ight here we go

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm

called clap back

lil mike jone diss in there lol

anywayz holla back





LINKS:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=188428
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187385

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

ight lets do this hoecake.......

you should of got more hype on this track i recommend re-recording this ish and getting
a little more hype, flow was nice, consistant throughout the track, lloll who? mike jones
like that morse code line shit was nice, point guard line was nice too, lyrics are
Average-Good, beat choice is dope lol go shadowville productions nice track only thing
like i said is get more hype and your vocals sound a little hallow to me but nice joint
BBBBBBBLLLLLLAAAAAAAAOOOOOOO!!!

7/10-get more hype nigglet....

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O Know, He's Back!

Track was straight flow is on point, but like he said you need to mesmorize ya lines then spit them, it adds emotion and hype to your track

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i always memorize my lines....
not supposed to be very hype ( club track) its a gansta feel to it
so i dont need to be all "put ya hands in tha air" lol

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

word shadowcville beat is nice yo...

i didnt think u were lackin any hype..id say hiss reduct sum mo..word that morse code line is nice..hook is dope..your voice is so deep man....u recycled the "pretty thug/oxymoron" bar lol its s'all good, quality decent as always...ur flow is flawless all through but i aint herd a track recently where ur flow is off..dope listen mang..oh shit jus heard da christina milan line lol its pretty nice...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=188266

Return da fav homie 1

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guessing this is gona be a diss track... shadowville production. dzk ripps this better than u already. flow was different seems scrambled. lyrics are kinda weak. guess this aint a diss track. end of the show lines were aight. chorus is kinda slackin but nonetheless aint nothing unbearable. just not good. flow aint good at all in my oppinion, shot gun line was played n g ay. if there was no beat to this it would be straight terrible. christina line was gay coulda been worded better. same with the point gaurd line. vocals are kinda eq'd wierd or sumthin duznt sound like ur usual shyt. honestly this aint nothin special. n i say that only cuz ur so bigheaded n im sure ur IMing all ur net fags tellin em to vote for it cuz its "so hot!" pz

p.s. once again u recycled lines. u need to get over this writers block n write some new shyt homie!

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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um omen ur wack....
really i dont care what some white kid in fuckn maryland or w/e says about my shit.. gg

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

yes... but deep down you know that i am in the essence of your thoughts speakin the truth about your weaknesses. and this hurts you... truth hurts they say correct? n ill say whatever tha hell i feel like sayin cuz ur a bytch n i give my respect to everybody who deserves it. however u do not deserve shyt from me. so ill holla!

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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obviously u peep every damn track i put out lol
get off my nuts son
just cuz i refused to eq ur shit and collab wif u LOL
get a life son... gg
And u just say the opposite of other ppls feed... you prob dont even listen to the tracks chump
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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

nah, i just like to give everyone honest feedback. ive never been on ur nuts, ive never asked u to collab on a track more than u have asked me to. n i can eq my own shyt so i def dont need nuffin from u. sorry if u fell off before u ever got on. but wen ur a talentless hack thats what tends to happen homo. ill holla

o yea, if i didnt listen to the tracks how come i always quote lines from tracks? hmmm riddle me that sackman.

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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how about u get a life and quit freeposting ya net thug
gg nutsack Mcjones

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

lol at freeposting between u n ur fudgepacker debit... aight honestly 20, lets make an agreement rite here cuz this shyt is tedious. from here on out we either have a battle n just shut both our asses up or we can be men n just quite actin like bitches. cuz all this bitchin aint gettin either of us n e where. im not on ur nuts ur not on my nuts. coo? word lets just agree to stay out of eachothers threads with hate. sound reasonable?

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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ight w/e man, we done
i dont even care anymore. coo

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

I aint talking bout that but sometimes on ya club tracks you seem laid back...and it gives my an image of a nigga with their back to the wall rapping, cause he cant get a dance

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