§ick§eed vs Retrospecktive
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 lines...
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
Basicly No Cheating

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-31-05 at 12:27 AM

Must drop verse in 2500 minutes after check in.

Retrospecktive has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 10:29 PM.

§ick§eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 12:18 AM.

ya shit made mines look all fucked up....whoeva votes cant think about structure cuz its fucked up

VOTE

damn uppin this shit for some votes.....once i can return tha favor i will

ayo uppin this for some votes people.......we'll return it namean

dammmmmmmn can we get some votes?? shit is dead as fuck man...

i'm tight this shit been up so many times but nobody checks it...rappin on here is fuckin aggrevatin

wtf dis shit still hasnt been voted on and it been up since god knows when..i cant return favas righ now as u can see my post count is low

aftawards i will jus vote up peeps

page two yet? without one single vote? and me talkin to my self? *gasps* who woulda guessed it

Voted For: §ick§eed

GOOD:

Flow - tie Damn!!!!
Structure - tie
Punchlines - Sick Seed (hard hittin) and original
vocab - no
Wordplay - Sick Seed
Nameplay - no

BAD:

forced Rhymes - no
Forced Multis - nope
Non Sence - no lol

CREATIVITY

Theme Battle - no
Creative Punches - Sick Seed
creative multi's - nope

PERSONALS:
Sickseed had one at least, not so hard hittin llike his personals but that's what wins

OPENING/CLOSING:

Opening: Retro
Closing: Retro

COMMENT:
The battle was kinda tie cuz retro had better structure, opening and closing but Sick seed got more punchlines, punchlines and multi's so the winner is Sickseed

V/ Sickseed

yeh good lookin u tha first to vote in this shit lol

Voted For: §ick§eed


My verse is outrageous like woodstock any year
You put the pussy in this battle because their's plenty here
^^whack punch
I'm meant to fear, because i explode while u get owned n fixed in
You chouldin't rack up Areacodes if u call long distance*
^^weak.....but still an attempt
My fist hits like blits kicks and rips shit like baby's gettin sit.
Need a line heres some Coc and bananasplit u in pieces like grits
^^whack

I didn't like this verse.Structure was terrible and so was flow.Best line was the area codes thing because it was at least an attempt.Worst line was everthing else.Flow,structure/and punches were lackin.

Retro Gets Blown...By DIKES PERIOD!...No Wonder He Got BI-FLOWS
Son I Know...U Carry Cans From 9 To 5, Thought U Said Dont Recycle
^^didn't rhyme......weak,period shit played
Stupid His Brain Is Missin, He French Dicks Then CUMS Tongue Kissin
You Trippin...Ya Ass Need Crutches...Get Fucked So Much Its Limpin!
^^^whack....I hated this bar,uncreative as it gets
Told Retro Stop Dickridin...His Man Got Surgery.....Now He CLIT-Ridin
Get High Then, Come Online Lookin For Brain...I Heard Einstein's Hirin
^^^whack
Shit About Him Aint Right...Put A Check Near Female, Retro Nike-Dikes
Keep Talkin Bout Me......Ya Mouth Leaks More SHIT Than Baby Wipes
^^^Ok

Ur only decent punch was that last one.Period shit is played out.You gotta learn to be more creative.Talkin bout him french kissin dicks?C'mon.But at least you showed sumtin at the end wit the last line.U got my vote.

Vote-Sickseed(vote in link below please)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851

aiite i could understand dat vote...jus thru this verse together i'll peep ya battle tho

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can this please get closed, its been up since i first got here damn

This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
 

just checking the polls...........................

Voted For: §ick§eed

Retrospecktive-Your verse was well structurized, i copped a well flow off of it. Your multis were intact and well to flow with.Your vocab was not enhanced and basic, didnt enhance your verse....Your punches were average nothing over the limit,personals was iight....wordplay....had a couple good lines...overall 5/10


§ick§eed-Your vesre was structured in a different way, but still flowed iight....your vocab was better than your opponents but nothing to brag about.Your punches was medium...hit pretty decent.....personals was good felt they were noticed...as for wordplay i think that was pretty good also...overall ur verse was a 6/10

this was a very tight battle, not the strongest ive seen
but v/§ick§eed
please rtf on a sig link......thanks.....

aight that vote will be returned, uppin for more votes niggas

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this shit literally been up waaaaaaaaaaaay before summer began and its STILL open, i dont understand this shit dunnies

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Voted For: §ick§eed

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Yo Return Da Vote In One Of Those Links Hommie!

Retro Yo Rhyme Scheme n Flow Wuz Betta Than SickSeed'z, But Ur Creativity In Yo Punchlinez Wuz Kinda Basic n Sum Of Ur Lines Seemed Forced! It Wuz And Ok Verse But Sick Juz Came A Lil Harder

Sick Yo Verse Wuz Aight, Alot More Creative In Yo Wordplay Than Retro Was! But Sum Of Yo Punches Felt A Lil Needless And Lacked Personals But U Definately Get Da Win Hommie! Now Plz RTF

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vote up niggas lets fuckin goooooooooooooooooooooo

Voted For: §ick§eed

Shit About Him Aint Right...Put A Check Near Female, Retro Nike-Dikes
Keep Talkin Bout Me......Ya Mouth Leaks More SHIT Than Baby Wipes


vs

My fist hits like blits kicks and rips shit like baby's gettin sit.
Need a line heres some Coc and bananasplit u in pieces like grits


weak battle all round.