Clap Back -20 GraND-
 

ight here we go

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm

called clap back

lil mike jone diss in there lol

anywayz holla back





LINKS:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=188428
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187385

ight lets do this hoecake.......

you should of got more hype on this track i recommend re-recording this ish and getting
a little more hype, flow was nice, consistant throughout the track, lloll who? mike jones
like that morse code line shit was nice, point guard line was nice too, lyrics are
Average-Good, beat choice is dope lol go shadowville productions nice track only thing
like i said is get more hype and your vocals sound a little hallow to me but nice joint
BBBBBBBLLLLLLAAAAAAAAOOOOOOO!!!

7/10-get more hype nigglet....

Track was straight flow is on point, but like he said you need to mesmorize ya lines then spit them, it adds emotion and hype to your track

i always memorize my lines....
not supposed to be very hype ( club track) its a gansta feel to it
so i dont need to be all "put ya hands in tha air" lol

word shadowcville beat is nice yo...

i didnt think u were lackin any hype..id say hiss reduct sum mo..word that morse code line is nice..hook is dope..your voice is so deep man....u recycled the "pretty thug/oxymoron" bar lol its s'all good, quality decent as always...ur flow is flawless all through but i aint herd a track recently where ur flow is off..dope listen mang..oh shit jus heard da christina milan line lol its pretty nice...:thumbup:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=188266

Return da fav homie 1

guessing this is gona be a diss track... shadowville production. dzk ripps this better than u already. flow was different seems scrambled. lyrics are kinda weak. guess this aint a diss track. end of the show lines were aight. chorus is kinda slackin but nonetheless aint nothing unbearable. just not good. flow aint good at all in my oppinion, shot gun line was played n g ay. if there was no beat to this it would be straight terrible. christina line was gay coulda been worded better. same with the point gaurd line. vocals are kinda eq'd wierd or sumthin duznt sound like ur usual shyt. honestly this aint nothin special. n i say that only cuz ur so bigheaded n im sure ur IMing all ur net fags tellin em to vote for it cuz its "so hot!" pz

p.s. once again u recycled lines. u need to get over this writers block n write some new shyt homie!

um omen ur wack....
really i dont care what some white kid in fuckn maryland or w/e says about my shit.. gg

yes... but deep down you know that i am in the essence of your thoughts speakin the truth about your weaknesses. and this hurts you... truth hurts they say correct? n ill say whatever tha hell i feel like sayin cuz ur a bytch n i give my respect to everybody who deserves it. however u do not deserve shyt from me. so ill holla!

obviously u peep every damn track i put out lol
get off my nuts son
just cuz i refused to eq ur shit and collab wif u LOL
get a life son... gg
And u just say the opposite of other ppls feed... you prob dont even listen to the tracks chump
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nah, i just like to give everyone honest feedback. ive never been on ur nuts, ive never asked u to collab on a track more than u have asked me to. n i can eq my own shyt so i def dont need nuffin from u. sorry if u fell off before u ever got on. but wen ur a talentless hack thats what tends to happen homo. ill holla :)

o yea, if i didnt listen to the tracks how come i always quote lines from tracks? hmmm riddle me that sackman.

how about u get a life and quit freeposting ya net thug
gg nutsack Mcjones

lol at freeposting between u n ur fudgepacker debit... aight honestly 20, lets make an agreement rite here cuz this shyt is tedious. from here on out we either have a battle n just shut both our asses up or we can be men n just quite actin like bitches. cuz all this bitchin aint gettin either of us n e where. im not on ur nuts ur not on my nuts. coo? word lets just agree to stay out of eachothers threads with hate. sound reasonable?

ight w/e man, we done
i dont even care anymore. coo

I aint talking bout that but sometimes on ya club tracks you seem laid back...and it gives my an image of a nigga with their back to the wall rapping, cause he cant get a dance

wow...omen really bitched out...i'm glad u think of me omen when i'm not around...shows how much u care about me...ur on 20's nuts and my nuts...everywhere i leave feed at u leave feed after me talking shit....u stalk me through threads...d/r....and u leave feed on all of 20's tracks...saying the opposite as what everyone else thinks...except for "Robbin and Theaving" u said that was a good track on the first page and then when tha q started beefing u said it sucked....hmmm...looks like d/r to me....anyways....have a nice day

i'd like to add one more thing...all this talk coming from someone who has a blunt in his mouth but from afar it looks like a cock

^ dog this is ur homies track. do him a favor n dont clogg his threads up like a bytchmade asslicker that u r. give him sum feed n get off my nuts tryin to figure out how i think. cuz ur simple mind cant grasp the concept that im not out to stalk u i just leave feed on alot of ppls tracks. pz imbicile


oh yea. n ur last post... def already put that in 20s other track.... n u n 20 n wicked clowns cocks must b the only ones uve seen cuz regular cocks are alot bigger than that.....funny kid.....how old r u now......4 ana half? word. ill hit up planetplay for ur 5th...yea holler at me with ur toy cellphone......bytch

Not bad. I like it........

LIke the beat.. Done it Before...
Vocals arnt very Clear, But the Lyrics are cool
Flow is on Point.. Nice..
OVerall Quality on the Track could Use some work..
OVerall Good Track.. Keep Dropping Hommie..

ok...time to shut ya punk ass up omen...u said u leave feed on alot of tracks but here's proof that u follow me through threads and talk shit before u even leave feed on the track





that was in the triple n thread for triples freestyle....here's another one from ckai's cold outside thread








need i say more

^ funny how i definately left feed back on both those threads like i said i did. sorry if i took an extra post or two to clown on u.. for real i dont wanna deal with ur crack ass wanna b lloyd banks ass n e more. im dun with ur childish shyt. now show ur homie some respect n stop freepostin in his threads, ur doin it more than I. n i am not proud of myself for wasting space in a thread that could have been a persons feedback. sumbody needs to go thru all these wack ass threads that were beefin in n erase this bullshyt n just never speak to eachother again. ur proof is nuttin. ur just an idiot. if u wanna talk shyt n keep duckin a battle w/ me then post a thread about it n get at me. cuz till then im not responding to ur wack ass comments n e more kapish?

lmao...ur a pussy...u talk all that shit and then wanna stop the beef...why are u so worried about feedback...u don't get none...lol...told u i had proof u dumb shit and u said all that before u left feed asshole...i got a diss track in the works for u now so their's my respone to ya wanna be thug ass

yo....pretty dope song....maybe not best from u but really good....maybe not that much motion like i hope but good....flow and whole song was pretty dope......8/10....good song...keep spitting....iv check next song too..........

debit i told u, no diss track.... battle track, whoever loses gets banned from this site... or are u afraid of that? c'mon put sumthin on tha line or else its just a waste of time to diss a lame...

btw, ur in for it. reguardless i just wrote my lyrics up so battle or not ur gettin humilliated....byyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyytttttchchhhhhhhh! !! better hurry my track will be out today. llol

beat is coo... too shady tho... ya flow is on point... ya vocals is a lil low... try usin a d-esser on ya voc's too, the s sound is overpowering... i ain't feelin that/.... lyrically is pretty simple but still good... addlibs is coo... hook is pretty coo, but yea ya levels an' the s sound make it hard to hear ya alot the time... other then that... is coo... pz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189383
^PEEP THAT

jea ima respit dis, cuz idk why my quality wasnt as good as it always is
i think just the beat is so bassy and shit