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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-09-05 at 11:04 AM

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bdotones has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 11:05 AM.

Black City has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 11:07 AM.

If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/
you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"//

you rap like "donkeys walking in reverse", "a$$ backwards"/
you the "son of a dead obese man wit dominant genes, you fat bastard"//

Black City, more like Gray Town, you a "bootleg comedian", a "fake clown"/
you wouldn't get a "first", "playing football", wit "8 downs"//

your "fingers" can't type heat, homie, I got "phive" on it/
your rhymes like conversations about failed rappers, your lines boring//

"B.C", couldn't rep a "black city", in egypt, 5,000 years "before christ"/
its alright, ya "flow broke", you can't spit "quality", you can't "affoard mikes"

thats 10 homie, I'll spot you six

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B dot Ones

3ive Crew

text record (tb) 21 - 6

audio record (tb) 4 - 1

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aw shit i fucked up...............................

what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections?
fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no****

^^dat was supposed to be different..damn

but dope verse BDO...g'luck

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Voted For: bdotones

Black City

its time for the teenager from Detroit to rip tha ADULT from Brooklyn
a twenty three year old homo, AY Q DIS GUY IS GAY ASS LOOKIN!!
4/10...gay lines about tha q= played
you say you a teacher, wow, for what subject do you teach?
is it sexual education? and all the kiddy pants you reach
3/10...wack, badly worded also
how stupid do you have to be to call out somebody like me?
i shouldnt have to drop against a nigga wit tha crew like 3-I-V-E
5/10...it was alright
what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections?
fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no
2/10...and ur lucky to get 1....stupid and doesnt rhyme
and what tha fuck is a B Dot Ones? hold up, let me guess
BDotOnes tha type of football buff dat take jock jizz on tha chest
3/10...horrible
nigga you trash so take ya bullshit verse and throw it out
cuz everybody on tha board dont believe what comes out ya mouth
7/10...basic but your best bar

24/60....40%

p.s...........if all of them were "simple"..why the hell did u find it necessary to have explanations at the end?


bdotones

If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/
you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"//
4/10...good wordplay..but stretched
you rap like "donkeys walking in reverse", "a$$ backwards"/
you the "son of a dead obese man wit dominant genes, you fat bastard"//
5/10...haha..decent
Black City, more like Gray Town, you a "bootleg comedian", a "fake clown"/
you wouldn't get a "first", "playing football", wit "8 downs"//
7/10...nice wordplay
your "fingers" can't type heat, homie, I got "phive" on it/
your rhymes like conversations about failed rappers, your lines boring//
3/10...wasnt really feelin it
"B.C", couldn't rep a "black city", in egypt, 5,000 years "before christ"/
its alright, ya "flow broke", you can't spit "quality", you can't "affoard mikes"
6/10...pretty good

25/50......50%

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***meant to say "and ur lucky to get 2"............................

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Voted For: Black City

its time for the teenager from Detroit to rip tha ADULT from Brooklyn
a twenty three year old homo, AY Q DIS GUY IS GAY ASS LOOKIN!!*
um....ok
you say you a teacher, wow, for what subject do you teach?
is it sexual education? and all the kiddy pants you reach**
haha...damn
how stupid do you have to be to call out somebody like me?
i shouldnt have to drop against a nigga wit tha crew like 3-I-V-E***
not a very good personal but nice attempt
what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections?
fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no****
where was the rhyme here???
and what tha fuck is a B Dot Ones? hold up, let me guess
BDotOnes tha type of football buff dat take jock jizz on tha chest*****
damn...haha
nigga you trash so take ya bullshit verse and throw it out
cuz everybody on tha board dont believe what comes out ya mouth
um...not a very good finisher




Breakdown- This verse was mediocre...kinda of nice....some lines were like WOW and then you started to to fall off then you would come back wit somethin nice...but this verse was nice RATED-6/10






If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/
you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"//
complexity unbelievable and a real nice punch...
you rap like "donkeys walking in reverse", "a$$ backwards"/
you the "son of a dead obese man wit dominant genes, you fat bastard"//
ok
Black City, more like Gray Town, you a "bootleg comedian", a "fake clown"/
you wouldn't get a "first", "playing football", wit "8 downs"//
ok...not really hittin
your "fingers" can't type heat, homie, I got "phive" on it/
your rhymes like conversations about failed rappers, your lines boring//
um...no no
"B.C", couldn't rep a "black city", in egypt, 5,000 years "before christ"/
its alright, ya "flow broke", you can't spit "quality", you can't "affoard mikes"
haha


Breakdown- This verse was ok...it feel off in the middle but still had me wantin more from the first bar...it was really hard to rate your verse cuz you would surprise me with a real nice line then you would rhyme like Dr. Seuss....RATED-7/10


VOTE-BD (only because it seemed like he put forth a lil more thought into his rhyme.......REALLY CLOSE)

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Who made my Sig- Shief BITCH!

my vote was for bdotones.........^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Who made my Sig- Shief BITCH!

well I guess you got some help black

it should be 2 - 0

but oh well

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B dot Ones

3ive Crew

text record (tb) 21 - 6

audio record (tb) 4 - 1

uppin

I just voted on 6 battles...come on people

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B dot Ones

3ive Crew

text record (tb) 21 - 6

audio record (tb) 4 - 1

NAW...CHANGE THA VOTE...I DONT FUCK WIT LUCKY VOTES, IF ITS FOR U THEN ITS FOR U...PM STROBE

uppin

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i didnt make the mistake...c-hood did.............

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