k-trini dis one for you punk
 

dis nigga call himself k-trini, he look like a damn oscar meyer weinie
u couldnt even wish for a bitch like me, not even if you had a personal geinie
u look like a broke down keith sweat, fuckin wit a bitch like me imma make u regret
da day dat u step on da scene and came incorrect
u a punk ass bitch, u deserve every damn diss
thats thrown ya way, fuck nigga im bout to make ya dig ya own grave
cuz u da one dat deserve to be dead, i hope a bitch shoots u in da head
mad cuz u never can get a girl up in ya bed
wont u step up and get at me tonight
imma bite ya fuckin ear off, like a tyson fight
murda ya ass leave no trace, u aint a fuckin rapper ur just a disgrace
i feel sorry for ya mama, u da kinda nigga dat like to bring da stupid drama
u so damn illiterate, guess ya mama a punk to couldnt teach u to be considerate
a bitch like me gives a fuck bout who u thinking u run
and i gives a fuck bout where u claimin you from, and now u know
im da real bitch fuckin u up, and i came through in one verse and sucked ya up
fuck nigga just give it up, ya flow is never gonna be enough
to get ya ass paid, give it up now i just busted ya ass like u was a spade

u elevated a lil bit but what i can see is that u writin ya lyrics tha way u would say 'em on a track... u gotta structure it off but i could help u wit that...pm me if u need any help or advice

elevate some nice diss but keep workin at it cus i was at yo level wen i first got to rv but i got betta battlin ppl betta den me at my level n not at my level

aight u guys thanks for the feedback i appreciate it and any help you can give me would b great, fate can u tell me how to pm u so i can ask u question are u on aim

^^^ no u wasn't.....don't even be modest u was dope from tha beginnin girl. who u tryna fool?

mEH................IT WAS ALRIGHT.....................

yo you improved wit your structure. nice... disses weren't bad. But you'll elevate with time. But good improvement. good job. keep droppin' and elevating. pc one.

just click on my name and then click send private message

ya i was tryin to do what u told me to do i need to work on my syllables

lol......man it gon be easy to respond to this tommorrow.

CAUSE YOU IS ONE UGLY MU-FUCKAH. THAT'S WHY!

lmao.........get 'em mayne get 'em

Nigga mad at his mom..............Damn right, i would be mad at your mother for bringing you on this damn earth.

i think dis kid gon cry in a minute.......

lol@ tweety so k why u got wait til tomorrow u need a day to write ya shit nigga spit off da top of ya head i did

I'm exhausted .I posted a battle with daubs,and open mic freestyle, and a battle with young dollar(also freestyle since I forgot bout that battle completly).All in less than 12 hrs.Just be patient u fuckin hoe.

Ya know wat.....Fuck it.I'll post my shit right now.

nigga talkin bout u scared ive been postin all day u mad cuz ya ass got sprayed if u was real emcee u would come wit da heat tonight dont b mad cuz a white ya murdered ya ass tonight if u come out tomorrow we know u fake as shit got to write da shit down first fuck boy

meant to say*cuz a white girl murdered u

I posted already......go read it.

ya shit was weak and ignorant

thank u torch!!!!

Yo this wasnt half bad all you gotta do is work on ya structure...n grow abit in ya rhymes.......im doing the same thing so..keep ya head up......n K-trini aint shit...

Rtf On my battles and OM's

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^^^ somebody plz end dis battle between me N K-Trini

aight yall thanks for the feed back imma keep workin it then when i get real good imma rip ya lol kisses and hugs muah