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Ghost 5 100.00%
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Old 05-18-05, 01:20 PM   #1
Ghost
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From: Lubbock,Texas
Smokey817 vs Ghost

IP: 2029 97B3

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Old 05-18-05, 01:21 PM   #2
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Ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 01:21 PM.
 
Old 05-18-05, 02:11 PM   #3
Ghost
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From: Lubbock,Texas
IP: 2029 97B3

Leave Ya ~Mind~ Feelin -Small-,Cuz My Wordplay 2 -big- 2 be ~Memorized~
leave Ya Azz -Shriveld- up like A Babiez Penis when its Not ^Circumsized^
You Couldnt Get -Connection-,Even if U Were -Wire- Tapped With Verizon
HAve U Runnin 4 Ya Life Like -jesse-owens- in Da olympics Marathon
You Should have -Refused- To Take this Battle Like A Virgin Rejectin ~Safe-Sex~
You get More -Fingered- than A Doctors Glove Made Out Of ~Lay-tex~
(Deucez)
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Old 05-18-05, 08:09 PM   #4
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smokey817 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 08:09 PM.
 
Old 05-19-05, 02:26 PM   #5
Ghost
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From: Lubbock,Texas
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??????????????????Aint got that long to spit my nigga! so i suggest u to HURRY UP!@smokey
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Old 05-20-05, 05:19 AM   #6
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nigga battlin u i'm gonna lose it like my others u got money u say ur ballin if thats true then y did me and my niggas see u at wendy's bustin the tables and cleanin the toliets u think dissin me is gonna jump start ur career hit u in ur head ur so brain kicks in gear i got enough bread to made ya niggas to kill ya but i feel ya challenge a nigga that lost all his battles i ain't a rapper i'm a hustler chill out nigga this battle is yours
 
Old 05-20-05, 05:21 AM   #7
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what the fuck

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Quote:
Originally Posted by smokey817
nigga battlin u i'm gonna lose it like my others u got money u say ur ballin if thats true then y did me and my niggas see u at wendy's bustin the tables and cleanin the toliets u think dissin me is gonna jump start ur career hit u in ur head ur so brain kicks in gear i got enough bread to made ya niggas to kill ya but i feel ya challenge a nigga that lost all his battles i ain't a rapper i'm a hustler chill out nigga this battle is yours

damn i fucked up it was 8 bars when i typed it in and came out 4 nigga this is ur though holla
 
Old 05-20-05, 05:56 AM   #8
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Voted For: Ghost

Uh, looks like smokey pretty much gave this battle to Ghost. ot gonna even comment on smokey Ghost- ya verse was all that great. Throw in some personals and multies. The last line you had one. But get more creative with ya metas. Some of your metas were stupid. And maybe "verizon" and "marathon" can rhyme in an audio batte but not in text. Elevate.

Vote: Ghost
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Old 05-20-05, 11:43 AM   #9
Ghost
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Lol Thanx 4 ya Vote Man!But To Me Verizon N Marathon Rhymez to Me!Both in TExt N Audio But Its ALL Good Holla Back Atcha Boy!

uuuuuupppppppppppiiiiiiinnnnnn
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Old 05-20-05, 04:01 PM   #10
Ghost
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From: Lubbock,Texas
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uuuuuuuupppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-20-05, 04:24 PM   #11
J. Dubya
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Voted For: Ghost

..........weak battle Ghost took this one wit ease
 
Old 05-20-05, 06:45 PM   #12
Ghost
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From: Lubbock,Texas
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uppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-21-05, 02:25 AM   #13
Ghost
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From: Lubbock,Texas
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uuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!holla
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Old 05-22-05, 01:25 PM   #14
Ghost
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From: Lubbock,Texas
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uuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn votes goddamnit
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Old 05-22-05, 03:28 PM   #15
Daubs
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From: Salford
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Voted For: Ghost

easy....

ghost structure was readable...and he attempted punchlines (although they didnt really hit hard).

Smokey your structure hurt my eyes..no punches or anything really..you seriousely need to hit a couple of tutorials up.

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