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Check in by: 05-06-05 at 04:19 PM

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DA RIPPA has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-06-05 01:20 PM.

hey hey hey

yo

i bet
*look like a hot dog stuck in a tub of potted meat*
*with chewed up tobbaca for hair and loofs of brerad for feet*

*it a shame how my flow make ya ass stagger*
*damn you a young buck why tha hell are you taking viagra*

*i'll put bullets through your body like rocks going through soup*
*the closes you ever got to pussy is when your mom had you*

*now that my nig is a got-damn shame*
*after i beat you i outto take your name*

*this shoud be blow out.........if you don't choke*
*but you won't....you use to having shit shove down your throat*
*
i'm the king in this bitch and that's the truth*
*and it's a shame how my dick thouches your mom more than you do*

*the way i just ass raped you on this is pittiful*
*but bitch don''t worry i'll keep it confidential*


duece up kick rock

confidential has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-06-05 03:05 PM.

yo imma put da beat'in on him like an abusive freak
check, u couldnt have a straight line writting ya verse from a barber seat
ya skills..WAS HOT, now they not..dont fight it
cause bein on this internet shit for too long it looks like u caught the virus
Now u'll get bash N stab in a flash just 2 crash G's, a win u'll grasp
da rippa?, hey give him a hand, cause where his used to be, now there's only a gash
Then I up n pop at G, and I don't mean a smart remark from Uncle Phil or Ant Viv
No amount of WILL will help, even jackson would say he wouldnt LICK-SHOT on this kid *get it*
N this bitch i blame, cuz off a FREE why was ya weak "blows" are "brought-up"
wanna try and scram on me .. im like tyson best 2 believe i'll fuck this borad-up
so hold up...
ya punches aint popp'in me, plus u cant be stoppin me, u ObSoLeTe
only way yall can win is if u bite me, so u better of trying to make copies of my teeth BITCH

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upp'in this battle plez dont sleep on it this was preety good

upp'in this battle dont sleep fellas................................

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Voted For: confidential



yo imma put da beat'in on him like an abusive freak
check, u couldnt have a straight line writting ya verse from a barber seat
^^OK punch,didn't flow too well
ya skills..WAS HOT, now they not..dont fight it
cause bein on this internet shit for too long it looks like u caught the virus
^^again,nice punch...didn't flow
Now u'll get bash N stab in a flash just 2 crash G's, a win u'll grasp
da rippa?, hey give him a hand, cause where his used to be, now there's only a gash
^^not feelin this one,didn't hit hard and didn't flow
Then I up n pop at G, and I don't mean a smart remark from Uncle Phil or Ant Viv
No amount of WILL will help, even jackson would say he wouldnt LICK-SHOT on this kid *get it*
^^nice,prob. the best line ya had.flow was off a bit
N this bitch i blame, cuz off a FREE why was ya weak "blows" are "brought-up"
wanna try and scram on me .. im like tyson best 2 believe i'll fuck this borad-up
^^weak
so hold up...
ya punches aint popp'in me, plus u cant be stoppin me, u ObSoLeTe
only way yall can win is if u bite me, so u better of trying to make copies of my teeth BITCH
^^nice closer,unlike the rest...this line actuaaly flowed

Conclusion-U need to flow son.Try to trim down ya lines a bit.u punches were Ok,ya got some creativity in there as well.Not saying they are the best in the world,but flow hurt ya in this battle.

*look like a hot dog stuck in a tub of potted meat*
*with chewed up tobbaca for hair and loofs of brerad for feet*
^^nah..weak ass punch
*it a shame how my flow make ya ass stagger*
*damn you a young buck why tha hell are you taking viagra*
6^nope....don't just state shit...use wordplay and metas so u indirectly say it.I dun kno..it hard to explain.read tutorials
*i'll put bullets through your body like rocks going through soup*
*the closes you ever got to pussy is when your mom had you*
^^This wat I'm talkin bout.Real nice punch
*now that my nig is a got-damn shame*
*after i beat you i outto take your name*
^^wat?weak
*this shoud be blow out.........if you don't choke*
*but you won't....you use to having shit shove down your throat*
*^^ again...weak man
i'm the king in this bitch and that's the truth*
*and it's a shame how my dick thouches your mom more than you do*
^^Ok,ya already got a mama joke in there,1 is enough.
*the way i just ass raped you on this is pittiful*
*but bitch don''t worry i'll keep it confidential*
^^U had a decent opener,punchline itself didssapionted

Conclusion-Like I said ,don't state stuff...use wordplay and metas.Indirectly say it.U had a better flow then the other guy..I'll give ya that.But ya punchlines were too simple,like a begginer does it.

Vote-Confidential

shit....that was sum gud shit man.

rofl @ the closer

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Voted For: DA RIPPA

vote for da rippa


lol damn nice battle from both but Da rippa had way more punches that hit harder and were funny as hell

rippa
punches were off the hook ya had a nice hard hittin verse n lol some punches where hard and even made me laugh

rippa punch line:
i'm the king in this bitch and that's the truth*
*and it's a shame how my dick thouches your mom more than you do*
(LMFAO lol man creative and funny)

ya flow was good but ya strucutre was a lil off, ya wordplay was nice as well

i like you personals and how u went after the moms lol

Con
ya hard nice punches but they were off and one man some hard some not i didnt see any hard personals u had one or 2 but none where hard hittin man elevate on harder personals
ya flow was good and ya structure a lil choppy, descent wordplay but lackin wit vocab

Punches- Rippa
Personals- neither
Multies- Neither
Wordplay- Rippa
Strucutre- neither
flow- Tie

good battle fams but rippa gets it i was feelin his punches more then cons

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^^ holla at me if u wanna join....

DUCKED = RED BULL * LOL WHAT A LAME *

last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0

whos next!!