I posted this in the Emcee intro thread, but no one replied and only 5 people even looked at it. I didn't think I was THAT bad bad, but who knows. Anyways...newbie just lookin' for some feedback, even if it's all negative.

Testing testing cough cough...hello
My name is MC Mute, but you already know
That so let's see, uh...moving on
To the fad of the day, tommorow I'll be gone

Like the pokemon of rap
Oh snap I shouldn't have said that
Cuz you know that now it'll stick
And every other battle I'll have to deal with it

Maybe I should've called myself DJ bored
Or mc snores-a-alot-woke-up-and-hit-the-floor
What in the hell did he say that for?
Oh uh...I just wanted to say snoresaalotwokeupandhitthefloor

Yeah that's the kid that won the longest name award
MC Mute is killin' y'all with the volume off
'till somebody on RV sneaks up on him w/ some beef stogonoff
I can't believe he just spit a line about some pasta sauce

You might see my words but you'll never hear me speak
You might hear my name in the news but you'll never hear me sneak
Up to your girlfriends house, now I'm gonna take a peak
Up to the window where I hear a squeak

She's on the phone "Nah, it was just MC Mute"
"Tryin' ta spit some game, he must think he's think cute"
Sigh, I'm dissed, so I sneak away
To make plans to sneak up on her some other day

OK then, it's time to lie about my resume
And how I make girls scream oooh la la like tresemme
Or how I've averted more apocalypses than Buffy
And jumped on more tracks than Puffy

I told XXL to tell L'il Jon to step his game up
Then I rolled over to Atl and told I-20 to step his name up
I'm gonna call my first album "Ahhhh! Stop the insanity"
And pull a p diddy and change my name to Parody

Cuz I'm a rap parody
of 20 plus years of hip hop hilarity
Bling bank bitches and bullets
The rides they're in and the straps they're pullin'

So there it is my little intro
It may be basic but it's not the end tho
Hit me back in this thread or catch me on Yahoo(!)
And uh...yeah I'm through