confidential vs DA RIPPA
 

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Check in by: 05-06-05 at 04:19 PM

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DA RIPPA has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-06-05 01:20 PM.

hey hey hey

yo

i bet
*look like a hot dog stuck in a tub of potted meat*
*with chewed up tobbaca for hair and loofs of brerad for feet*

*it a shame how my flow make ya ass stagger*
*damn you a young buck why tha hell are you taking viagra*

*i'll put bullets through your body like rocks going through soup*
*the closes you ever got to pussy is when your mom had you*

*now that my nig is a got-damn shame*
*after i beat you i outto take your name*

*this shoud be blow out.........if you don't choke*
*but you won't....you use to having shit shove down your throat*
*
i'm the king in this bitch and that's the truth*
*and it's a shame how my dick thouches your mom more than you do*

*the way i just ass raped you on this is pittiful*
*but bitch don''t worry i'll keep it confidential*


duece up kick rock

confidential has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-06-05 03:05 PM.

yo imma put da beat'in on him like an abusive freak
check, u couldnt have a straight line writting ya verse from a barber seat
ya skills..WAS HOT, now they not..dont fight it
cause bein on this internet shit for too long it looks like u caught the virus
Now u'll get bash N stab in a flash just 2 crash G's, a win u'll grasp
da rippa?, hey give him a hand, cause where his used to be, now there's only a gash
Then I up n pop at G, and I don't mean a smart remark from Uncle Phil or Ant Viv
No amount of WILL will help, even jackson would say he wouldnt LICK-SHOT on this kid *get it*
N this bitch i blame, cuz off a FREE why was ya weak "blows" are "brought-up"
wanna try and scram on me .. im like tyson best 2 believe i'll fuck this borad-up
so hold up...
ya punches aint popp'in me, plus u cant be stoppin me, u ObSoLeTe
only way yall can win is if u bite me, so u better of trying to make copies of my teeth BITCH

upp'in this battle plez dont sleep on it this was preety good

upp'in this battle dont sleep fellas................................

Voted For: confidential



yo imma put da beat'in on him like an abusive freak
check, u couldnt have a straight line writting ya verse from a barber seat
^^OK punch,didn't flow too well
ya skills..WAS HOT, now they not..dont fight it
cause bein on this internet shit for too long it looks like u caught the virus
^^again,nice punch...didn't flow
Now u'll get bash N stab in a flash just 2 crash G's, a win u'll grasp
da rippa?, hey give him a hand, cause where his used to be, now there's only a gash
^^not feelin this one,didn't hit hard and didn't flow
Then I up n pop at G, and I don't mean a smart remark from Uncle Phil or Ant Viv
No amount of WILL will help, even jackson would say he wouldnt LICK-SHOT on this kid *get it*
^^nice,prob. the best line ya had.flow was off a bit
N this bitch i blame, cuz off a FREE why was ya weak "blows" are "brought-up"
wanna try and scram on me .. im like tyson best 2 believe i'll fuck this borad-up
^^weak
so hold up...
ya punches aint popp'in me, plus u cant be stoppin me, u ObSoLeTe
only way yall can win is if u bite me, so u better of trying to make copies of my teeth BITCH
^^nice closer,unlike the rest...this line actuaaly flowed

Conclusion-U need to flow son.Try to trim down ya lines a bit.u punches were Ok,ya got some creativity in there as well.Not saying they are the best in the world,but flow hurt ya in this battle.

*look like a hot dog stuck in a tub of potted meat*
*with chewed up tobbaca for hair and loofs of brerad for feet*
^^nah..weak ass punch
*it a shame how my flow make ya ass stagger*
*damn you a young buck why tha hell are you taking viagra*
6^nope....don't just state shit...use wordplay and metas so u indirectly say it.I dun kno..it hard to explain.read tutorials
*i'll put bullets through your body like rocks going through soup*
*the closes you ever got to pussy is when your mom had you*
^^This wat I'm talkin bout.Real nice punch
*now that my nig is a got-damn shame*
*after i beat you i outto take your name*
^^wat?weak
*this shoud be blow out.........if you don't choke*
*but you won't....you use to having shit shove down your throat*
*^^ again...weak man
i'm the king in this bitch and that's the truth*
*and it's a shame how my dick thouches your mom more than you do*
^^Ok,ya already got a mama joke in there,1 is enough.
*the way i just ass raped you on this is pittiful*
*but bitch don''t worry i'll keep it confidential*
^^U had a decent opener,punchline itself didssapionted

Conclusion-Like I said ,don't state stuff...use wordplay and metas.Indirectly say it.U had a better flow then the other guy..I'll give ya that.But ya punchlines were too simple,like a begginer does it.

Vote-Confidential

This was feedback posted for confidential
 

shit....that was sum gud shit man.

rofl @ the closer

uppin for votes

yo uppin for vote
now lets see it

Voted For: DA RIPPA

vote for da rippa


lol damn nice battle from both but Da rippa had way more punches that hit harder and were funny as hell

rippa
punches were off the hook ya had a nice hard hittin verse n lol some punches where hard and even made me laugh

rippa punch line:
i'm the king in this bitch and that's the truth*
*and it's a shame how my dick thouches your mom more than you do*
(LMFAO lol man creative and funny)

ya flow was good but ya strucutre was a lil off, ya wordplay was nice as well

i like you personals and how u went after the moms lol

Con
ya hard nice punches but they were off and one man some hard some not i didnt see any hard personals u had one or 2 but none where hard hittin man elevate on harder personals
ya flow was good and ya structure a lil choppy, descent wordplay but lackin wit vocab

Punches- Rippa
Personals- neither
Multies- Neither
Wordplay- Rippa
Strucutre- neither
flow- Tie

good battle fams but rippa gets it i was feelin his punches more then cons

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^^ thanks for voting,
dont agree with u on some of ya thought about the battle
but,
THANKS FOR YA HONEST VOTE..

hope ya aint just exchange vote just to get votes

* im not assuming just letting u know thats is the PUSSY WAY no disrepect to u if u aint do it*


upp'in for more honest votes

upp'in............................................

yo let me here it

upp'in this battle yet again and again and again..

Voted For: DA RIPPA

rippa gets a win for this one, i cant really folllow the other...maybe my brain just doesnt work right..

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Voted For: DA RIPPA

confidential:
yo imma put da beat'in on him like an abusive freak
check, u couldnt have a straight line writting ya verse from a barber seat
^^^^DA SECOND LINE WAS KIND OF CREATIVE...BUT IT WAS WORDED HORRIBLE...
ya skills..WAS HOT, now they not..dont fight it
cause bein on this internet shit for too long it looks like u caught the virus
^^^^^WACK AS FUKK....AND IT WAS 2 LONG
Now u'll get bash N stab in a flash just 2 crash G's, a win u'll grasp
da rippa?, hey give him a hand, cause where his used to be, now there's only a gash
^^^WHUT????????
Then I up n pop at G, and I don't mean a smart remark from Uncle Phil or Ant Viv
No amount of WILL will help, even jackson would say he wouldnt LICK-SHOT on this kid *get it*
^^^MICHEAL JACKSON LINES R PLAYED AS FUKK FAM
N this bitch i blame, cuz off a FREE why was ya weak "blows" are "brought-up"
wanna try and scram on me .. im like tyson best 2 believe i'll fuck this borad-up
^^DECENT....
so hold up...
ya punches aint popp'in me, plus u cant be stoppin me, u ObSoLeTe
only way yall can win is if u bite me, so u better of trying to make copies of my teeth
^^^NO...VERY WEAK CLOSER


rippa:
*look like a hot dog stuck in a tub of potted meat*
*with chewed up tobbaca for hair and loofs of brerad for feet*
^^^LOL WHUT...
*it a shame how my flow make ya ass stagger*
*damn you a young buck why tha hell are you taking viagra*
^^^^WACK.....
*i'll put bullets through your body like rocks going through soup*
*the closes you ever got to pussy is when your mom had you*
^^^^KIND OF FUNNY...BUT DIS A PLAYED JOKE
*now that my nig is a got-damn shame*
*after i beat you i outto take your name*
^^^^NAH
*this shoud be blow out.........if you don't choke*
*but you won't....you use to having shit shove down your throat*
^^^LOL...WACK
*
i'm the king in this bitch and that's the truth*
*and it's a shame how my dick thouches your mom more than you do*
^^^LMAOOOOOO...
*the way i just ass raped you on this is pittiful*
*but bitch don''t worry i'll keep it confidential*
^^^DECENT...CLOSER....U HAD DA ONLY PERSONAL OF DA BATTLE


V/DA RIPPA....4 HAVIN A PERSONAL AND 4 HAVIN A NEAT STRUCTURE AND NOT STRETCHIN HIS BARS.....

Voted For: DA RIPPA

aight da rippa took dis

da rippa-hiz verse was all ova da plave like cons he had sum punches dey wasnt hot tho but he did have sum he also had sum personals bout hiz name dont space out ya bars like dat cuz u have 2 keep dem all as 1 big as paragraph but go 2 da next line afta each closin bar

confidential-dat shit was tired man period u aint have no punches dat caught mah eye just a bunch of facts n ya verse have sum punches n ya verse 2 make it hot also have sum personals and dont stretch ya bars out like i told da rippa

vote- da rippa

uppin for vote let me hear it

Voted For: DA RIPPA

Man this Battle Was Alright Both Verses Were Coo! but my vote goes to
Vote:Confidential
Wordplay)6/10>Da Rippa
Rhyme Scheme)6.5>Confidential
Punches)7/10>Confidential
Da Rippa had Some Punches but were really played out for example:*the closes you ever got to pussy is when your mom had you*<<Used That Back Inda Day! no Hate But im just bein Real With Ya!Well Holla Atcha Boy N Herez Da Link To ma Battle:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190886
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190886

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upp'in this battle mang................................

Voted For: confidential

V/confidential.....this was an ight battle con gets my vote cause he came wit harder punchs an they were consistent an creative but u need to work on your structure.....Da Rippa...u need to work on ur punchs u need to Set them up better instead of puttin Fillers an u were to creative wit them it felt like u came to weak.....NO hate........
RETURN THE FAVOR......
Opener=C
Closer=C
Structure=C
Punchs=C
Vocab=C
Multi's=Tie (not many)
Personals=D
Wordplay=Tie
Overall=Confidential

Thanks For Ya Honest Votes....

Upp'in This Battle.......

Voted For: confidential

Con-Errrr you need to work on your structure, some of your punches was played out, but MOSTLY of them were effective. The flow was off man. Nice wordplays keep doing that, add more personals in your verse.

Da rippa- Errrr ok verse. Punches were played, some of them were weak, you had 1 good bar of punch, but blah. The flow wa blah, stop paceing your bars man. Um what else? You need to work on punches.


Overall=This battle is one-sided because Con came harder with punches and wordplays. Da rippa you had an "ok" verse but your punches wasn't as hard as con's, so my vote goes to con.

Return a fav con, links in sig.

Voted For: confidential

Yo My Vote Goes Too Confidential Hiz Shit Actually Rhymed bBut Ay Few Of Hiz Punchez Wuz Played Lyke Using Mike Jackson But Hiz Verse Wuz Much Mo Constitant Wit Da Flow Hiz Punchez Hit Mucxh Harder An Fo Da Most Part They Wuz Pretty Creative An DA RIPPA U Need'a Make Yo Shit Rhyme, Only A Few Of Yo Linez Actually Rhymed And Dat Iz Not Good

I Voted So Vote Back At Da Battlez In My Sig Pleaze