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Old 05-08-05, 11:41 AM   #1
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Just A Lil Bit Remix (a girls verse)
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My one verse for the "Just A lil-bit" Remix (girl verse)

I don’t even know ya NAME
This PARTY-TYTE but if u wanna leave im GAME
Put it ON-ME-RIGHT and I can be your everyTHANG
ill be ya dj like lil WAYNE ur WEED to EASE the PAIN
you can call me ur MARY-JANE
im feelin ur southern SLANG
n the way ya CHAIN-HANG
men BEFORE-U they went n THEY-CAME
let me RESTORE-U n ill teach u some THANGS
we can run the BLOCK-TOGETHER
let off SHOTS-TOGETHER
im more than jus a ONE-NIGHT-STAND
I make the biggest gangstas wanna HOLD-MY-HAND
So it all starts off by just a LIL-BIT
HIT that SHIT REAL-QUICK then endin IT
But like I said one night with ME
u’ll never WANNA-LEAVE
pretty soon ur GONNA-SEE
what exactly i MEAN
cause In the bed I BRING-THE-HEAT
have u sweatin in BETWEEN-THE-SHEETS
im tha most gangsta girl you’ll EVER-MEET
she might come close but she’ll NEVER-BEAT
wen u think its amazin it get better EVERY-WEEK
make u thugs get VERY-WEAK
you’ll NEVER-EVER want another BITCH
n jus think it all started with JUST-A-LIL-BIT
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Old 05-08-05, 12:07 PM   #2
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Old 05-08-05, 12:07 PM   #3
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Uppin for feed back
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Old 05-08-05, 12:10 PM   #4
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nice shit ma
keep it up
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Old 05-08-05, 07:21 PM   #5
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Old 05-08-05, 08:56 PM   #6
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Nice Lil Verse Ma.........I Thought You Had A Complete 3............But It Was Straight

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Old 05-09-05, 07:12 PM   #7
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^^Aiight, Lookin for more feedback!
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Old 05-09-05, 07:15 PM   #8
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Old 05-09-05, 08:48 PM   #9
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nicee ma.. keep up .w this shit
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Old 05-13-05, 04:24 PM   #10
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Old 05-15-05, 12:38 PM   #11
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that was hot ay yo whats the weather like in tha A
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Old 05-15-05, 12:48 PM   #12
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this joint was str8 i thought u had more tho but its ight.
work on ya flow a lil bit, so it dont sound so choppy..1..
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Old 05-15-05, 01:22 PM   #13
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Yo Ma That Was Nice!Just Work On Da Word-play other than that that was pretty hot!Keep It Up Ma N Sooner Or Lada We Prolly Do A Collab!
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Old 05-21-05, 05:29 PM   #14
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Ay Im feelin that verse ma. So how's it on tha Southside? Holla at me. 1.
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Old 05-21-05, 09:07 PM   #15
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lmao.....poor children, every nigga dat posted feed in here tried 2 get wit u. they didn't even drop decent feedback.anyway tho

nice piece, i noticed word play and rhyme scheme throughout it tha most. focus on ya structure tho, try 2 make every line match up. rtf, i got a drop featurin LFS comin real soon......1
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