the reason i had to diss you is cause i kno u a bitch
u wanna get at me then come wit da real shit
all dem weak ass lines u spit about my kids
u mad cuz i had sex, and u never did
look its not my fault you 2 ugly to get laid, your mama should of gotten spayed
instead of producing a punk like you, your so fucking sick u probably fuckin dudes
i hate a nigga dats ignorant like yourself, u mad cuz youll never know wealth
why u gotta hate on everyone else, bitch dats a issue u need to take up wit yaself
call me a ho if you want, at least everyone knows what i say is not a front
u think ya handsome, u look like da black version of hanson
mayb u should take it to rock and roll, cuz in da rap game you'll neva b sold
i thought u already knew but imma let it b told
ur a punk ass bitch, and u probably a fucking snitch
if u eva come to my part of da south, let me kno cuz imma punch u in ya mouth
dont u ever disrespect my innocent children, unlike u they gonna make millions
unlike ya mama imma raise my children right, teach em not to worry bout bitches like u you all bark and no bite

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Dont Get It TWISTED: dats right it came from Mi$$ PimPtre$$

This diss track was weak.

Your lines are stretched.. meaning, your flow fell off as well.

You had a few multis, but you were giving up punches, structure, and flow to get them. You totally messed up your wording by using them.

Your punches didn't hit hard at all. Try to make your set up actually set up your punch. You're set ups had nothing to do with anything. They were just random talking, which made your punches not come close to being effective because 1. you ruined your structure with forced multis and 2. you didn't set anything up.

So, this wasn't very good. Just keep posting and elevating.

Hit this up if you have the time,

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193896