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DoContinue vs L.I.
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8 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting NO DR mofos please vote honestly Minimum posts to vote: 350 Check in by: 07-04-05 at 07:44 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
i dont know why the check is a half hour... i didnt do it on purpose
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L.I. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-05 07:36 PM.
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DoContinue has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-05 07:39 PM.
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ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests |
this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why?
Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I. seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame? DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L. _________________________________________________ Bwova fo wheel?= brother for real wi-TIRE-ment=retirement K.L.L. + I. = KILL and i didnt bite that line from JAY Z, notice the wordplay, I spun it to make the diss if you dont get somethin, just PM either of us and ask |
decent drop fam........................................
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This was feedback posted for DoContinue
Checkin the polls.....................................
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i guess i should up this and i also need to make it 50 characters.
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Voted For: L.I.
ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis .. vs. .. mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment ^^ do- u made alot of your shit seem too confusing while li's punches were direct and obvious Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for L.I.
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so ur sayin that...... siimplicity wins battles....... hmmmmmmm, so ive been wrong all along!!!!!!!!
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i think i get what he's sayin tho... meh, its koo, at least he attempted at explaining it... i know some ppl that just vote ya know? thanx pp2 |
Voted For: DoContinue
ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping ^^coulda been waaaaay better u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house ^^^ok............ ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis ^^Basic similie...... u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests ^^OK...but SAT lines are a little played OK verse.HAd an ight rhyme sheme.AT least it wasn't that basic.Punches lacked at some points.1st bar could been way better if worded better.2nd. line lacked hard hittin punch...but a good multi.3rd bar was too basic.ANd 4th was a lil played. this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why? Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I. ^^NO...set up bad..and punch sucked seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame? DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane ^^OK..but uncreative mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment ^^Best line..... couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L. ^^OK.... You came pretty weak here.BAsic rhyme shceme.1st bar was a horrible opener.2nd bar was OK...but uncreative.3rd was nice...lisp..then talking like it.BEst line here.4th bar was meh.Weak battle..but ya got it for the lisp line. Vote-DOContinue http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202287 |
Voted For: L.I.
this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why? Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I. OK, PRETTY DECENT OPENER, BASIC RHYMING. seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame? DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane UMM, OK NAMEPLAY BUT PUNCH WAS WEAK. mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment BASIC PUNCH, BUT GOOD WORDPLAY AND PERSONAL. couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L. YOUR BEST BAR, CREATIVE PERSONAL AND GOOD QORDPLAY, NICE ONE! __________________________________________________ ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping GOOD WORDPLAY AND NICE NAMEPLAY, DECENT OPENER. u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house AN OK PUNCH, KINDA CREATIVE AND IT HIT. ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis I SUPPOSE IT HIT BUT THIS WAS WAYYYYY TO BASIC. u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests HAHAHA, CREATIVE CLOSER...GOOD SHITS. __________________________________________________ LI CAME WEAK HERE IMO, I THOUGHT IHE WOULDA TOOK IT EASY BUT IT TURNED OUT TO BA A GOOD BATTLE. IT WAS CLOSE AS BOTH VERSES WERE INCONSISTANT WITH SOLID PUNCHES. BOTH CLOSERS ON EACH VERSE WERE STRAIGHT FIRE TOO. AFTER RE-READIN THE VERSES IMA GO WIT LI BY A HAIR FOR HAVING STRONGER NAMEPLAY. YOURS WAS AIGHT DC BUT THEY DIDNT HIT AS HARD....ALSO FIX YOUR STRUCTURE UP. NO HATE RTF IN SIG SO I DONT HAVE TO REMOVE THIS!! |
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Voted For: L.I.
Pretty Tight Battle, But L.I Came Harder With more Effective Punches.. yah Both had good Sturucture and Flow, And aight Personals, But L.I's Punches Weighed Heavier agaist DoContinue's witch in Turn to the win in my eyes.. V/L.I Return A HONEST Vote on a Battle in My sig.. |
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Voted For: L.I.
DoContinue: this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why? Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I. vs L.I. ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests v/L.I better punches, good wordplay, I've seen better from you... this is Mel |
Voted For: DoContinue
ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping ^^^coulda made a better play off his name man....but it's ight...5/10 u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house ^^didn't rhyme well.....ight punch....5/10 ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis ^^basic ........3/10 u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests ^^basic...........2/10 OK...your verse got worse and worse as ut went.The first bar with the DOknot Continue rapping was ight...but coulda been better.The 2nd was ight punch but didn't rhyme well.3rd was basic.4th was even more basic.You can't just say "i heard better from andy watever" and expect to get positive reactions. this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why? Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I. ^^not much of a punch....1/10 seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame? DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane ^^Good...4/10 mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment ^^this was dope..Lisp..wi-tire....9/10 couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L. ^^Ok....5/10 Ok...1st bar was whack as fuck.2nd was mediocre...but that 3rd bar was dope.Complexity and creativity at best. Flow was choppy at times.Set-ups could use some improvement...but you got this battle easy. Vote-DoContinue RTF in my battle with stanza below http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203668 |
yaaaay!!! votes....
*goes to RTF* *ups battle!!!!* |
This was feedback posted for DoContinue
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This was feedback posted for L.I.
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Voted For: DoContinue
ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping 7.....good punch... u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house 6....ok ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis 3...nah...i ain't like this one u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests 2...played concept this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why? Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I. 5...decent seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame? DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane 3..weak...just cuz the startin letters spell his name don't make it a personal or nutin mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment 7......nice couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L. 6....good... This was a real close battle here.But..Docuntinue got this. L.I...I thought those 2 bars you started off with were good.But the others after sucked man.Like ...that 3rd bar...you just stated andy mila w/e...got better raps than him..and just statin shit is a no....unless it's a personal..which it wasn't.And that last bar..with the SAt shit...played as fuck. Vote-Docontinue. Rtf in 3 days.....or this vote will be removed :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=207400 |
Voted For: L.I.
L.I. ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping ^Good wordplay, also nice punch man..7/10^ u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house ^Again nice wordplay/reference...and punch 8/10^ ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis ^Lmao mad me laugh.....thats a low blow 6/10^ u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests ^Nice reference and diss, good closer...6/10^ Overall-Ur verse was filled with.....Good punches...they hit hard indeed....ur personals were felt with good wordplay....vocab was iight nothing to nag about....overall 8/10 for ur verse Do Continue this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why? Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I. ^Good multis ok punch nothing special 4/10^ seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame? DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane ^Good wordplayy and nice punch 6/10^ mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment ^Lol nice punch and way to insert is initials 7/10^ couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L. ^Mehh not feelin this closer...coulda been better 5/10^ Overall-Ur verse was ok, good word play and some hard punches..most weak....personals were ok...but nothing special..overall ur verse was 5/10^ v/L.I. rtf on one of my links since i took the time to peep urs http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206909 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206261 |
This was feedback posted for DoContinue
checkin the pollllsssss my niggas...............................
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Voted For: DoContinue
L.I. came good but really didnt have to many personals, good structure and some nice punches but DoContinue came wit dat good wordplay, i especially liked tha last line shyt was raw as fuck, DoContinue gets tha vote |
Voted For: L.I.
aiight let's see: L.I. ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping lol word, that's tight....... 7/10 u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house word, nice....... 6/10 ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis ehh.... wtf, son? quit rap fo reel....... 2/10 u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests lol..... word nice closer........ 6/10 overall, you had a coo verse....... could have been better tho........ 23/40 DC: this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why? Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I. eh..... ok............ 4/10 seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame? DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane ehh..... shit's kinda played......... 4/10 mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment lol this was coo.............. 7/10 couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L. ehh........ not that great......... 4/10 overall you really didn't have anything that amazing. Could have been better. good try tho........ 19/23 v/L.I. |
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