Black City vs bdotones
 

Battle Rules:

8 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-09-05 at 11:04 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

bdotones has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 11:05 AM.

Black City has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 11:07 AM.

If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/
you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"//

you rap like "donkeys walking in reverse", "a$$ backwards"/
you the "son of a dead obese man wit dominant genes, you fat bastard"//

Black City, more like Gray Town, you a "bootleg comedian", a "fake clown"/
you wouldn't get a "first", "playing football", wit "8 downs"//

your "fingers" can't type heat, homie, I got "phive" on it/
your rhymes like conversations about failed rappers, your lines boring//

"B.C", couldn't rep a "black city", in egypt, 5,000 years "before christ"/
its alright, ya "flow broke", you can't spit "quality", you can't "affoard mikes"

thats 10 homie, I'll spot you six

aw shit i fucked up...............................

what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections?
fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no****

^^dat was supposed to be different..damn

but dope verse BDO...g'luck

Voted For: bdotones

Black City

its time for the teenager from Detroit to rip tha ADULT from Brooklyn
a twenty three year old homo, AY Q DIS GUY IS GAY ASS LOOKIN!!
4/10...gay lines about tha q= played
you say you a teacher, wow, for what subject do you teach?
is it sexual education? and all the kiddy pants you reach
3/10...wack, badly worded also
how stupid do you have to be to call out somebody like me?
i shouldnt have to drop against a nigga wit tha crew like 3-I-V-E
5/10...it was alright
what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections?
fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no
2/10...and ur lucky to get 1....stupid and doesnt rhyme
and what tha fuck is a B Dot Ones? hold up, let me guess
BDotOnes tha type of football buff dat take jock jizz on tha chest
3/10...horrible
nigga you trash so take ya bullshit verse and throw it out
cuz everybody on tha board dont believe what comes out ya mouth
7/10...basic but your best bar

24/60....40%

p.s...........if all of them were "simple"..why the hell did u find it necessary to have explanations at the end?


bdotones

If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/
you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"//
4/10...good wordplay..but stretched
you rap like "donkeys walking in reverse", "a$$ backwards"/
you the "son of a dead obese man wit dominant genes, you fat bastard"//
5/10...haha..decent
Black City, more like Gray Town, you a "bootleg comedian", a "fake clown"/
you wouldn't get a "first", "playing football", wit "8 downs"//
7/10...nice wordplay
your "fingers" can't type heat, homie, I got "phive" on it/
your rhymes like conversations about failed rappers, your lines boring//
3/10...wasnt really feelin it
"B.C", couldn't rep a "black city", in egypt, 5,000 years "before christ"/
its alright, ya "flow broke", you can't spit "quality", you can't "affoard mikes"
6/10...pretty good

25/50......50%

***meant to say "and ur lucky to get 2"............................

Voted For: Black City

its time for the teenager from Detroit to rip tha ADULT from Brooklyn
a twenty three year old homo, AY Q DIS GUY IS GAY ASS LOOKIN!!*
um....ok
you say you a teacher, wow, for what subject do you teach?
is it sexual education? and all the kiddy pants you reach**
haha...damn
how stupid do you have to be to call out somebody like me?
i shouldnt have to drop against a nigga wit tha crew like 3-I-V-E***
not a very good personal but nice attempt
what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections?
fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no****
where was the rhyme here???
and what tha fuck is a B Dot Ones? hold up, let me guess
BDotOnes tha type of football buff dat take jock jizz on tha chest*****
damn...haha
nigga you trash so take ya bullshit verse and throw it out
cuz everybody on tha board dont believe what comes out ya mouth
um...not a very good finisher




Breakdown- This verse was mediocre...kinda of nice....some lines were like WOW and then you started to to fall off then you would come back wit somethin nice...but this verse was nice RATED-6/10






If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/
you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"//
complexity unbelievable and a real nice punch...
you rap like "donkeys walking in reverse", "a$$ backwards"/
you the "son of a dead obese man wit dominant genes, you fat bastard"//
ok
Black City, more like Gray Town, you a "bootleg comedian", a "fake clown"/
you wouldn't get a "first", "playing football", wit "8 downs"//
ok...not really hittin
your "fingers" can't type heat, homie, I got "phive" on it/
your rhymes like conversations about failed rappers, your lines boring//
um...no no
"B.C", couldn't rep a "black city", in egypt, 5,000 years "before christ"/
its alright, ya "flow broke", you can't spit "quality", you can't "affoard mikes"
haha


Breakdown- This verse was ok...it feel off in the middle but still had me wantin more from the first bar...it was really hard to rate your verse cuz you would surprise me with a real nice line then you would rhyme like Dr. Seuss....RATED-7/10


VOTE-BD (only because it seemed like he put forth a lil more thought into his rhyme.......REALLY CLOSE)

my vote was for bdotones.........^^^^^^^^^^^^

well I guess you got some help black

it should be 2 - 0

but oh well

uppin

I just voted on 6 battles...come on people

NAW...CHANGE THA VOTE...I DONT FUCK WIT LUCKY VOTES, IF ITS FOR U THEN ITS FOR U...PM STROBE

uppin

i didnt make the mistake...c-hood did.............

i know who made tha mistake silly boy...lets get it changed

uppin

uppin for votes...people start up battles without voting for others

bdot pm'd me sayin i made a mistake

Voted For: bdotones

yo . . ."bdotones" you got my vote ---i like the word play you opened with . . . u finished kinda soft tho . .either way you got the vote over "Black City"--- your word play was better flow easier to follow . . . overall you dropped a better flow

Voted For: bdotones

good verse.... alot of good punches. made me laugh. good wordplay an everything.. Keep repping.... Vote on one of my battles cause they needa be closed as a favor in return much appreciated

..................................................

uppin

this battle has been alive for 3 weeks

uppin to end this

Voted For: Black City

I like how you came in it seem as though yo opponent was a lil weak but the punch line you had was real and shit you won hands down

Voted For: bdotones

chyeah, punchlines was tight in this dudes verse

IP:


If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/
you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"//

was a good line n the line in ur verse that opened my eyes,

uppin for votes...just need one more

thank you in advance

Voted For: bdotones

If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/
you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"//
3....played concept with the holding head one
you rap like "donkeys walking in reverse", "a$$ backwards"/
you the "son of a dead obese man wit dominant genes, you fat bastard"//
3...if it's ass-backwards..then that means hiz shit iz nice...and ok punch
Black City, more like Gray Town, you a "bootleg comedian", a "fake clown"/
you wouldn't get a "first", "playing football", wit "8 downs"//
4...ok..
your "fingers" can't type heat, homie, I got "phive" on it/
your rhymes like conversations about failed rappers, your lines boring//
4,....decent..but set-up wuz gay
"B.C", couldn't rep a "black city", in egypt, 5,000 years "before christ"/
its alright, ya "flow broke", you can't spit "quality", you can't "affoard mikes"
4...meh..

its time for the teenager from Detroit to rip tha ADULT from Brooklyn
a twenty three year old homo, AY Q DIS GUY IS GAY ASS LOOKIN!!*
2....retarted
you say you a teacher, wow, for what subject do you teach?
is it sexual education? and all the kiddy pants you reach**
2...stupid..this shit iz really played
how stupid do you have to be to call out somebody like me?
i shouldnt have to drop against a nigga wit tha crew like 3-I-V-E***
3..no..not connecting
what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections?
fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no****
5..decent
and what tha fuck is a B Dot Ones? hold up, let me guess
BDotOnes tha type of football buff dat take jock jizz on tha chest*****
3...weak
nigga you trash so take ya bullshit verse and throw it out
cuz everybody on tha board dont believe what comes out ya mouth
3...no

OK..I vote BDotbones..for harder hittin punches and shit

Vote-BDotbones
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