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06-13-05, 01:48 PM
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Banned: Biting
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dirty hands.... trying to work the flow....
IP: 83FD 045A
what u thought it was all about punch-lines???
PEEP: They want a topic but my facets are too multi to define... my spine intertwines with bass lines and interlaced rhymes... designed and unfurled to make your girls ass clap to beats... and make a male mind either have to think or have to shrink... Perhaps a geek is behind the words scrolling across the screen... rap to me is a tapestry of things both holy and blasphemy... starting at the future and shooting right past me, that's the key... too many people are too focused on making punchlines... they forget there's more, so to a beast like me it's lunchtime... And............no apathy will be.attached to me... Don't take me for a joke, I'm serious as sam..no games played... I still used blank tape like mp3's were never made... still haven't totally rejuvenated after I had my clever phase... I'm obsolete as man wearing gators in the Everglades... I've seen better days and nights, years since I've blazed a mic... Are the pearly gates in sight, should I just wave goodbye?... Because many touch crazy topics not seen with lasik optics... While my favorite topic seems to mimic an insane synopsis.... HELL YEA MOTHER FUCKER.... im still here doing me its how ever u want it punch-lines, flow, multis, metaphores only its whatever topical poetry DANM NIGGAS ITS NEVER GONNA STOP DOCUMENTED MURDER IS HERE IN THE FLESH WHATS HOOD NIGGAS... YO yo yo FUCKTHAT IM OUT!!! DOCUMENTED MURDER 1...... mother fuckers haha!! |
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06-14-05, 08:09 AM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 473F 6D42
ok dont really get what this is like blended two different things at the time cuz it looks like it gots a topical and text at the same time but i must say it gots good vocabulary usage good flow this is good dont get me wrong im just sayin what it is? but no matter man like it ok man good job and keep doin ya thing
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  STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-14-05, 01:01 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 16A2 A251
o i guess it was part topical and just flowing my mind frame was kind mixed up cuz i saw alot of people who say punches is everything and true punches do help but its not everything....
flow means alot as-well and if u cant flow words correctly together and make sense outta them then u'r not lyrical.... but yes its part topical N just a way of me showing ya i can flow if i wanted to.... thankz for the feed back.... upp'in for more |
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