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MC Mute vs Topical
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6 - 10Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 05-06-05 at 01:02 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Topical has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 05:06 PM.
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I dont expect this MC to show, like a pussy can grow balls or somthin And i'd tell him to shut up, but all i gota do is press the MUTE button I dont gota worry about keepin him quiet, cuz this MC is already silent Your not violent, and you couldnt be fly, even if this bitch was a jet pilot You lack in fortitude, and ima keep you workin for my personal servitude Just dont think im a movie star for the way i have just "Served" this dude |
MC Mute has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-03-05 06:14 PM.
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They say MC Mute never shows, he just phones it in
Hits the delete button on the keypad and he just sends His opponents straight down to the Recycle Bin Now step back kid, it's about to get violent So go ahead and get a priest and the violin A pine box for a casket and some of his men Some wine in a box and a suit to bury him in Just another victim of the silent villain But what's that I see on your head, it's the infared red So turn the volume off and whisper a prayer the topic is dead |
uppin............................................. ........
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vote or leave feed ppls.............come one now..
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Voted For: Topical
topical-you threw some ok punches, 2nd bar was prolly your best layed out punch, opener couldve been better, closers multi's need to be more relevent to the bars punch, middle bar had a decent concept"one you couldve made more complex with lil effort"but overall you had a better verse. . mc mute-you didnt have any punches in your verse, no real creativity and it was very basic of a drop, try makin direct punches at you opponents verse, style or play off his name to make a puncxh n to make it relevent........ . overall very weak battle.. mc mute-go elevate, till then dont battle topical-battle more skilled heads..... |
thanks for the honest explained vote :thumbup: uppin for more
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This was feedback posted for Topical
nice work gentlemen. keep up the dope work topz.
UPPIN' FOR THESE BATTLECATS!!! s.v..................big bad c.s. |
Voted For: Topical
ight here my oppion...... topical...good structure punches were right on target and pretty funny......flow was on point very easy to follow... vocab was good also not simple but not overly maxed out opener was good and closer was also pretty on point overall dope verse......liked tha name play too mc mute.....flow was on for about 2 barz thats it,structure was off and it was very simple your punches were ight but not as effective as his....up your vocab and work on your punches but decent drop mute keep elevating |
Voted For: Topical
Mute- flow was aiight.....nothing special, vocab was basic, punches didnt hit hard at all....basically your verse was a bunch of filler. I can tell you are just starting out at this, so just read some of the good peoples battles and elevate. Topical- flow was pretty good, vocab wasnt bad, punches were aiight...they were pretty played but they were way better than the other guys. It seemed like you didnt really try for this one, i know you can drop harder than that. v/ Topical Plz hit the battle in my sig with an honest vote |
Voted For: Topical
votin for Topical Topical got this dfue to harder punches and personals Topical ya punches were hard hittin, creative n well worded ya personals wernt as strong but creative and got the point across ya flow was good ya had a very nice beat goin on that matched ya strucutre ya strucutre was nice and even , easy to read didnt see any multies so elevate on those or try to get em in ya verse i like this Punch I dont expect this MC to show, like a pussy can grow balls or somthin And i'd tell him to shut up, but all i gota do is press the MUTE button (good opener, hard hittin punch) Mute ya punches wernt that hard you seemed focues on a computer while righting this verse nuttin was hard hittin man ya personals didnt see any man ya gotta get some of them in ya verse if u wanna win ya flow and structure was good but ya lacked punches and personals multies didnt see of those so elevate on those elevate onya punches, personals, multies jus elevate on ya game a lil bit fam Topical gets the vote, better punches and personals BE SURE TO RTF link below sig |
Voted For: Topical
wow easy one to vote on....... topical killed this with harder punches and everything simple as that... |
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