dis nigga call himself k-trini, he look like a damn oscar meyer weinie
u couldnt even wish for a bitch like me, not even if you had a personal geinie
u look like a broke down keith sweat, fuckin wit a bitch like me imma make u regret
da day dat u step on da scene and came incorrect
u a punk ass bitch, u deserve every damn diss
thats thrown ya way, fuck nigga im bout to make ya dig ya own grave
cuz u da one dat deserve to be dead, i hope a bitch shoots u in da head
mad cuz u never can get a girl up in ya bed
wont u step up and get at me tonight
imma bite ya fuckin ear off, like a tyson fight
murda ya ass leave no trace, u aint a fuckin rapper ur just a disgrace
i feel sorry for ya mama, u da kinda nigga dat like to bring da stupid drama
u so damn illiterate, guess ya mama a punk to couldnt teach u to be considerate
a bitch like me gives a fuck bout who u thinking u run
and i gives a fuck bout where u claimin you from, and now u know
im da real bitch fuckin u up, and i came through in one verse and sucked ya up
fuck nigga just give it up, ya flow is never gonna be enough
to get ya ass paid, give it up now i just busted ya ass like u was a spade

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u elevated a lil bit but what i can see is that u writin ya lyrics tha way u would say 'em on a track... u gotta structure it off but i could help u wit that...pm me if u need any help or advice

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elevate some nice diss but keep workin at it cus i was at yo level wen i first got to rv but i got betta battlin ppl betta den me at my level n not at my level

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aight u guys thanks for the feedback i appreciate it and any help you can give me would b great, fate can u tell me how to pm u so i can ask u question are u on aim

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^^^ no u wasn't.....don't even be modest u was dope from tha beginnin girl. who u tryna fool?

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mEH................IT WAS ALRIGHT.....................

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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

yo you improved wit your structure. nice... disses weren't bad. But you'll elevate with time. But good improvement. good job. keep droppin' and elevating. pc one.

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just click on my name and then click send private message

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ya i was tryin to do what u told me to do i need to work on my syllables

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lol......man it gon be easy to respond to this tommorrow.

CAUSE YOU IS ONE UGLY MU-FUCKAH. THAT'S WHY!

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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

lmao.........get 'em mayne get 'em

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Nigga mad at his mom..............Damn right, i would be mad at your mother for bringing you on this damn earth.

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mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

i think dis kid gon cry in a minute.......

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