REDZONE vs NewKid
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-19-05 at 12:42 AM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

REDZONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 12:14 AM.

NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 12:18 AM.

look....

i pakk heat 2 put n dis queer................u wakk shits clear
dats y hiz record 0-5.................. so it can match dis year
i put u on da'door of rv'........... rized but aint get a'win-dow'
coughin n da lake iz bout da onli time u had a 'sikk flow'
tek blown...gon 'live n ya skull' dats wat i mean 'head-home'
u trash.......ya wins will neva 'touch-down' so stop 'red-zone'

all personals n wordplay

NewKid, you a MYSTERY??? cats should call ya WHO KID//
LIVING LEGENDS die early, mah text is bound ta prove it//
you stupid, mah flow POWER FORWARDS, penetration's a must//
you get postered like I'm STOUDEMIRE, 32 bullets racin at tha sound of one bust//
hold tha fuss, why rely on tha chrome ta blow ya kiddy//
let tha headlines read Newkid died slowly in his HOME OF PHILLY

jeah
 

uppin fa tha vote now mah niggaz..............................

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Voted For: NewKid

V/Newkid this was a onesided battle new came wit good punchs an good structure that was hard hittin an consistent wit good personals....REd u had an ight verse alot of ur lines were streched an some punchs were played work on those things......No Hate...RETURN THE FAVOR......
Opener=N
Closer=N
Structure=N
Punchs=N
Vocab=N
Multi's=N
Personals=N
Wordplay=N
Overall=Newkid

Voted For: NewKid

redzone:
NewKid, you a MYSTERY??? cats should call ya WHO KID//
LIVING LEGENDS die early, mah text is bound ta prove it//
^^GOOD RYHME SCHEME...NOTHIN HARD HITTIN
you stupid, mah flow POWER FORWARDS, penetration's a must//
you get postered like I'm STOUDEMIRE, 32 bullets racin at tha sound of one bust//
^^^NAH
hold tha fuss, why rely on tha chrome ta blow ya kiddy//
let tha headlines read Newkid died slowly in his HOME OF PHILLY
^^^DECENT PERSONAL...BUT NOTHIN REALLY STOOD OUT IN YA WHOLE VERSE

newkid:
i pakk heat 2 put n dis queer................u wakk shits clear
dats y hiz record 0-5.................. so it can match dis year
^^^^LMAOOO GOOD PERSONAL
i put u on da'door of rv'........... rized but aint get a'win-dow'
coughin n da lake iz bout da onli time u had a 'sikk flow'
^^^^1ST LINE WAS DOPE...SECOND KIND OF PLAYED
tek blown...gon 'live n ya skull' dats wat i mean 'head-home'
u trash.......ya wins will neva 'touch-down' so stop 'red-zone'
^^^GOOD PERSONAL/NAMEPLAY.....

V/NEWKID.....

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Voted For: NewKid

well you dont have to explain that but...

Newkid--- your punches hit harder, flow was ok...wordplay was played...cept for last line...

Redzone--- wasnt really feelin ur verse, flow was off on certain parts, punches were ok, structure was ok..

Punches-- New kidd
Flow-- Tie
Wordplay-- Newkidd
Structure-- Redzone
Multis-- Niether
Originality-- Tie

Final vote--- Newkidd

R.t.fhttp://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=191164

1 more vote 4 da W vote on dis sht yall drawn 1 more vote close dis

Voted For: NewKid

lol newkid took this one far to eassssssssy

wordplay personals everything went to newkid because his verse basically kicked the other kids verse in the nuts lyrically...

redzone- you need alotof work i suggest joining a elevation crew and revamping your whole style because what you dropped there wasn't anything progressive ....all your punches were weak...the personals were more....not personals...and your vocab needs to be upped greatly...elevate

Vote..Newkid