SevenThird/TonySelf- Fitness Camp Fatalities.
 

I replied to Jump Remix, and MadThug Crew Diss.

Leave feed and its always returned... www.soundclick.com/tonyself

Listen to the whole thing- Seven Spits first, Then Tony, Then Seven again :)

peepin... whoa, wierd effect on the quality of the vocals, not alot of emotion in this one so far from what im seein, i think its the beat tho...zombie food line was coo...some of the effects are cool... u fallin off at the end imthinkin... dunno how much i was feelin that first verse... dont like the "phone convo" effect on the begining of tony's part.... flow is kinda lackin but im feelin it in some parts... im not feelin this beat at all, i think that's what it is... sometimes its hard to understand too... flow has some spotty areas.... gettin kinda sleepy from this beat.... aight seven on again... im thinkin this is nowhere near as good as your last track man, what happened? lyrics are kinda simple im thinkin... doesnt sound like ur too into it man... yeee haw? man, honestly i wasnt feelin this song. tha last track u dropped made this look like a cali track man.... im hopin ur next one is better cuz i know u can bring it better than this.... but then again thats just my oppinion feel me? i kno u do some good work i just wasnt feelin this peice. good luck

o yea, rtf on my newest joint if u get time please.. good looks

honesty is cool... i guess this might be one of those tracks where I feel it more than yall do- Some of my fav lyrics in this joint.- i'll hit that feedback tonight after I eat :)

just to dope to be on rv....dope ass beats,dope flow and nice emotions man,
first verse was fucking dope...now for the second: i prefered the first verse but still dope,i like how you flow,like fast and normal...anyway I know what i meen lol.nice quaLIty and dope lyrics....third verse is just hella dope too...peace

agreed the thing i like about our tracks is we find a vibe and hit it not every track has to be ONYX fa real :thumbup:

^ i dont understand, ONYX? like the rapper onyx? lol i dunno, i dont see too much versatility in all ya'lls song. not saying that as an insult cuz u guys do ya thing, but i get the same type of vibe from alot of the tracks, its not like u go from rapping in one to singing in tha next one. i say get a style n stick with it n just try some new shyt with iit n experiment. but thats just my oppinion

peep this traackkkkk

i dunno what you talkin bout tho-- my whole first verse was on some Im better than you shit... and I don't think me and tony sound anything alike at all, thats why we hooked up, cuz i got the higher pitched lazy lips, and he's got the bassy trigger toungue. but I appreciate the feed.

aiight i aint no DR...but yall is dope as fuck...........

I appreciate love, but I wish you woulda broke it down- tell me what it is you liked, so we know in the future.

this track is sickness manifested in lyrics

7/3rd u r soundin a lil different on dis track...ur flow is a lil diff aswell...but nevertheless its fittin and shittin on the beat..wordage at the zombie wordplay bar..nice originality...i like ur laid back sound, itslike ur so confident in ur skill u jus fuckin wif the beat 4 the sake of it lol.......This lil bit jus afta the phone ringin where it sounds like Tony Self is spittin down the phone is DOPE AS FUCK its not the lyrics its just the sound yo...DAMN i repeated this lik 5second bit like 4 timez..tell me how yall did that?...."sevrin up these jerkers over soundclick servers" i liked that man...

this track is sickness yall....u described it well in da lyrics page 4 this:
"who needs a hook, when u got lyrics this sick"

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IIGht..Beat is Relaxed..First Cat..Rhymescheme is Good..but theres Suttin Bout It Why I'm Not Feelin it That Much..Maybe Cauz your lackin some emotion on the verse...Anyway..This is a Diss..??..Anyway..Sounds like you just namin Different Crazy shit...anyway..Second Verse..is Coo..I'm not really feelin it..The Flow was Coo, It Needs Polishing..Cauz i cant make out most of the words...Not Really Seeing a Diss Here Neither..Anyway..Third Verse...Third Verse..Its Good..i guess..Son..You seem To Be Just Puttin anything in ya bars To Me..iono..I'm Not Really Feelin It....To many subjects stuffed in ya bars..or i'm just hearin suttin else..anyway..Keep Droppin Yall...7/10..

no doubt... but what hook?

some real solid feedback from folks much appreciated

like the first line... nice flow threw out...dont like that killin yours self flow... flows back wit the sombi thing... like that high drive and hit shit line, flows dope... second guy sounds like e40... contant flow... just decent threw out cuz he dont switch up the flow much except for a few multi's one after another << liked that... and then u should switch up the flow a lil bit like that part where u say sumin like... grab the gat im runnin back sumin sumin switch... u shoulda switched to that flow and been like... caught the cat im lovin that fuck a grimy bitch... u know what im sayin... i hate when i hear a cool flow for a sec and peeps dont take off on it... well i accidently stopped it after that so decent drop and what im talkin about with findin that cool flow and stayin wit it ... a good example (if u dont know what im sayin) is- the first song on the new nas cd, the second verse, where he flows " a message to those who locked us up"... anyway good drop... pz