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..:..::Crack In The Flesh::..:.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189861 Somethin About My Walk.....Got Niggas Wishin My Legs Theirs Quick Flares...Send Bodies Shoppin 4 Routes To Heavens Stairs Yes, Ack Got Dat Crack That 'Swell Cilla' Until Each 'Nostrils Fat' On Point, Sure, Exact....Ya'll 'Under Tracks' While I 'OVER-LAP'! Give Dicks A Wack?..I 'Prevent Germs' From My 'Colgate Plaque' This Shit You Lack, I'm Itchin For Water Like A 'Purified Scratch'! Sink Kids Wit Shots................Wash Ya Children Up Wit Bullets Knock Out Uncontrollable Nuts....& Disrupt Da Dickheads Fluids! Trig Blast Spit Gats Through It, Jus Lay Down You About To Fall Toss Niggas Guts 'UP Da Stairs' Then Drop Em 'DOWN Da Hall'! Motions...I Neva Pause, Faggots Fuck Wit Me Dey Catchin Sars Literally Catchin Sars, Cuz My 'Jails Cancer'...Like 'Deadly Bars'! Sniff His Drug You Losin Arms.........Get High Off Ya Own Limbs Ack Shoot Chests-In, Then 'Feed Em Trees' Like Appetizer Timbs Smokin Ya Flesh.......Puff Combs......Nigga I'm Brushin Ya Flesh Open Mouth...Got Da Right To EMPTY BOWELS Til Nothin Is Left! Juelz? Like 'Live Drugs Laughin'....I'm Human Crack-In Da Flesh! *Last Line...Crackin Up Is When Somebody Laughin They Ass Off Feedback On Dis One...I Dont Wanna See This In Da Boondocks Like Last Time |
damn...Ack yur sick wit metas lol...structure was PERFECT...only seen better from OneStepBeyond lol...9/10...rtf
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now dats a illunatik right there!...rite, u put it down right here...LFS said it fam...structure and metas was hot...we gots to collab...PM me when u think of sumthin to go off of my nigga...4real
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tru get me on that shit...
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Damn Ackrite, you know ya drug game huh man??!
dope rhymes, man.....mettas an the wordplay was sickerning, flow was right on point, fuck what people say like ''yo da structure is tight''...like that matters, lol...but yeah, flow, mettas an wordplay was sick, an the concept of the peice an the playin around with drug related rhymes was DOPE lol....keep it up fam, solid drop. |
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Lol Good Lookin Nigga.......Yeah I Peeped Ya Shit.......Replied Too & Yeah Scream At Me About Da Collab |
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Jeah Fam.....ILL All Day......Had To Put It Down For Da Crew Feel Me......But Jeah Scream At Me For Dat Collab......I'm Down |
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Jeah @ Da Structure Lol....Of Course I Know About My Drug Game....Always, But No Doubt.....Its A ILL Thing Feel Me?? |
big!!!!
that's my rappin type I dunno why niggaz say this ain't creativity... the best structure.. these one gets a 10 out of 10... good job |
AHA Good Lookin Ax............10 Dats Real.............Stay Up Family
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yo sickness man sickness...damn so much thought Im coughin..*cough cough* lol
I enjoyed this one...keep doin ya thing man...is that u in da sig?...(prolly a stupid question,but u never know) |
Good Looks Nigga.........Yeah Thats Me In Da Sig..........Gotta Be Original Feel Me?
Uppin Dis Shit Once Again |
Uppin Dis Shit.......................Drop Feed Niggas....................Come On
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i thought this was real creative....flow was on point you had a nice structure, nice vocab usage and usage of multi's....a nice drop stay up fam
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This was a pretty decent drop ,
I was feeling it, Your structure was perfect Wordplay and vocab was good , felt it could be alittle better though Nice Creativity..titles Juelz though but okay lol,. Nice meta's really feelin it , made your verse really good Flow was on point. Overall nice drop ..keep it up |
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Jeah Good Lookin Ma.............You Already Know Like 112's Single |
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Not Really Lol But Good Lookin Dunny |
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Jeah Good Lookin Kid......I Used Juelz Title Cuz It Went Wit Da Concept......But Stay Up Tho |
Man that shit was hot, that shit would be off the hook wit a hot beat. See I aint liar I was just busy!
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pretty hot drop, u seemed like u knew what u was talkin about in there, ya flow was on point, and u had nice rhymes and shit. some good multies were in there along wit some decent bars. only thing i would say is work on ya punches some more, so they can b a lil bit stronger, nah mean. then you'll b a beast, cuz u got erething else so keep doin ya thing.
return the favor, links are in the sig....holla at me...1.. |
nice piece of work righ here B
wordplay was tight B structure incredible u gots some good potential props due |
Thanks For Peepin @ Yall............Uppin Dis Shit Everyone Who Views This Should Reply
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some nice shit
first OM of yours i've peeped flow was nice as fuck, everythin went well, ya had some decent vocabs but always room for improvement there, ya wordplay was dope as fuck...best part of the whole thing i think personally............ overall.............8/10!!! return the fave on my "RV Goes On Safari" drop.....:thumbup: |
Aight Fam.........Imma Peep Ya Shit When I'm Done Doin Dis Otha Open Mic.........But Dis Only My 2nd One Lol
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UPPIN This Shit Too.............It Aint Old Yet............$cream At It
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