Phenom-in-all vs FuxJustAWord
 

Battle Rules:

8-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/r
etc.....
Phenom gets my KLL Title if he wins

im makin it a day....... if u drop earlier, just pm me wen u drop and ill def. drop mine as soon as possible after that.... at the most an hour later


Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 05-26-05 at 10:19 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Phenom-in-all has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 09:51 PM.

FuxJustAWord has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 09:54 PM.

PHENOM'S FIRST TEXT LMAOOO

aight, enjoy.... LOL

I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers

I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now

Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : :nono:, you got no chance you homo

C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix

I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed

Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word

did u post ur shit???????????????//????????????????

yeah you dumbass.... You gon no show? haha... Just takes the full day to write shit... thats wack.

WTF...... I could rewrote my shit 30 times.... If I'da known you were going to take this long I would have too.

lmao@ that shit......... i havent even thought about writin this shit yet...... i just got home, and im prolly gonna no show cuz i gotta go in 15 minutes to chill with sum friends... if i get it done by than.... than ill post

wack.............................................. .......

dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all
im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...
you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life
Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...
this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta

if you didnt get it...
-ll cool j made a song called head sprung and somethin like a phenomenon
-Phenom has never battled text before
-Phenom posted a thread admitting he was wack and gay
-Jay Z has a song where he says "maybe you'll love me when i fade to black"

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

some tips if u plan to continue text... dont hyphen random multies just so ppl know its a multie
dont separate ur lines like that. keep it one paragraph or whatever, otherwise, it looks weird. im glad u didnt use links bc thats garbage... otherwise, u had some pretty good multies. unfortunately, most of ur punches were played (not your fault) the second line didnt make too much sense to me but i liked that cali line. its so much like him...
just some feedback for ya.... good luck wit text if u continue it

upiin this.............................................. ......

1) I admitted i was gay and wack? lol. no... fake punch...
2) The def jam vendetta line has been used in every single battle I've ever been in... and MY lines were played? LOL
3) I added the hyphens so cats could GET my multi's. In audio you can hear it, but it aint like im doin another text so its whatever lol.
4) I dropped half an hour after this was opened, you dropped 24 hours after...

anyways - good battle, you must feel lucky - the only cat to ever see Phenom/Vendetta in text, too bad this another K.O. for me ;):thumbup:

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Voted For: Phenom-in-all

V// Phenom...
IP:


dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all----wack line homie
im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...---filler in derr...didn't flow well at all...
you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life---decent..
Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...---no
this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta---nice try?

against

I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers--ha nice opener
I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now---naww...

Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : , you got no chance you homo---ha nice

C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix---yo das a female hoe who rules her John...so ya'll kno..anyways...decent line

I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed -- ha nice special effects?

Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word---cudda been bedda but i guess..

Yo Phenom had betta lines..structure kinda audio-y but what can u expect...Fux..did u not think he wud drop decent? i'ono but yo Phenom Got it Easy to Me..

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

polls.... .................................................. .......

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192388

and i never got dq'ed or anythin like that for feedin....... people justy thought it was questionable that i fed...... and dude, u can say wat u want but i bet u i spent less time one my verse than u did yours...... i keyed it up right there at the screen right before i left in under 15 minutes.... while u were researchin my ass before i EVEN set up the battle

.................................it shows :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

Just peeping polls............can't vote cause of O.Y.D

Yes, we are Owning You Daily :thumbup:™

This was feedback posted for FuxJustAWord
 

lmao @ Phenom text battling...

.............feedback tho

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

Checkin the polls............................................. ......

uppin............................................. .

lol........... i didnt say it wouldnt show......... but dont get all "ima KO u" on me cuz u didnt drop decent either.. lol, itll be dudes decypherin wackness for this battle.... i was honestly juss hopin u were as bad as most noobs wen i was postin my shit

oooook............................................ ...uppin

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

can't vote- just peepin the scenery with 50 characters of blah.

uppin............... dayum these text battles take days..........

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

LMFAOOOOOOOO

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No.

WTF....... i swear i had a line in this that was about ur tracks..... like (thisll kinda be the concept)
"Alil upset are we, sed 'Hate it or Love it' and Rv's choice was ugly
Shit, I can tell, cuz now ur around screamin dog 'I'll Make You Love Me'"

sumthin like that, but worded better......... where the fuck did it go...... anyways, uppin

that line woulda been ass... like Soc's audio......

Voted For: FuxJustAWord



dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all
im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...
you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life
Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...
this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta

Real Nice Wordplay Usin LL Songs In Da Openin Bar
Rest Ov Da Verse Wuz Good 2, U Stayed On Point Wid Da Personalz, Wordplay In Yo Punchez Wuz Good 2, Nice Consistant Flow, U Bought It Raw In Diz Battle, Not Much I Wuznt Feelin Dat Fade 2 Black Bar, Other Then That, A Good Solid Hard Hittin Verse Dawg

I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers

I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now

Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : , you got no chance you homo

C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix

I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed

Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word

Iight Verse 2, Not Az Much Consistancy Az Fux, Few Linez U Builded Up Nicely But Then Da Punch Lacked, Propps 4Dat ''Be Bold But Dont Feed'' Line, Dat Wuz Nice, More Bars Lyke Dat 1 & U Wuld Ov Got Da Win

Vote/Fux=He Had Da More Consistant Flow, Rhymez Were Iight Frum Both, But Phenom Wuz Lackin Da Consistancy, Altho Fux Verse Wuznt Nuthin Special, It Had A Lil More Consistancy In Da Bars, Better Creative Wordplay 2...

Plz Return Da Vote In Da Link Below

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=192150

This was feedback posted for FuxJustAWord
 

IP:


dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all

Pretty dope

im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...

Lol ight

you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life

Ok personal no real connection though

Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...

I like the concept but this could of been doone soooooo nice still a str8 hit

this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta

Blah too indirect and weak

NEXT

I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers

Lol nice

I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now

Weak

Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : , you got no chance you homo

Weak

C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix

Ight

I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed

Ok personal

Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word

Needed re-wording

Vted for fux because his verse was more consistant
Both please return the unbiased favour on me vs accomplish thanks

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

lmao.............................................. .................... yo after we audio we should text for the fun of it.

Voted For: FuxJustAWord

shit fux...this was close, im actually leaning towards
phenom a bit thou, just cuz his verse seemed harder hitting
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but ill break it down,
I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers
^^^this was nice, i acually laughed
I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now
^^decent, short lines phenom,..lol,
Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : , you got no chance you homo
^^lol, omg, its not good, but funny as hell
C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix
^^decent....
I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed
^^punch was decent
Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word
^^didnt connect
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im impressed phenom, you did alright for ya first battle
a couple concepts were iffy..like that cali line...rofl..
but overall i liked your opener n the rest was ok..
good personal too.......
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dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all
^^ok, i wasnt overly feelin this
im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...
^^decent.....
you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life
^^no, wheres the punch homie
Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...
^^huh..?
this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta
^^nice.........
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k after readin both again, imma go with fux, his closer was
better then phenoms opener which were the best 2 bars in the battle...but its close, i mean honestly fux, i think you
underestimated phen alot here,.. it could go either way

lol, it wasnt as much underestimatin as it was bein REal short on time...... but i know wat ur talkin about... uppin

Voted For: FuxJustAWord

ima give this one to fux because his personals were more irrelevant and hard hitting. i didnt like tha structure too much, but i cant complain because ya flow was on point. i liked that creativitie and some pnuches, but alot of punches did hit too hard. ya verse was nice. nice metas and punches, i think ya personals took it tho.

phenom-ya verse was ight, but not all that. alot of up and down bars. one bar was nice, tha other 2 was wack. i didnt see too much consistency in ya verse. you did have some good multies at tha beginning, but i think it hurt u when u switched up ya style. you started off nice, but fell badly, sso i cant give u this vote. plus ya structure was up and down too.

fux gets my vote


rtf on battle link in sig or i will remove this vote from this battle,

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

Checkin Polls..

Gotta Do Fifty Characters In Dis Muphucka

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Voted For: FuxJustAWord

I think that FuxJustAWord got this battle because i feel that FuxJustAWord came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt FuxJustAWord got it they were used effectifely and were on point Phenom-in-all u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion, ya could tell it's been a while since you last did text...it's basic punches and a lil self-g personals i felt went to FuxJustAWord good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to FuxJustAWord and flow and structure i'll give to FuxJustAWord.

V/FuxJustAWord There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly within 3 days or vote removed :thumbup:

yea, ill returnn it wen i get home..................... uppin

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