap is god ur flow is ugly ur rap was bad u get a 1/10 and da rippa is my vote wit a 2.3/10 ok |
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Voted For: DA RIPPA
yo...yo...yo....my first yrical victim.... yo da rippa ye u real be r.i.p, when my gun clip, now listen your shit dick,u talk full bullshit kid... I fuck eat chili* and drop u in ground,..u fucking cought... battle with real E,bitches like u cant even found... nice avatar wheres u get that,rip this fag, homeless shelter is to that way,buy new crap bag... there was no punches in this verse? the flow was ooookay could of been alot better it looks like u tryed a bit of multis i guess but yo when u doing ya verse make sure to come hard and direct at the opponit that helps 3/10 come from a small indian tribe called smack a hoe,trick// they call me cheif beat a bitch aka rev. smack a hoe, dude// cause i'll preach heaven and knock the hell out of you// three bar's all it take, i can't be beat// so E Emagine that your better than me// that smack a hoe / smack a dude shit was weak as hellll no hate or noting BUT u did have a good punch in there i thought aka rev. smack a hoe, dude// cause i'll preach heaven and knock the hell out of you// that was preety good and if u keep on with more stuff like this u will be alot better word so keep trying cuz that 1 punch took this battle 4/10 |
yo my fult i forgot to add this in there can ya plez return the favor of voting in my battle i have open with christyle
link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189120 thanks... its beening slept on like u'r battle was |
This was feedback posted for DA RIPPA
weak battle
there was no flow, no good personals can't vote for anyone sorry no hate... just honest opinion |
hey where are yall at
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This was feedback posted for DA RIPPA
wow both off these are horrible you both need to elevate i would challenge either of you to a battle but my feedback made more sense then both of those verses combined that chilli line i still dont understand neither of you had anything good in your verse no multie no meta no nothing lack punches and wheres the personals battle was complete garbage elevate newbs elevate
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Voted For: DA RIPPA
damn!! lol ...E...must be takin E to rite like that! no serious tho, most lines didnt make sense! I fuck eat chili* and drop u in ground,..u fucking cought... ^^^like wtf! and there were no punches at all in ur verse! Da rippa gets this one cuz his was funny all that smack a hoe indian shit! His structure was better, he actually had sum punches and his actually made sense! |
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Voted For: DA RIPPA
checkin this out............... think da rippa took this one...on account of better idea and alot more imagery.....E, you had a decent piece, but a little too basic, vocab could be better, and i wasn't really gettin any mental images.....but keep workin on it and you'll do fine.... E, thought some lines coulda been worded diff, some were a little simple, but for the most you stayed consistent, nice visuals created, strong emotion....nice twist at the end....keep up and maybe you'll be godly.....maybe, haha, word nice battle v rippa rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=186164 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185292 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=187167 |
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