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Black Queen vs Young Blaze
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10-Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting The jury vs ILLUNITICS Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 05-06-05 at 09:59 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-05 08:57 PM.
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Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-05-05 10:10 AM.
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Most of your battle are with Newbies and Wack Emcees
you lack plenty, hold no Punches like a Pitcher that's half empty You ain't got PHAT shit your verse is Stretch like a FAT kid i rap quick, call you Warm-Up cuz you need more Practice and my punches are like music..they leave lasting re-percussions And when vets talk of his skills..its all ancient history discussions and to tell your the truth, you aren't really my homie i'll break your legs, and get you to walk man, like sony so i'll break you off easy, and you'd better be left dead watch me drop knowledge on him, and hope it hits his head |
Ight Crew BAttle TikZ ....what up .....Solo What up....Teph what up...
Here sum Punchs..... When I spit, I even make the "ground sick" like I "puked on rubble” Cuz Tikz will just "silence ya clique"(click) like "muting seat buckles Shove my fist through her gums make em hand me her chewins Queen is ruined i'll "open her chest" and leave her"showing more heart" than a "Family Reunion”…. Any 1 of yall Boys Come Disarm Me holdin them Toys Than Point Em And Harm Me… yall never Grew-Nuts, i'll leave ya `CREW-CUT,` like `T.J.` was Joinin Da Army…(the jury) Rippin threw yah blouse’s,Queens body parts found In Couches. Leave Her “Scared Ta Post” Like “Fence Builders”Near Haunted House’s…. Make Black lose it when I spray flame leave this lame Ho useless… U can hate..but I'll stay ahead of "B" like Straight "A" Students…. |
This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
Daaaaaaaamn, okay, we won the crew battle already, so this is basically for y'all records.....
not bein biased towards fam, but Black Queen, you came basic as fuck....Blaze should have this one in the baaaag... checkin polls... |
uppin fo votes kiddies nice verse blaze............
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This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
clsoe battle really close
metaphor-young blaze opener-queen ender-queen vocab-blaze punchlines-blaze flow-queen strucutre-queen flow transition-blaze overall=blaze i have to kick it out to blaze on this one but a really close battle |
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Voted For: Black Queen
BLACK QUEEN Most of your battle are with Newbies and Wack Emcees you lack plenty, hold no Punches like a Pitcher that's half empty ^^seemed a lil forced to rhyme..not a great punch 4/10 You ain't got PHAT shit your verse is Stretch like a FAT kid i rap quick, call you Warm-Up cuz you need more Practice ^^lil forced to rhyme again...lil beta punch 5/10 and my punches are like music..they leave lasting re-percussions And when vets talk of his skills..its all ancient history discussions ^^decent bar...decent punch 6/10 and to tell your the truth, you aren't really my homie i'll break your legs, and get you to walk man, like sony ^^gud wordplay..but not a great punch 5/10 so i'll break you off easy, and you'd better be left dead watch me drop knowledge on him, and hope it hits his head ^^o.k closer..5/10 overall...25/50...50%...picked up a lil towards the end... you could do with uppin your creativitie..few gud concepts but the way u worded em let u down, also couple bars seemed a bit forced to rhyme YOUNG BLAZE When I spit, I even make the "ground sick" like I "puked on rubble” Cuz Tikz will just "silence ya clique"(click) like "muting seat buckles ^^wordplay impressive...but i felt this was a lil self glory...5/10 Shove my fist through her gums make em hand me her chewins Queen is ruined i'll "open her chest" and leave her"showing more heart" than a "Family Reunion”…. ^^not really a diss...more a statement 4/10 Any 1 of yall Boys Come Disarm Me holdin them Toys Than Point Em And Harm Me… yall never Grew-Nuts, i'll leave ya `CREW-CUT,` like `T.J.` was Joinin Da Army…(the jury) ^^again gud wordplay..but this isnt a punch or diss..4/10 Rippin threw yah blouse’s,Queens body parts found In Couches. Leave Her “Scared Ta Post” Like “Fence Builders”Near Haunted House’s…. ^^lovin the wordplay again...for that ive gotta give u 6/10..but still not really a diss..upp ya personals Make Black lose it when I spray flame leave this lame Ho useless… U can hate..but I'll stay ahead of "B" like Straight "A" Students…. ^^nah...great wordplay,but more self-glory that a direct punch..4/10 overall...23/50... close battle...i really wanted to go with blaze coz u got sum sick wordplay...but i cudnt spot a direct punch at your opponent, ya lines were kinda self glory or statements, neither of u had personals..but black queens hit were more directed at her opponent.. vote black queen..no hate RETURN AN HONEST ONE BOTH Y`ALL PLEEEEEEEZ http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188596 |
thx fo da vote pimp ill return dat favor uppin fo more votes
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Voted For: Young Blaze
it's clear who the winner is... Young Blaze the metaphors were too sick your verse was the most creative and hard hitting.. the "silence ya clique">"muting seat belts" the Family Reunion line was sick you had some multis that i was feeling. the "scared to post" like "fence builders" near haunted house line was an OH MY GAWD line... creative with metaphors is always a plus, no played lines from what i saw.. the closer was good as well, just not as hard hitting as the first portion of your verse.. black queen your verse was pretty basic, with the metaphors and what not, nothing stood out as creative or a nice twist in your lines, you didn't come near as hard as you have in the past. the walk-man line is played tto death as well as the "dropping knowledge line" that's why i feel you lost, you had some played lines here and there, just work on coming with some more creative punchlines and if you do decide to use played concepts make a good twist at least... this was one-sided however, winner = Young Blaze |
Voted For: Young Blaze
dayum i dont like votin but i was jus lookin through some battles and damn. Young blaze came gutta with them punches..soon as i saw the seat buckles line i was like OH SHIT. LOL...nice shit famz...only thing you gotta work on is your structure...shit aint workin for me...good use of multi's and flow though drama: No. garbage. i noticed that you are a topical head. and its evident. umm you shoulda used some vocab though that could of upped your chances. but your verse wasnt good at all. overall young blaze took this easily vote: blaze |
you called her drama, it's black queen not drama, konflikts..
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^^^im not drama queen im black queen did you even read da verses
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Voted For: Young Blaze
Punches-Blaze...had sum hot punches dat did damage Multis-Both...yall tied in this category Creativity-Blaze...making them creative punches what got u this category vote: Blaze |
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This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
I wanted ta vote but my post count aint high enough!!
Young blazed this gurl....simple in fact Queen had sum personals but really didnt make any diff. this line killed it for her(Make Black lose it when I spray flame leave this lame Ho useless… U can hate..but I'll stay ahead of "B" like Straight "A" Students….) ^^That was Nice!!!^^^ sorry no vote but my feedback is worth hearin! Queen you came in with a weak opener no punchez really maybe 1 but didnt land right!! hollah!! young blaze Holla at me if you wanna battle sumtimes. (I aint scared ta post...LOL!)that was nice 4 real! |
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^^^self glory...fuck she did tha same thing...thats baised^^^ |
^^^^ok lost n confused but uppin fo more votes .......
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This was feedback posted for Black Queen
queen get the win on this...i wasnt feelin the other one as much...
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Voted For: Black Queen
When I spit, I even make the "ground sick" like I "puked on rubble” Cuz Tikz will just "silence ya clique"(click) like "muting seat buckles 7/10...good 2nd punch but first was good werdplay but no meaning, lol Shove my fist through her gums make em hand me her chewins Queen is ruined i'll "open her chest" and leave her"showing more heart" than a "Family Reunion”…. 6/10...first line was bad, 2nd was good but strecthed Any 1 of yall Boys Come Disarm Me holdin them Toys Than Point Em And Harm Me… yall never Grew-Nuts, i'll leave ya `CREW-CUT,` like `T.J.` was Joinin Da Army…(the jury) 6/10...eehh Rippin threw yah blouse’s,Queens body parts found In Couches. Leave Her “Scared Ta Post” Like “Fence Builders”Near Haunted House’s…. 7/10...lmao, nice punch, Make Black lose it when I spray flame leave this lame Ho useless… U can hate..but I'll stay ahead of "B" like Straight "A" Students…. 7/10...decent 33/50 overall nice verse, fwew fillers here adn there adn a few stretcehd lines but overall it was nice Most of your battle are with Newbies and Wack Emcees you lack plenty, hold no Punches like a Pitcher that's half empty 6/10...wack 1st line, second was better and played but you did it originally You ain't got PHAT shit your verse is Stretch like a FAT kid i rap quick, call you Warm-Up cuz you need more Practice 7/10...nice and my punches are like music..they leave lasting re-percussions And when vets talk of his skills..its all ancient history discussions 8/10...nice werdplay and good flow and rhyme scheme and to tell your the truth, you aren't really my homie i'll break your legs, and get you to walk man, like sony 7/10...filler, 2nd line was nice though so i'll break you off easy, and you'd better be left dead watch me drop knowledge on him, and hope it hits his head 7/10...good closer 36/50 good punches and good structure and flow, very good verse overal-close as battle ya'll, when i came to vote id thought this wood be good and sure enuff it was, nice battle both competitors plz rtf, i have one in my sig and another one (you can seaarch)that is easy to decide....plz rtf |
Voted For: Black Queen
blakk queen got dis 1 n a bag blakk queen-aight good openor shit was kind of hot u had sum good punches threw da whole thing sum personals n ya verse 2 u came hard n dis battle n da 1st line u did have a multie and n a couple otha lines u had a multie or 2 good shit u had a overall betta verse den young blaze ya shit wasnt stretched like hiz most of it was direcetd towards him n not hiz crew kept it good threw da whole thing young blaze- ya shit was aight man till u started cumin at her crew n not her ya punches was kind of plain nun dat caught mah eye no personals dat i seen dat i liked da whole verse was kind of plain fix ya structure as i told u b4 have sum betta punches and personals n ya verse cum hard everi battle and u gon win vote- blakk queen |
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This was feedback posted for Black Queen
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Voted For: Young Blaze
IIght... YB: Verse was nice, I have seen much better from you, but you still dropped a pretty decent verse...Only thing I really didnt like was how a couple lines were stretched, which fucked up the flow in some spots. However, you had nice personals, good wordplay, and were consistent with your punches. Therefore, you get my vote. Black Queen: Again, this was not your best. I felt that you fell off because you lacked hard-hitting punches, which is not a normal thing for you. Personals were not there, and the wordplay was mediocre at best. I was surprised at your verse. V/ Young Blaze |
Voted For: Young Blaze
When I spit, I even make the "ground sick" like I "puked on rubble” Cuz Tikz will just "silence ya clique"(click) like "muting seat buckles Shove my fist through her gums make em hand me her chewins Queen is ruined i'll "open her chest" and leave her"showing more heart" than a "Family Reunion”…. Any 1 of yall Boys Come Disarm Me holdin them Toys Than Point Em And Harm Me… yall never Grew-Nuts, i'll leave ya `CREW-CUT,` like `T.J.` was Joinin Da Army…(the jury) Rippin threw yah blouse’s,Queens body parts found In Couches. Leave Her “Scared Ta Post” Like “Fence Builders”Near Haunted House’s…. Make Black lose it when I spray flame leave this lame Ho useless… U can hate..but I'll stay ahead of "B" like Straight "A" Students…. Yo Dem Punz Wuz Fiyah Dawg, Real Good Flow, Nice Hard Hittin Wordplay, Everythin Wuz Witty & On Point, Cant Be Faulted Dawgy, Dope Verse Most of your battle are with Newbies and Wack Emcees you lack plenty, hold no Punches like a Pitcher that's half empty You ain't got PHAT shit your verse is Stretch like a FAT kid i rap quick, call you Warm-Up cuz you need more Practice and my punches are like music..they leave lasting re-percussions And when vets talk of his skills..its all ancient history discussions and to tell your the truth, you aren't really my homie i'll break your legs, and get you to walk man, like sony so i'll break you off easy, and you'd better be left dead watch me drop knowledge on him, and hope it hits his head Iight, U Had Sum Good Stuff Gurl, Pretty Decent Rhymez, It Wuzza Lil Basic, Nuthin' Caught My Eye, Need 2 Come Wid Better Wordplay & More Creative Pun'z Vote/ Y.B Hit Up Da Battlez In Mah Signature |
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