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07-06-05, 05:37 PM | #1 | |||||
You Cant Handle The Truth
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Unreleased Heat
IP: C141 1F66
UNRELEASED HEAT people keep telling me I gotta stop dropping just one verse on 'em, they want more, so here's 3 verses to collabs that the other person hasn't done their part to yet since I felt like putting something up today... 1st "Hard Times" "Flat Lined" beat by Rock It Productions 2nd "Make Believe Thugs" "Make Believe Thugs" beat by Kingsmen Productions 3rd "At The Core" "Runnin" inst. from THE GAME feat. Tony Yayo REPLY 1 REPLY 2 |
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07-06-05, 05:57 PM | #2 | |||||||
Addicted
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IP: 5841 B94D
i dnt like kinvgsmen beats.. but lets see.... ooooooo noooooooooooooo not dis beat :\'( i mheard it used a million times lol..... u flow is nice though slips a couple of times delivery n emoyion is nice vocals are a lil low.... second beats niiiiiiiiice were u find dis??? u flow on dis better... sound alot more confortable on it aswell.... lovin mhow u sound on dis second beat.... mdis is sick... lol last beats relaxin to da full i was vgonna rock dis on sum relaxin tip... flow is cool slips on dis beat a little.. lyrics are nice... delivery again nice.... production is nice on da most part i think one adlib was too loud... nice tune love da second beat like mad
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07-06-05, 06:20 PM | #3 | |||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: 2CB5 8B63
ive heard a lot of this already....
1stly u merk da flatline beat, u tear it up then come back and rip the little pieces up, u ridin it wid ur nice ass toned down bone thug speed flow, production is dope aswell 2nd ima still use this beat, even tho u rip it, ima rip it 1wice as hard gal lol, 3rd beat is really wierd i unno sumin bout it seems irregular, u flow nice on this damn production was real nice on these.... UNRELEASED HEAT RTF girl: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198274
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07-06-05, 08:24 PM | #4 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: D4CB 508F
Jus like mans up there said...I dun heard this beat a million times....I didn't do this beat for that reason....however ya flow is good..but this beat is too hard for you in my opinion...ya delivery is jus too laidback for this....an ya vocals is too low...an the beat is too loud....the hook needs better mixing...oh beat change....oh this kingsmen beta is also another heavily done beat....still love it tho...now ya delivery fit on this somewhat better...on the previous beat u was too calm an on this u came in too hype...ya vocals is still low...alot of words I can't make out...another beat change...ok on this beat ya vocals is right vol...an ya flwo an delivery fits real nice this is you ma'.....overall combined I'd give it 5/10 cuz first too I could barely hear an u seemed out of place on...the third one fit u nicely I was feelign that 1..stay up....1
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07-07-05, 01:45 AM | #5 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: 8246 82AB
yo shit was aight ma....not that bad..yo curious whats the 2nd beat u used cuz i know it but i cant think of it and it eatin away at me..lol...anyway flow was aight...lyrics were tight not too bad of a piece...7.5/10..keep it up ma
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07-07-05, 01:46 AM | #6 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: 8246 82AB
RTF on "The Timeline"
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07-07-05, 11:49 AM | #7 | |||||||
+...Femin-iLL...+
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IP: 6E69 7B24
atleast yu can ride the beat....ive heard some females..that...well, need to try again...lol....yu got a nyce voice for the track...lol, where u get tha second beat from?...im feelin ya lyrics...got somethin on ya mind, ma....im feelin that..realli...i'd rap to all these beats...but, they aint realli my style....but thats kew...cuz yu ripped them...
keep the spits coming return favor?: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197726
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07-07-05, 05:04 PM | #8 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 63D7 7301
YEAH..YEAH..L.V DOING IT BIG..!!
i heard most of these already..i just think you need to find beats that match up with ya voice ma..an project..PROJECT..!! i want to hear a angry track from you..lol.. nice drop.. the beats on the way..i may get artik on it.. |
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07-07-05, 09:23 PM | #9 | |||||
You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: 8854 A740
^ ROFLMAO...
sorry boo but I don't get angry...when I get angry I kiLL people, thus I've never been angry...I got a horrible temper, if you make me mad then be prepared to die...so nah, I don't get angry but you can get close if you lie to and on me, lmao... |
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07-08-05, 07:41 PM | #10 | |||||
You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: 34E7 8281
yoU Pee
people, I want feedback, not a strip tease... |
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