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Affliction vs Kon
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Kon has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-15-05 10:57 AM.
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Affliction has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-15-05 11:03 AM.
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Your a fucking joke, like your name you just a con
He all talk but no action, when it goes down .................................................I n panties he runs My punches will make you bleed, so the bull wont duck you Kid wants to battle jack the ripper, cause his ...........................................Hormone s was going crazy dude If you had your alias name, you still wouldnt see sickness and if you win this battle, it only mean you in the .................................................. .....Prostitution business Look at his OM you can tell his punches arent tight Brush your teeth barbie tooth paste is the only time you spit nice Since you aint on your alias name no more, your punches is not in effect Your punches dont connect like a broke 1-800 collect |
like un-seen paint-cans drop from roof top building,
i'll fuck u'r day up w/ an on-top hit that'll crack ya frame like show'in a naked pic to ya moms about her gay children.... 1 raps my addiction... battles skills u have are all fiction my bitches i'll chop ya penius off.. then blame her A_dick_tion....(adiction) 2 ya need to build up ya skills or get filled up with steel, that'll drive a hole deeper in ya then oil-drills, plus u'r erotic hit feels, like a preteen massage'in tits befor Da blow-up-doll-fill's....3 u'r fake spits, make shit, look like ya saliva came from a crayola-paint-set, ya verse almost had me like a precher who seen a saint scrips ready to Faint-quick 4 rip ya face with a blade N toss aicd till ya skin fade-away, only reason u'll be here longer, cuz he stuck on the net serchin for hes flow-like-tidle-wave 5 |
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Voted For: Kon
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Voted For: Affliction
like un-seen paint-cans drop from roof top building, i'll fuck u'r day up w/ an on-top hit that'll crack ya frame like show'in a naked pic to ya moms about her gay children.... 1 nah raps my addiction... battles skills u have are all fiction my bitches i'll chop ya penius off.. then blame her A_dick_tion....(adiction) 2 decent ya need to build up ya skills or get filled up with steel, that'll drive a hole deeper in ya then oil-drills, plus u'r erotic hit feels, like a preteen massage'in tits befor Da blow-up-doll-fill's....3 hate 3rhymed lines.. but this one was weak u'r fake spits, make shit, look like ya saliva came from a crayola-paint-set, ya verse almost had me like a precher who seen a saint scrips ready to Faint-quick 4 aight rip ya face with a blade N toss aicd till ya skin fade-away, only reason u'll be here longer, cuz he stuck on the net serchin for hes flow-like-tidle-wave nope Your a fucking joke, like your name you just a con He all talk but no action, when it goes down .................................................I n panties he runs decent My punches will make you bleed, so the bull wont duck you Kid wants to battle jack the ripper, cause his ...........................................Hormone s was going crazy dude nope If you had your alias name, you still wouldnt see sickness and if you win this battle, it only mean you in the .................................................. .....Prostitution business okay Look at his OM you can tell his punches arent tight Brush your teeth barbie tooth paste is the only time you spit nice punch was weak Since you aint on your alias name no more, your punches is not in effect Your punches dont connect like a broke 1-800 collect decent Kon.. make your punches harder than that.. make your structure.. sorta like Affliction’s here.. & add some personas in ur rhymes.. so u’ll win easier w/ the hard-punches.. Affliction.. make ur punches harder than that also cuz ur shit was wack.. add more personas than that w/ no links in ur rhymes too.. both need to elevate more.. |
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Voted For: Kon
I felt oyu had alot more an better punches tht landed...You had some facts in there. Keep it up... Rtf to my battle sig vs conflict. much appreciated. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Affliction
Your a fucking joke, like your name you just a con He all talk but no action, when it goes down .................................................I n panties he runs ^^didn't rhyme....3/10 My punches will make you bleed, so the bull wont duck you Kid wants to battle jack the ripper, cause his ...........................................Hormone s was going crazy dude ^^OK...coulda been better....5/10 If you had your alias name, you still wouldnt see sickness and if you win this battle, it only mean you in the .................................................. .....Prostitution business ^^HMM...ok.....6/10 Look at his OM you can tell his punches arent tight Brush your teeth barbie tooth paste is the only time you spit nice ^^the 1st line was nice..but 2nd wasn't...4/10 Since you aint on your alias name no more, your punches is not in effect Your punches dont connect like a broke 1-800 collect ^^???????????....4/10 Ok..a bunch of mediocre punches here.Structure was good.Flow was off as u didn't rhyme some parts and had a lil too much filler.Ur personals coulda hit better.Like the Jack the Ripper one.Some lines were played like the spit nice and 1800-Collect, like un-seen paint-cans drop from roof top building, i'll fuck u'r day up w/ an on-top hit that'll crack ya frame like show'in a naked pic to ya moms about her gay children.... 1 ^^Horrible....2/10 raps my addiction... battles skills u have are all fiction my bitches i'll chop ya penius off.. then blame her A_dick_tion....(adiction) 2 ^^No...awful wordplay..1/10 ya need to build up ya skills or get filled up with steel, that'll drive a hole deeper in ya then oil-drills, plus u'r erotic hit feels, like a preteen massage'in tits befor Da blow-up-doll-fill's....3 ^^zzzzzzzzzzzzz...1/10 u'r fake spits, make shit, look like ya saliva came from a crayola-paint-set, ya verse almost had me like a precher who seen a saint scrips ready to Faint-quick 4 ^^Wtf?...2/10rip ya face with a blade N toss aicd till ya skin fade-away, only reason u'll be here longer, cuz he stuck on the net serchin for hes flow-like-tidle-wave 5 ^^NO...1/10 Man...horrible.first..stop with the weird structure..type ya verse normal.2nd..stop saying shit just because they rhyme.That'd get you nowhere.And where are your personal?I saw some wordplay..but it was embarrasing. Vote-Affliction RTF BELOW http://community10.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204211 |
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This was feedback posted for Kon
heard you talk alot of shit so I had to check your stuff.
your not as good as you try to soundlike kid. |
Voted For: Kon
umm none of this battle was relli good at all ...non yall had schemes wrd play metas punches jus some phony ass wanna be off a cd shit but im givin it to kon cuz the other dude used the word con totally out of text learn ya wrds b4 u go usin em lol |
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say what u say... believe what u believe in.... and get served the same way as the rest cuz thats what i believe would happen... EZ!!! and i dont try to sound better then i im cuz then i would duck many people like nah u to weak but i dont i battle all to better my-self why dont u battle me?? sorry about that freepost...... upp'in this battle...... |
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Voted For: Kon
im going to go with kon, he had the edge in this battle, i think his punches and wordplay were better and worded better then affliction, the flows were both choppy, both could have structured the lines better, this is how i see it... punches:kon wordplay:kon personals:kon consistancy:kon overall:kon winner:kon http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210858 |
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