§ick§eed vs Souljah
 

Battle Rules:

8 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-02-05 at 07:09 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Souljah has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 07:11 PM.

§ick§eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 07:12 PM.

Yo I'll i slit yo throat like a gash from a 'chete,
Eatin you for breakfast like a fatman wid spaghetti,
If a punch equated to a bullet fom a nine,
You'd appreciate dat you would die every time,
Nigga you a bitch in disguise, jus admit dat shit,
Now I've seen a couple of yo rhymes,why d'ya spit dat shit?
Yo da gap between our levels' always gettin bigger,
You v. me is like Vanilla Ice against Jigga,
Yo I pity you fool, like Baracus from da A-Team,
Only time yo ass iz beatin me iz in ya daydream,
I be murkin fake ones on a regular basis,
Look nigga me n you both know where your place iz,
Lyrically i'll leave you battered, left bloody n blue n black
Hit you nonstop like Blackjack wid a deck of jacks,
I dare your ass to try n lyrically attack man,
I'll leave yo ass needin more pills than PacMan....

Voted For: Souljah

This was sick, Souljah all props. Sickseed, you pretty good, I liked your flow but I think Souljah beat you thats my opinion neways.

You v. me is like Vanilla Ice against Jigga,
Yo I pity you fool, like Baracus from da A-Team,
Only time yo ass iz beatin me iz in ya daydream,

My fav bit mainly cause "I pity the foo'" is legendary lol, RTF on my Intermental vs. Big_Dawg thanks

Removed

INTERMENTAL!....ur in my crew!.....u cant vote in this battle!.....somebody take that vote away

VOTE UP

Oh you in TBN, I didnt know tht sorry, they shudda sed summin in the crew forum, sorry man lol

its in my sig also....lol....damn u really thought he won me? thats serious

Yeah i wouldnt change my mind cos u in TBN, but u fly like I sed but sometimes in battles things go ure way or not so, no hate atall homie

Yo uppin for more votes people...................................
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Voted For: Souljah


Yo I'll i slit yo throat like a gash from a 'chete,
Eatin you for breakfast like a fatman wid spaghetti,
If a punch equated to a bullet fom a nine,
You'd appreciate dat you would die every time,
Nigga you a bitch in disguise, jus admit dat shit,
Now I've seen a couple of yo rhymes,why d'ya spit dat shit?
Yo da gap between our levels' always gettin bigger,
You v. me is like Vanilla Ice against Jigga,
Yo I pity you fool, like Baracus from da A-Team,
Only time yo ass iz beatin me iz in ya daydream,
I be murkin fake ones on a regular basis,
Look nigga me n you both know where your place iz,
Lyrically i'll leave you battered, left bloody n blue n black
Hit you nonstop like Blackjack wid a deck of jacks,
I dare your ass to try n lyrically attack man,
I'll leave yo ass needin more pills than PacMan....


http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=192150

Hey Yo, I Accidently Hit Vote

Breakdown:

Souljah, Ya Had Sum Iight Rhymez Dawg, Nuthin 2 Special, But U Stayed On Point, & U Stayed Focusing On Yo Disses.....Datz A Good Start, Vocab Culd Ov Been Better, Mettas Cant Be Faulted Tho, Wordplay Culd Be More Creative, But A Solid Consistant Drop

Sickseed, Sum Iight Flow Dawg, Not Enuff Hard Hittin Punz & Mettas Tho, Sum Linez U Wuz On Top Ov Da Battle, Then Others Let U Down & Came Across As Fillers, Good Creativity Az Eva, But Not Enuff Hard Hittin' Personalz & 2 Much Inconsistancy In Yo Barz

Sorry Bout Da Inexplanation, Accidently Hit Vote Lyke I Said

Yo Yall..
Holler@Da Link In Da Above Post Or Diz Vote Will Be Removed :thumbup:

Voted For: §ick§eed

your verse had better punches,........ but most of all it was the best ryme sceme (flow) ........... i think ryme sceme means flow........both of yallll verse was tight it was real close but i have to vote fo souljah........... cuz sickseeds flow was a little off and souljah hit with

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oops i ment ta vote for souljah
erase that please

i acatentilly hit vote on sickseed...my fault...my fualt

but souljah rtf click on my sig

this battle is all fucked up...we gettin rid of every vote includin mines...start fresh stop fuckin this shit up man

^^^For real g.People need to start voting properly on dis...shit's a mess at the moment.
Yo uppin for votes.

Voted For: §ick§eed

V/ Sick Seed..
Both dropped nice i felt that SickSeed's verse hit a lil harder wit da punches becuz u both did good with other elements of the battle...I Can Feel The Style of Souljah but Da Actually Punches Went To SickSeed..
Stay Up Fellas

yo yall niggas fuckin this whole thread up...souljah i think i ate u honestly

OK so thats why even one of your crew members thought i won............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................................alright then.............................................

lmaooooooo i aint even in that crew no more...i was in it for what, one day? so who gives a fuck besides dat kid cant rhyme so of course he voted for u lol

up this...

lmfao!!!
OK...if only people who can't rhyme voted for me................................................ ....
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then how do you explain khaoz theory voting for me?
Case closed.

@SOULJAH
what tha fuck do that mean?? nigga i KNOW i beat you point blank....thats all i said from tha beginning now u wanna start shit.....stfu and let ppl vote

its that simple (and stop wit da fuckin dots, what is that doin? its ya thought process? lmao da fuck)

up!

1-fool pleez this is justy gettin stupid now.lets stop the schoolyard cusses

2-uppin for more votes people

lmaoooo english fam, learn english then come n talk to me i dont wanna see shit but people votin on this

Voted For: §ick§eed

Sickseed - ur verse was cool..i liked some of ur punches..the line about the twin towers was nice..u had some good wordplay..the one thing i would liked to see more of is personals.. didnt really have any in here..but u had some good punches.....8/10




Souljah - u had some good ideas in ur punches but i jus think u needed to re-word them to make them hit harder..the best line in ur verse would be vanilla ice vs. jigga..but i jus think u need to work more on wording ur punches.....6/10




Sickseed wins

What? Your dumb ass can't say shit bout my english when you can't even spell city correctly. Check your sig. I believe it is spelt with a "C".

Anyway enough of your illiteracy...
uppin for more votes.

aha good lookin on tha vote dunny.........uppin lets get some more votes

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This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
 

LOL Siiiiiick, what's poppin homeboy?!

you got a way with words.....real dope....you got this man!

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This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
 

checkin polls for no reason

vote up sik....uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: §ick§eed

Soul Ya Not Da Smartest Man, MEAT GRIP..Came Online Wit Sausage Hands
Only Beatin Me If You Got Fans...That Ride Dick Harder Than Lil Kims Glands
^^^OK
You Hoe Not Necessarily A Garden Tool, Ring This Retard...Alarm His Drool
Who Knows This Fool? Ya Beg 4 Respect More Than Deadbeat Fathers Do!
^^OK
Scared Of You? Not Seed, Son You Make No Sense....Like Permin Weaves!
I'm SICK Nigga..I Heard You Sneeze, I'm Back So Exit..Tell Ya Spine 2 Leave
^^weak
TBN Would Easily Merk Dis Coward, Introduction 2 Dirt..You Meetin Flowers
Cuz You Died Before DROPPIN Ya Verse......So Fall Twice Like Da Towers!
^^^weak
You Probably Wack Like Tha Rest I've Conquered....Nigga Accept Ya Loss
Thinkin You Boss? That Title Is Mine, URINATION-ON...Now U Pissin Me Off
^^wak
12 Is Enough To Dislocate Ya Bone...Rappings A Talent...& Ur Not Known!
Abandoned Since Birth, He's So Twisted...Even Psychos Leave Him Alone
^^OK

Couple of weak lines in this.Flow was a bit bland.Try to shorten ur lines up.Best line was the deadbeat fathers one.Worst was that urination one.Add some more personals now.

Yo I'll i slit yo throat like a gash from a 'chete,
Eatin you for breakfast like a fatman wid spaghetti,
^^spagetti for breakfast?..nah,u just said it cause it rhymed
If a punch equated to a bullet fom a nine,
You'd appreciate dat you would die every time,
^^suked
Nigga you a bitch in disguise, jus admit dat shit,
Now I've seen a couple of yo rhymes,why d'ya spit dat shit?
^^basic
Yo da gap between our levels' always gettin bigger,
You v. me is like Vanilla Ice against Jigga,
^^basic
Yo I pity you fool, like Baracus from da A-Team,
Only time yo ass iz beatin me iz in ya daydream,
^^basic
I be murkin fake ones on a regular basis,
Look nigga me n you both know where your place iz,
Lyrically i'll leave you battered, left bloody n blue n black
Hit you nonstop like Blackjack wid a deck of jacks,
I dare your ass to try n lyrically attack man,
I'll leave yo ass needin more pills than PacMan....


I ain't breakin it down no more.Ur shit was more pre-school than 50 cent and G-Unit.It was the epotome of simpilicity.Add more similies,metas,werdplay....shit like dat.Dun just say"u a bitch in disguise,just admit it".That shit 's whack.

Vote-Sickseed(drop a vote in my battle please)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901

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yo sickseed.........drop a vote in my battle...click on the link I put at bottom of my vote.

yo vote up man uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

This was feedback posted for Souljah
 

Voted for: Souljah

checkin the pollz.............................................


I'll leave this vote jus cuz I like Ax Dogg aight