Voted For: §ick§eed


My verse is outrageous like woodstock any year
You put the pussy in this battle because their's plenty here
^^whack punch
I'm meant to fear, because i explode while u get owned n fixed in
You chouldin't rack up Areacodes if u call long distance*
^^weak.....but still an attempt
My fist hits like blits kicks and rips shit like baby's gettin sit.
Need a line heres some Coc and bananasplit u in pieces like grits
^^whack

I didn't like this verse.Structure was terrible and so was flow.Best line was the area codes thing because it was at least an attempt.Worst line was everthing else.Flow,structure/and punches were lackin.

Retro Gets Blown...By DIKES PERIOD!...No Wonder He Got BI-FLOWS
Son I Know...U Carry Cans From 9 To 5, Thought U Said Dont Recycle
^^didn't rhyme......weak,period shit played
Stupid His Brain Is Missin, He French Dicks Then CUMS Tongue Kissin
You Trippin...Ya Ass Need Crutches...Get Fucked So Much Its Limpin!
^^^whack....I hated this bar,uncreative as it gets
Told Retro Stop Dickridin...His Man Got Surgery.....Now He CLIT-Ridin
Get High Then, Come Online Lookin For Brain...I Heard Einstein's Hirin
^^^whack
Shit About Him Aint Right...Put A Check Near Female, Retro Nike-Dikes
Keep Talkin Bout Me......Ya Mouth Leaks More SHIT Than Baby Wipes
^^^Ok

Ur only decent punch was that last one.Period shit is played out.You gotta learn to be more creative.Talkin bout him french kissin dicks?C'mon.But at least you showed sumtin at the end wit the last line.U got my vote.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851