Finally!!!!!!new Solo Shit From Trip!!!!
 

Yea jus sum new shit I layed, peep an leave em sum good feed plz


Title: Step Up

All Vocals done By: Triple_N

hope ya enjoy...here link:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triplen_music.htm



Links to feed left:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198499
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198253
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2270069

*listening*

i like the beat, good emotion, and yes good use of metas, very lyrical piece im feelin it, very nice flow nice emotion on the hook good drop man im really feeling this, theres not much to say you need to improve on cause im just gettin started with cool edit but this is a nice track man..keep it up, p.s when you gonna be done with the hook on our collab?:)

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listening..

wow.. very good in the begining.. very nice multi's... and yeah there are very good metaphors.. oh shyt i luv the chorus man.. very creative!! that was hella nice... wow.. very creative man!!! like seriously wow.. lol.. 2nd verse now.. *listening* *gets jealous* lol.. very nice multi's again.. the devliery was just plain great man.. was this one of the beats you bought?? like wow.. seriously very good... 3rd verse.. man once again just plain good man.. you keep elevating with every song when im not lol.. damn you man.. lol.. all i could say is wow man.. 10/10.. the chorus is just wow. the shyt on the left n right. thats jst amaznig.. perfect beat for these lyrics.. very nice..

*Starts writting, tryin to do better*

Werd ^

*fails*

*cries*

lol good job man.. i could seriously hear this in the radio man.. good job

listening.......like the beat....

the hook is catchy.....i like it

verses are good....i like the multies...delivery is good....flow is really good...

what can i say....im not someone that can tell you how to get better....keep putting tracks out

aiight listenin'. beat coo

Nice quality goin'. flowin' nicely. Likin' the meta's. Damn this hook catchy. real nice shit there. Next verse, nice flow wit multi's and shit. good shit.liked how you changed your flow on "loose leaf" part. liked angelo line in 3rd verse. goin' nice. Nice emotion and shit. damn shit nice. only thing I didn't like was beat was kinda too slow for my liking. But you did this shit nicely.

Overall, a nice track. I jus really didn't like beat's speed. If it was a lil fast tempo would have been nicer. But overall, you held this shit down. but it's one of your top tracks tho. lol I see you usin' TRI-p-l-e as your new slogan thing. good shit tho. buit overall, nice... 9/10.......

yea this is a hot track son...

ithe flow was flawless as always son...the emotion wasnt really as hype as it usually is...but thats a good thing..lol..i fucks wit the chorus and the beat is kinda catchy too...even tho at first i hated it..*dances*....like i sad man hot ass track...but yo...i think ya voice is to deep for the beat =\..









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aight listening..


aight... i thought the song was solid.. flow was solid.. real consitant.. no messups for real i heard.. lyrically i thought this track was solid.. dont think its among your best, but there wasent nothin to be smacked for in there lol :-P.. I thought this was a real solid drop.. fa sho.. 8/10

eeeeewwwwwyyyyy...shit was hott dawg...defitnly noddin my head ta this..yo lyrics were dope...flow was dope...and the hook was off the hook...not bad...the beat was ill too....8/10....RTF on "The Timeline"

yeah trip you showed me this shit last night shit was fire kid...chorus tight everythin tight man keep it up be...and i look forward to that collab kid 1ne..

word a new senser n triple collab, tight shit.

trip dont forget about our collab wit ike.

ayo...holla at me maybe we can do a remix if u'd wanna remix this track i already got shit written down for it thats ill.....holla back at me my AIM's "mc slayor" and my MSN's "hood_dawg@hotmail.com

Diggin the beat, ya flow killed it, feeling the multis and you kept real consistent with em too so definitely props for that already. Vocab was there, had nice level of complexity but everything was understandable.

The hook is very catchy, the kinda stuff you'd start bumping along with right away ya know. Lyrics were good, had nice shit in there, funny stuff as well, just all very catchy and your quality is so damn good, everything sounds so clear.

Like someone else already said, it may not be the very best you did but it's just real solid track and I gotta admit this could be played on radio just like that...

Nice...

I Like the beat...The way you approach in the first verse with the multi'z is nice. Decent Flow. Lyrics..Good, Good. I'm liking the wordplay. Ok when you rapping and the chorus I think overlaping is decent.

2nd verse

Alright still I'm liking your flow. Nice lyrics. Hmmmm To me nothing stood out. Except the flow.

3rd verse lol @ angelo. Alright I'm likeing the wordplays. Again with the multi'z.

Ovrall= This was a good audio, alots of good wordplays and decent flow. Loving the chorus. And the mulit'z is decent.

Keep doing you.

Aight here's all i gotta say Trip,

From metropolis to metropolis everbody copping this,rocking trips thesis every region acknowledges, the knowledge lived known or gained in colleges,gladly accepting a GED recipients prophesis.........


Hotness kid get at me...............................

good choice of beat.. me likes, flow was flawless.. lyrics were on point ez, chorus was creative and fit well, i could hear this on the radio cuz it's catchy. This should be voted for The Featured Audio in this forum... :thumbup:

get at me.
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Beat is nice..but I feel I heard this before..

Hahaha ya voice is so damn deep

Nice hook it's catchy ass hell

peepin.... i used this beat b4, flow comes in nyce, emotion coo, overdubs def make it stand out nycely... chorus, dunno about tha samples but the lyrics are cool... 2nd verse is def feelin nyce.. widda ball point pen.. lol... good vocab in this... haters gotta face it.. coo..i dont get the glowstick line... i like when u go off n change ur notes in some parts if u did a whole verse like that it would b sick... holler at me man, i got that beat... pretty coo shhyt....

yeah... shit was thorough.... especially that hook... ya did ya thang on this one trip... nice to see you holding ya own for once...lol... the beat was ill... ya flow was on point and the met's were straight.... stay solo for a while...lol

this track is hot, impressin me..

i like the verses, that "like vegetarians, leavin beef on the table" is tight.. really feelin that.. not really feelin the chorus tho.. tight track tho, nice job..

this was pretty dope i mean i think everyone tocuhed on it.10/10

Word to everybody...Hot ass track...One of the best I've seen on RV...what else can I say..? Just keep doin' what you do haha...

Listening through Audio Technica STH-M40fs studio monitor headphones.

I don't liek the way this beats starts off, mostly because I cna't stand overly-synthed sounds that are obviously not made with a real instrument. Jsut a flat-ass midi tone.

Vocal quality is on the money as expected, but you needed to EQ some of the 808 outta the bass in the beat since when it really hits I cna't hear you at all. The lyrical content of the first verse was average, delivery was dead on. The hook, the "come on then nigga" should have had some of the reverb and some of the compressoion taken down because it really thins out the effectiveness of it and makes it sound flat. The hook it self has the same problem where you can't really make out specifically wht you're saying - just kinda hearing the sounds and the melody of it. Just sounds vague and makes it obvious that you're just going through the motions to bang out a club track. Second verse brings some much needed diversity to the delivery so the verses don't all sound a like. It peaked my attention again when you changed the cadence in the second verse where as I was starting to zone out prior to that. The third verse reminds me of the first one where as it had nothing that made me really say "damn, that's pretty hot". I think it's the mundane deliv in it. Switch it up - attack the cadence from time to time. Stall it out, flip it up, etc.

I feel the same about the outro as I do on the intro. I'm also personally getitng bored with you and club songs. Starting to seem liek a stereotype of NNN.


Honest feed as always. Uno.