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Black City vs bdotones
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8 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-09-05 at 11:04 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
bdotones has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 11:05 AM.
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Black City has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 11:07 AM.
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If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/
you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"// you rap like "donkeys walking in reverse", "a$$ backwards"/ you the "son of a dead obese man wit dominant genes, you fat bastard"// Black City, more like Gray Town, you a "bootleg comedian", a "fake clown"/ you wouldn't get a "first", "playing football", wit "8 downs"// your "fingers" can't type heat, homie, I got "phive" on it/ your rhymes like conversations about failed rappers, your lines boring// "B.C", couldn't rep a "black city", in egypt, 5,000 years "before christ"/ its alright, ya "flow broke", you can't spit "quality", you can't "affoard mikes" thats 10 homie, I'll spot you six |
its murkin time once again!!! __________________________________________________ ___________ its time for the teenager from Detroit to rip tha ADULT from Brooklyn a twenty three year old homo, AY Q DIS GUY IS GAY ASS LOOKIN!!* you say you a teacher, wow, for what subject do you teach? is it sexual education? and all the kiddy pants you reach** how stupid do you have to be to call out somebody like me? i shouldnt have to drop against a nigga wit tha crew like 3-I-V-E*** what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections? fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no**** and what tha fuck is a B Dot Ones? hold up, let me guess BDotOnes tha type of football buff dat take jock jizz on tha chest***** nigga you trash so take ya bullshit verse and throw it out cuz everybody on tha board dont believe what comes out ya mouth****** __________________________________________________ ____________ (simple=easy understandin) *simple, he gay and The Q gay **he a teacher, simple ***simple, wack ass crew name ****simple LMAO, simple *****simple, he love football LMAO ******simple, simple still dont get it?...dont fuckin vote...that is all |
aw shit i fucked up...............................
what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections? fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no**** ^^dat was supposed to be different..damn but dope verse BDO...g'luck |
Voted For: bdotones
Black City its time for the teenager from Detroit to rip tha ADULT from Brooklyn a twenty three year old homo, AY Q DIS GUY IS GAY ASS LOOKIN!! 4/10...gay lines about tha q= played you say you a teacher, wow, for what subject do you teach? is it sexual education? and all the kiddy pants you reach 3/10...wack, badly worded also how stupid do you have to be to call out somebody like me? i shouldnt have to drop against a nigga wit tha crew like 3-I-V-E 5/10...it was alright what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections? fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no 2/10...and ur lucky to get 1....stupid and doesnt rhyme and what tha fuck is a B Dot Ones? hold up, let me guess BDotOnes tha type of football buff dat take jock jizz on tha chest 3/10...horrible nigga you trash so take ya bullshit verse and throw it out cuz everybody on tha board dont believe what comes out ya mouth 7/10...basic but your best bar 24/60....40% p.s...........if all of them were "simple"..why the hell did u find it necessary to have explanations at the end? bdotones If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/ you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"// 4/10...good wordplay..but stretched you rap like "donkeys walking in reverse", "a$$ backwards"/ you the "son of a dead obese man wit dominant genes, you fat bastard"// 5/10...haha..decent Black City, more like Gray Town, you a "bootleg comedian", a "fake clown"/ you wouldn't get a "first", "playing football", wit "8 downs"// 7/10...nice wordplay your "fingers" can't type heat, homie, I got "phive" on it/ your rhymes like conversations about failed rappers, your lines boring// 3/10...wasnt really feelin it "B.C", couldn't rep a "black city", in egypt, 5,000 years "before christ"/ its alright, ya "flow broke", you can't spit "quality", you can't "affoard mikes" 6/10...pretty good 25/50......50% |
***meant to say "and ur lucky to get 2"............................
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Voted For: Black City
its time for the teenager from Detroit to rip tha ADULT from Brooklyn a twenty three year old homo, AY Q DIS GUY IS GAY ASS LOOKIN!!* um....ok you say you a teacher, wow, for what subject do you teach? is it sexual education? and all the kiddy pants you reach** haha...damn how stupid do you have to be to call out somebody like me? i shouldnt have to drop against a nigga wit tha crew like 3-I-V-E*** not a very good personal but nice attempt what do dat stand for? three ignorant virgan erections? fuckin gay, stop stalkin all of my battles nigga, dats a no-no**** where was the rhyme here??? and what tha fuck is a B Dot Ones? hold up, let me guess BDotOnes tha type of football buff dat take jock jizz on tha chest***** damn...haha nigga you trash so take ya bullshit verse and throw it out cuz everybody on tha board dont believe what comes out ya mouth um...not a very good finisher Breakdown- This verse was mediocre...kinda of nice....some lines were like WOW and then you started to to fall off then you would come back wit somethin nice...but this verse was nice RATED-6/10 If you was a "transvestike", who "switched sexes" cuz of a "mid"-life crisis, you wouldn't be "half a man"/ you "act gangsta", but "wouldn't hold heat", standing in the "desert wit Al Quada in Pakastan"// complexity unbelievable and a real nice punch... you rap like "donkeys walking in reverse", "a$$ backwards"/ you the "son of a dead obese man wit dominant genes, you fat bastard"// ok Black City, more like Gray Town, you a "bootleg comedian", a "fake clown"/ you wouldn't get a "first", "playing football", wit "8 downs"// ok...not really hittin your "fingers" can't type heat, homie, I got "phive" on it/ your rhymes like conversations about failed rappers, your lines boring// um...no no "B.C", couldn't rep a "black city", in egypt, 5,000 years "before christ"/ its alright, ya "flow broke", you can't spit "quality", you can't "affoard mikes" haha Breakdown- This verse was ok...it feel off in the middle but still had me wantin more from the first bar...it was really hard to rate your verse cuz you would surprise me with a real nice line then you would rhyme like Dr. Seuss....RATED-7/10 VOTE-BD (only because it seemed like he put forth a lil more thought into his rhyme.......REALLY CLOSE) |
my vote was for bdotones.........^^^^^^^^^^^^
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well I guess you got some help black
it should be 2 - 0 but oh well |
uppin
I just voted on 6 battles...come on people |
NAW...CHANGE THA VOTE...I DONT FUCK WIT LUCKY VOTES, IF ITS FOR U THEN ITS FOR U...PM STROBE
uppin |
i didnt make the mistake...c-hood did.............
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i know who made tha mistake silly boy...lets get it changed
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