REDZONE vs NewKid
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-19-05 at 12:42 AM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

REDZONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 12:14 AM.

NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 12:18 AM.

look....

i pakk heat 2 put n dis queer................u wakk shits clear
dats y hiz record 0-5.................. so it can match dis year
i put u on da'door of rv'........... rized but aint get a'win-dow'
coughin n da lake iz bout da onli time u had a 'sikk flow'
tek blown...gon 'live n ya skull' dats wat i mean 'head-home'
u trash.......ya wins will neva 'touch-down' so stop 'red-zone'

all personals n wordplay

NewKid, you a MYSTERY??? cats should call ya WHO KID//
LIVING LEGENDS die early, mah text is bound ta prove it//
you stupid, mah flow POWER FORWARDS, penetration's a must//
you get postered like I'm STOUDEMIRE, 32 bullets racin at tha sound of one bust//
hold tha fuss, why rely on tha chrome ta blow ya kiddy//
let tha headlines read Newkid died slowly in his HOME OF PHILLY

jeah
 

uppin fa tha vote now mah niggaz..............................

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Voted For: NewKid

V/Newkid this was a onesided battle new came wit good punchs an good structure that was hard hittin an consistent wit good personals....REd u had an ight verse alot of ur lines were streched an some punchs were played work on those things......No Hate...RETURN THE FAVOR......
Opener=N
Closer=N
Structure=N
Punchs=N
Vocab=N
Multi's=N
Personals=N
Wordplay=N
Overall=Newkid

Voted For: NewKid

redzone:
NewKid, you a MYSTERY??? cats should call ya WHO KID//
LIVING LEGENDS die early, mah text is bound ta prove it//
^^GOOD RYHME SCHEME...NOTHIN HARD HITTIN
you stupid, mah flow POWER FORWARDS, penetration's a must//
you get postered like I'm STOUDEMIRE, 32 bullets racin at tha sound of one bust//
^^^NAH
hold tha fuss, why rely on tha chrome ta blow ya kiddy//
let tha headlines read Newkid died slowly in his HOME OF PHILLY
^^^DECENT PERSONAL...BUT NOTHIN REALLY STOOD OUT IN YA WHOLE VERSE

newkid:
i pakk heat 2 put n dis queer................u wakk shits clear
dats y hiz record 0-5.................. so it can match dis year
^^^^LMAOOO GOOD PERSONAL
i put u on da'door of rv'........... rized but aint get a'win-dow'
coughin n da lake iz bout da onli time u had a 'sikk flow'
^^^^1ST LINE WAS DOPE...SECOND KIND OF PLAYED
tek blown...gon 'live n ya skull' dats wat i mean 'head-home'
u trash.......ya wins will neva 'touch-down' so stop 'red-zone'
^^^GOOD PERSONAL/NAMEPLAY.....

V/NEWKID.....

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Voted For: NewKid

well you dont have to explain that but...

Newkid--- your punches hit harder, flow was ok...wordplay was played...cept for last line...

Redzone--- wasnt really feelin ur verse, flow was off on certain parts, punches were ok, structure was ok..

Punches-- New kidd
Flow-- Tie
Wordplay-- Newkidd
Structure-- Redzone
Multis-- Niether
Originality-- Tie

Final vote--- Newkidd

R.t.fhttp://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=191164