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NewKid 5 100.00%
REDZONE 0 0%
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Old 05-19-05, 12:12 AM   #1
REDZONE
Flyweight
 
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From: Gastonia,NC
REDZONE vs NewKid

IP: 7F18 A0FD

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Old 05-19-05, 12:14 AM   #2
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REDZONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 12:14 AM.
 
Old 05-19-05, 12:18 AM   #3
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NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 12:18 AM.
 
Old 05-19-05, 12:58 AM   #4
NewKid
Home Of Philly
 
IP: 9476 4854

look....

i pakk heat 2 put n dis queer................u wakk shits clear
dats y hiz record 0-5.................. so it can match dis year
i put u on da'door of rv'........... rized but aint get a'win-dow'
coughin n da lake iz bout da onli time u had a 'sikk flow'
tek blown...gon 'live n ya skull' dats wat i mean 'head-home'
u trash.......ya wins will neva 'touch-down' so stop 'red-zone'

all personals n wordplay
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Old 05-19-05, 01:02 AM   #5
REDZONE
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From: Gastonia,NC
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NewKid, you a MYSTERY??? cats should call ya WHO KID//
LIVING LEGENDS die early, mah text is bound ta prove it//
you stupid, mah flow POWER FORWARDS, penetration's a must//
you get postered like I'm STOUDEMIRE, 32 bullets racin at tha sound of one bust//
hold tha fuss, why rely on tha chrome ta blow ya kiddy//
let tha headlines read Newkid died slowly in his HOME OF PHILLY
 
Old 05-19-05, 01:04 AM   #6
REDZONE
Flyweight
 
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From: Gastonia,NC
jeah

IP: 7F18 A0FD

uppin fa tha vote now mah niggaz..............................
 
Old 05-19-05, 01:15 PM   #7
REDZONE
Flyweight
 
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From: Gastonia,NC
...

IP: BF0B 6931

uuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn nnn
 
Old 05-19-05, 02:44 PM   #8
NewKid
Home Of Philly
 
IP: 9476 4854

uuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnn nnnnnnnnnn
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Old 05-19-05, 07:36 PM   #9
NewKid
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Old 05-20-05, 01:57 PM   #10
Ryan Hughes
the real man of steel
 
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From: Jerzy
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Voted For: NewKid

V/Newkid this was a onesided battle new came wit good punchs an good structure that was hard hittin an consistent wit good personals....REd u had an ight verse alot of ur lines were streched an some punchs were played work on those things......No Hate...RETURN THE FAVOR......
Opener=N
Closer=N
Structure=N
Punchs=N
Vocab=N
Multi's=N
Personals=N
Wordplay=N
Overall=Newkid
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Old 05-20-05, 10:38 PM   #11
MaRVJay
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
 
From: NyC,QUeENS EaRLy!
IP: 0825 899A

Voted For: NewKid

redzone:
NewKid, you a MYSTERY??? cats should call ya WHO KID//
LIVING LEGENDS die early, mah text is bound ta prove it//
^^GOOD RYHME SCHEME...NOTHIN HARD HITTIN
you stupid, mah flow POWER FORWARDS, penetration's a must//
you get postered like I'm STOUDEMIRE, 32 bullets racin at tha sound of one bust//
^^^NAH
hold tha fuss, why rely on tha chrome ta blow ya kiddy//
let tha headlines read Newkid died slowly in his HOME OF PHILLY
^^^DECENT PERSONAL...BUT NOTHIN REALLY STOOD OUT IN YA WHOLE VERSE

newkid:
i pakk heat 2 put n dis queer................u wakk shits clear
dats y hiz record 0-5.................. so it can match dis year
^^^^LMAOOO GOOD PERSONAL
i put u on da'door of rv'........... rized but aint get a'win-dow'
coughin n da lake iz bout da onli time u had a 'sikk flow'
^^^^1ST LINE WAS DOPE...SECOND KIND OF PLAYED
tek blown...gon 'live n ya skull' dats wat i mean 'head-home'
u trash.......ya wins will neva 'touch-down' so stop 'red-zone'
^^^GOOD PERSONAL/NAMEPLAY.....

V/NEWKID.....
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Old 05-21-05, 01:16 AM   #12
NewKid
Home Of Philly
 
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Old 05-21-05, 12:42 PM   #13
NewKid
Home Of Philly
 
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Old 05-21-05, 08:18 PM   #14
NewKid
Home Of Philly
 
IP: 9476 4854

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Old 05-21-05, 09:59 PM   #15
ThatsWhatSheSaid
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From: New York
IP: 323F E2B9

Voted For: NewKid

well you dont have to explain that but...

Newkid--- your punches hit harder, flow was ok...wordplay was played...cept for last line...

Redzone--- wasnt really feelin ur verse, flow was off on certain parts, punches were ok, structure was ok..

Punches-- New kidd
Flow-- Tie
Wordplay-- Newkidd
Structure-- Redzone
Multis-- Niether
Originality-- Tie

Final vote--- Newkidd

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