Smokey817 vs Ghost
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-21-05 at 01:20 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 01:21 PM.

Leave Ya ~Mind~ Feelin -Small-,Cuz My Wordplay 2 -big- 2 be ~Memorized~
leave Ya Azz -Shriveld- up like A Babiez Penis when its Not ^Circumsized^
You Couldnt Get -Connection-,Even if U Were -Wire- Tapped With Verizon
HAve U Runnin 4 Ya Life Like -jesse-owens- in Da olympics Marathon
You Should have -Refused- To Take this Battle Like A Virgin Rejectin ~Safe-Sex~
You get More -Fingered- than A Doctors Glove Made Out Of ~Lay-tex~
(Deucez)

smokey817 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 08:09 PM.

??????????????????Aint got that long to spit my nigga! so i suggest u to HURRY UP!@smokey

nigga battlin u i'm gonna lose it like my others u got money u say ur ballin if thats true then y did me and my niggas see u at wendy's bustin the tables and cleanin the toliets u think dissin me is gonna jump start ur career hit u in ur head ur so brain kicks in gear i got enough bread to made ya niggas to kill ya but i feel ya challenge a nigga that lost all his battles i ain't a rapper i'm a hustler chill out nigga this battle is yours

what the fuck
 

damn i fucked up it was 8 bars when i typed it in and came out 4 nigga this is ur though holla

Voted For: Ghost

Uh, looks like smokey pretty much gave this battle to Ghost. ot gonna even comment on smokey Ghost- ya verse was all that great. Throw in some personals and multies. The last line you had one. But get more creative with ya metas. Some of your metas were stupid. And maybe "verizon" and "marathon" can rhyme in an audio batte but not in text. Elevate.

Vote: Ghost

Lol Thanx 4 ya Vote Man!But To Me Verizon N Marathon Rhymez to Me!Both in TExt N Audio But Its ALL Good Holla Back Atcha Boy!

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Voted For: Ghost

..........weak battle Ghost took this one wit ease

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Voted For: Ghost

easy....

ghost structure was readable...and he attempted punchlines (although they didnt really hit hard).

Smokey your structure hurt my eyes..no punches or anything really..you seriousely need to hit a couple of tutorials up.

no hate
return the vote in sig.

Voted For: Ghost

Ghost: ya verse was ok structure was better than smokey punches was also good I liked the ending and the beginning you had some nice lines in ya verse the best one was the last one good shit man keep on doin wat ya do your verse was easy to read unlike smoke

Smoke: ya verse was hard too read your verse was super bad lines wat lines it was so hard to read no need to explain it was plain garbage man no offense

v/ Ghost you won cuz it was much better than smokey

please return the favor:


http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=2167988

This was feedback posted for Ghost
 

I aint goin 2 hate vote jus check da fukin polls!!!!!!!!

No i find its dick ridin now wi u n Skitzo!!!!!!!!

Dck Ridin I DOnt Even Know The Nigga FOO!So Just Chill the Fk Out N Take Da Vote!Damn BEin Sensitive n shyt About A Fckin Vote!(SMH)!N i was Returnin Da Favor cuh He Told ME TO Vote On Da Battle Between Yall So I Did!N I Fckin EXPLAINED DA VOTE!so if U Cant Take It Then Request To Get It REMOVED!4 No Reason Cuz U Think im dck Ridin!(SMH)

^rtdf so i dont have m,y vote dq'ed.

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Voted For: Ghost

EZ................

Ghost Getz Da Win, Da Nigga Spittin Dat Fiyah Shit, Nie Punchez, Nice Personalz An Nice Use Of Da Multies, I Dont Hav2 Explain Anythan Else, READ DA RHYMES NIGGAZ

Vote In DaSignature On Dem Battlez Pleaze