Black Queen vs K-Trini
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-01-05 at 01:00 AM

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Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-01-05 12:31 AM.

ima half ass dis shit

there's nothing left for you to say, man you got the foolish shooks
cause you suck at rhymes worser than vacuuming up dr. seuss's books
i'll have to try and settle down, im chasing you too quick unto your death
you'se like a midget on treadmill with this battle, a little short-of-breath
so you know I got most of yall roasted this gone be your last day
dogg i'll smoke your ass so bad your bodybag was actually an ash-tray

K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-01-05 12:55 AM.

Shit's conspicous that ur unhappy and face is bombarded with acne
Postin ya pic,while hidin ya eyes&hair???
.................................................. ...or one whole side a ya face really!!!!!!
Readin ya verses,shows that not only ya face,but skills are a wreck
&only thing this repuslive bitch is capable a stiffing up is her neck
So someone tell this loathsome hoe not to fuck around with an ace
Cause her hideous ass dun lap to hearts,
.................................................. ......even if she dismembered waists!!!!!!


http://community.rapverse.com/attac...achmentid=10800
^^Black Queen hidin her eyes hair and one whole side of her face


Dun under stand the punches then dun vote........I added a color to the key words needed to understand in order to get the punch.

LMAO.>.......my goodness.........this is the easiest battle I ever been in!!!!!!

nO VACB,CREATIVITY,FLOW.....NUTIN IN UR VERSE.!!!!!!!!

LOL.......dun mistake my immaturing for whackness BQ..............U lost this so bad.

This was like Arnold in his days gon to rape Gandi.LOL........U suck Black Queen.I only been raping since April.Look at my verse to urs........damn this was eay.

VOTE muther fuckers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

VOTE LAZY PEICE A SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

black queen...........up this too you fuckin bitch..........

uppin............................................. ..............

*ignores wat he say*
uppin kids so you can vote..

Voted For: Black Queen

Black Queen... damn ya verse was hot! Yur opener could of been a little better... but damn! that closer that was sick... "smokin you like ash-tray" lines are played.. but you flipped it and made it really hot!... your punches were hard and not one of yur lines was bad

K-Trini... 2 of yur bars were stretched and ruined the flow to that bar... verse was still good but yur punches werent as hard... sorry just wasnt feelin ya verse

*No hate just honest opinion* *Please RTF*

thx misk return dat favor wen i get a chance promise

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 

Trini, ya verse was whack...the personals are fake, an non-hittin even if they wasnt fake.

Black, you KILLED IT....Midget line was RAW, Do ya thing ma'

Voted For: Black Queen

shouldnt really have to explain my self in this.....but i will cuz im bored

k-trini~~~ya shit didnt rhyme at all to b real wit cha....ya lines was a little stretched ya structure is all fucked..all those periods aren't needed...those could be replaced wit decent punches for real...

Black Queen~~simple verse but got the job done...nice creative lines in there with the midget and ash tray lines....opener could have been a lil better but it was decent

v=BQ

i thought dat k-trini yo was a girl....u just a lil naggin bitch....dont be talkin 2 my girl BQ like dat 4-real....she just shut ya mouth up for real...

wat da hell...............people votin for you..........I outta seriously leave this site then.

no you outta just quit rappin period.....this site aint one of those sites where we be like nah u need to work on this and u'll get better if u think u go hard and drop some wack ass shit den we just gonna bitch u....keep ya head up kid....and just quit rappin try hop-scotch or sumthin

Voted For: Black Queen

Aiight lets see:

BQ:
there's nothing left for you to say, man you got the foolish shooks
cause you suck at rhymes worser than vacuuming up dr. seuss's books
ehh... ok..... 4/10
i'll have to try and settle down, im chasing you too quick unto your death
you'se like a midget on treadmill with this battle, a little short-of-breath
not bad, could have been harder.... 5/10
so you know I got most of yall roasted this gone be your last day
dogg i'll smoke your ass so bad your bodybag was actually an ash-tray
eh.............. 4/10

Overall, i can tell you half assed this shit, cuz I'm seen way better from you. You really weren't hittin' as hard. No wordplay or wit. Jus wasn't anything that made me go "oh!!" and shit. nah mean? But um... 13/30

Ok, Trini now:

KT:
Shit's conspicous that ur unhappy and face is bombarded with acne
Postin ya pic,while hidin ya eyes&hair???
.................................................. ...or one whole side a ya face really!!!!!!
nah, didn't even rhyme really.. 2/10
Readin ya verses,shows that not only ya face,but skills are a wreck
&only thing this repuslive bitch is capable a stiffing up is her neck
nice.... 6/10
So someone tell this loathsome hoe not to fuck around with an ace
Cause her hideous ass dun lap to hearts,
.................................................. ......even if she dismembered waists!!!!!!
nah.. not hard hittin' 3/10

Not that great a verse, it was decent I guess. Your flow was ok, but try adding more wordplay and wit into your lines man. You gotta work on that. good try tho. 11/30

Overall, this was weak-ass battle. but BQ came a LITTLE better. So vote/BQ

oh and RTF, if you don't vote will be removed.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197037

Voted For: Black Queen

K-TRINI


Shit's conspicous that ur unhappy and face is bombarded with acne
Postin ya pic,while hidin ya eyes&hair???
.................................................. ...or one whole side a ya face really!!!!!!
^^ATTEMPTED PERSONAL...NOT REALLY HITTIN 6/10
Readin ya verses,shows that not only ya face,but skills are a wreck
&only thing this repuslive bitch is capable a stiffing up is her neck
^^PLAYED...PLAYED..5/10
So someone tell this loathsome hoe not to fuck around with an ace
Cause her hideous ass dun lap to hearts,
.................................................. ......even if she dismembered waists!!!!!!
MOST CREATIVE BAR...7/10

BLACK QUEEN

there's nothing left for you to say, man you got the foolish shooks
cause you suck at rhymes worser than vacuuming up dr. seuss's books
^^YEH...KINDA PLAYED 5/10
i'll have to try and settle down, im chasing you too quick unto your death
you'se like a midget on treadmill with this battle, a little short-of-breath
BETTER BAR....6/10
so you know I got most of yall roasted this gone be your last day
dogg i'll smoke your ass so bad your bodybag was actually an ash-tray
^^LOVIN THIS BAR 8.5/10..
OPENER FILLER BUT MAD CREATIVITY ON THE ASH TRAY BODY BAG

AVERAGE BATTLE OVERALL....I GIVE IT TO BLACK QUEEN, TRINI WUD HAVE SNEAKED IT IF IT WASNT FOR BLACK QUEENS CLOSER....

that you judicial so respectable i been tryna tell him but ill jus let him talk his shit :laugh:

uppin............................................. ..

uppin............................................. ...................

lol i see how yo bitch ass finally shut up talkin shit lol

.................................................. ..................

Voted For: Black Queen

blackqueen:
there's nothing left for you to say, man you got the foolish shooks
cause you suck at rhymes worser than vacuuming up dr. seuss's books
^^^^YEAH U DID HALF ASS IT...DA PUNCHLINE WAS WEAK BUT UR RYHME SCHEME WAS GOOD
i'll have to try and settle down, im chasing you too quick unto your death
you'se like a midget on treadmill with this battle, a little short-of-breath
^^^^LOL...GOOD
so you know I got most of yall roasted this gone be your last day
dogg i'll smoke your ass so bad your bodybag was actually an ash-tray
^^^DECENT CLOSER...NOTHIN HARD...

k-trini:
Shit's conspicous that ur unhappy and face is bombarded with acne
Postin ya pic,while hidin ya eyes&hair???
.................................................. ...or one whole side a ya face really!!!!!!
^^^^U STRETCHED DA SHIT OUT DIS BAR AND...ACNE & REALLY DONT RYHME
Readin ya verses,shows that not only ya face,but skills are a wreck
&only thing this repuslive bitch is capable a stiffing up is her neck
^^^I AINT GET IT FAM LOL....STIFFIN?
So someone tell this loathsome hoe not to fuck around with an ace
Cause her hideous ass dun lap to hearts,
.................................................. ......even if she dismembered waists!!!!!!
^^^^LOL..I REMEMBER U SAID SOMTHIN ABOUT MY SPELLIN...WHAT DA FUCK IS "DUN"?...DO U MEAN "DONE"


ANYWAY DIS BATTLE WAS WUN SIDED...CUZZ TRINI CAME WITH ABSOLUTEY NO HOTT LIENS...HE HAD PERSONALS BUT IF THEY DONT RYHME THERE NOTHIN....BLACK QUEEN CAME DECENT NOTHIN REALLY STOOD OUT BUT SHE AINT REALLY NEED IT LOOKIN AT TRINI'S VERSE


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