Mimesis and Propain - Punching Lines
 

I was talking to Pro on AIM and we just decided to key some shit up.. Check it..

Mimesis

Rackin wins, number one.. shit yo, these kids are wack but son..
Im done holding back.. and my trips to the chiropracter are done
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Runnin shit.. gunnin kids.. gay faggots actin like i wont rip a dude
I seperate the boys from the men..
..but I got time to merk you bitches too
Flippin fools like its nothin.. while you stick laughin and slap balls
Shit.. you fags let dudes compass on you.. with no map involved
A fact yall, I spit ether, raise fevers.. u fags couldnt raise heaters
You motherfuckers will never get a gig.. kilo or megabyte either
Juse see though, I'm plain ill, while you stay stuck in the suckness
Fags, I'm Pro-pain.. why else you think we're fucking you up kids?

Propain

Fucking merk niggas! Theres no doubt Im the Idealistic Winner
Cause I'm known to serve any-body like cannibulistic dinners
I tell no lies, go else where to Learn The Fables
And I resemble DJs, the way I Turn-The-Tables
Leaving Hoes Scared, bring the heat to ya street when I Blow Flares
And like professional nudists you aint going No-Wear
I Drop Cats when I cock back and Pop Gats
And easily put a Verse between the both of us like Mortal Kombat
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Taking in flames, man Im fucking Heat Absorbing
Drop hot shit than take a bow like I was Eating Organs

I don't know what the link rules are in this forum, so I'll just post some up..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193889
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192345

Word, Aight uppin for some good feeback on this shit.

Cmon people..SMH.

Give me some fucking feedback!

Nice punches, especially for being keyed, both had some nice shit but a couple of played concepts too.

Fucking merk niggas! Theres no doubt Im the Idealistic Winner
Cause I'm known to serve any-body like cannibulistic dinners

that was a nice ass line son....shit stood out from both verses....nice shit Mimesis....stay up

Word..thanks for the feedback man.

Uppin for some more feed

....... lol you guys are illy yo

You best believe, son.

definately worth the read, lol

funny stuff, mims first two lines made me chuckle out loud, propain had some good ones too

too lazy to leave good feed right now though

Haha.. Appreciate it yo.

Uppin for more feedback.

shit was hot shit was crazy nice punches feeling this thought about it then i said to my-self i might need one or 2 of them punches so i aint........


shit iis crazy thou....... 8/10

^^didnt understand what you were gettin at kon...lol
need their punches..?..?
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this was short but worth the read, good concepts from both
nice to see ya still got it mim, n propain neva heard of ya but
perdy good shit........

I think this was worth the read...a good drop...punches were HOT ....propain and mimesis...good stuff...cant be mad at this one it had a purpose and it did jus tht and a lil bit mo lol holla....RTF to my "Let Loose" track link in sig

I saw some nice punches in there...def feelin it.. favorite lines:

A fact yall, I spit ether, raise fevers.. u fags couldnt raise heaters
You motherfuckers will never get a gig.. kilo or megabyte either

Fucking merk niggas! Theres no doubt Im the Idealistic Winner
Cause I'm known to serve any-body like cannibulistic dinners

can you return the favor?
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194203

Runnin shit.. gunnin kids.. gay faggots actin like i wont rip a dude
I seperate the boys from the men..
..but I got time to merk you bitches too
good
Flippin fools like its nothin.. while you stick laughin and slap balls
Shit.. you fags let dudes compass on you.. with no map involved
played, this bar woulda been insane if you worded it better man
A fact yall, I spit ether, raise fevers.. u fags couldnt raise heaters
You motherfuckers will never get a gig.. kilo or megabyte either
ok
Juse see though, I'm plain ill, while you stay stuck in the suckness
Fags, I'm Pro-pain.. why else you think we're fucking you up kids?
good
Propain

Fucking merk niggas! Theres no doubt Im the Idealistic Winner
Cause I'm known to serve any-body like cannibulistic dinners
good
I tell no lies, go else where to Learn The Fables
And I resemble DJs, the way I Turn-The-Tables
nah
Leaving Hoes Scared, bring the heat to ya street when I Blow Flares
And like professional nudists you aint going No-Wear
dope
I Drop Cats when I cock back and Pop Gats
And easily put a Verse between the both of us like Mortal Kombat
lol dope yo

Taking in flames, man Im fucking Heat Absorbing
Drop hot shit than take a bow like I was Eating Organs

^^^ DOPE LOL!!!

Rackin wins, number one.. shit yo, these kids are wack but son..
Im done holding back.. and my trips to the chiropracter are done

DOPE!!

I missed those ones lol

Lol. Thanks for the feedback. I'll return the favor on those links now.

Didnt Like It

Not Bad But

Not Into This Type Of Shit

So Keep Up And 6-10

Alright thanks everybody

Uppin for some more feed

propain???

what other site u be on???

HF RF NBS and here.

..Now give me some feed :)

HF RF NBS

HF???

RAPFLAVA.COM

NBS???

but yea this shit was hot like i said....
u did ya thing....
ya both did ya thing con-grats....

Aight thanks man..

But yo what are your aliases? if you from Rf then I must know you. Holla.

word dope as fuck, to lazy to post something more but i post once a month in the open mic forum so ...¸

And like professional nudists you aint going No-Wear

dat was a pretty good word play man seriously

Thanks for the feedback everybody. I appreciate it.

Uppin this shit for some more feedback.

Hahaha, I laughed at this shit, dope punches man...

Good read, I enjoy this shit..

yo nice man punches were madd good homes and especially for a quickkeystyle man thats nice homie keep doin ya thing and keep those punches hittin aight yall

Thanks for the feed..I appreciate this shit.

Anymore feed?

Mimesis

Rackin wins, number one.. shit yo, these kids are wack but son..
Im done holding back.. and my trips to the chiropracter are done
meh..
Runnin shit.. gunnin kids.. gay faggots actin like i wont rip a dude
I seperate the boys from the men..
..but I got time to merk you bitches too
decent punch
Flippin fools like its nothin.. while you stick laughin and slap balls
Shit.. you fags let dudes compass on you.. with no map involved
hah, this one was aight
A fact yall, I spit ether, raise fevers.. u fags couldnt raise heaters
You motherfuckers will never get a gig.. kilo or megabyte either
meh.. this one was aight
Juse see though, I'm plain ill, while you stay stuck in the suckness
Fags, I'm Pro-pain.. why else you think we're fucking you up kids?
good

Propain

Fucking merk niggas! Theres no doubt Im the Idealistic Winner
Cause I'm known to serve any-body like cannibulistic dinners
decent
I tell no lies, go else where to Learn The Fables
And I resemble DJs, the way I Turn-The-Tables
nope
Leaving Hoes Scared, bring the heat to ya street when I Blow Flares
And like professional nudists you aint going No-Wear
decent
I Drop Cats when I cock back and Pop Gats
And easily put a Verse between the both of us like Mortal Kombat
nope
Taking in flames, man Im fucking Heat Absorbing
Drop hot shit than take a bow like I was Eating Organs
nah

decent OM though.. even though its just punches :slick:

Word son.

Upping this for some more feedback..

A fact yall, I spit ether, raise fevers.. u fags couldnt raise heaters
You motherfuckers will never get a gig.. kilo or megabyte either

i get it but i think it super wack what made you think of that? lol

Lol. That bar > anything you could write.

Word to 200 views on this. Tight shit yo.