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the end of my movie
…Im tired of the violence… tired of the silence… …tired of the eyelids that open to expose my iris… …to the hoes to the dro to no home and the sirens… …of the police on my blok and them pirates… …I don’t know how to stop it but tired of it… …parents quick to point the finger and shove it… …in my face for their problems and they love it… …but here I am again with this jack and I chug it… …fuck it… I hate the feel of them bars… …I hate the smell the taste I hate the sight of them bars… …id rather be blazin again or drivin in cars… …I wanna be the product Robert and marcus put out in part… …I wanna walk in the dark with Clark on parvin… …I wanna eat mcs with a mic utensil instead of starving… …I wanna have my rhyme book instead of papyrus carvin… …I wanna have kristy with me and get me some parkin… -[chorus]- …Blue lights flashin again at my window… …news story beginin but I know how it ends tho… …ill see you on the other side… …why you do this mother why… -[repeat]- …fuck the schools… fools telling kids whats cool… …fuck… you wont learn shit from any grade in your school… …fuck you if you don’t like me mccali or Royce… …5-9 helped me decide rhymes are my toys… …fuck America… we at war with a ghost… …a ghost that knows we cant hit the host… …so… fuck money… I aint had any don’t want it… …fuck you if you lost it and fuck you if you got it… …and fuck fuck… but fuck… without fuck id b fucked… …fuck sluts… but fuck… without sluts whod be fucked… …fuck internet mcs… I step up they all ducked… …and fuck real mcs… I step up they all sucked… …I wanna be mtv cribs with zigs holiday special… …instead im going from the pen to church confessionals… …sorry god… im high… so iunno what I did wrong… …sorry god… im diein… so let me in heaven wit dis song… -[chorus]- …Blue lights flashin again at my window… …news story beginin but I know how it ends tho… …ill see you on the other side… …why you do this mother why… -[repeat]- R.I.P. Zig Zag http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197746 |
some deep shit here dawg
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dope piece man. RIP tho. Good emotion and flow. liked this shit. damn....
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Dying is like moving onto the next stage in something bigger. If it was his time to go, it was his time to go. Dont look at it as a loss, look at it as his gain. Eternal life.
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nice piece man dis was a deep and emotional drop
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Wow... The Emotion in this was good.. I liked this drop man... Really Felt it.. You Should get this audio...
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sorry god… im high… so iunno what I did wrong…
…sorry god… im diein… so let me in heaven wit dis song… I'd let him in. It brought a tear, RIP Zig. |
Yeah ya'll i wanna do a RV tribute to Eric aka Zig... PM me if you wanna be involved or if you have ideas... Church |
great piece VP, very well expressed, i though....sad though, zig was a good guy....
R.I.P. |
that was his last song Drakel... that ain't my work... that's why I used his account to drop it...
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WOW, this what he wrote before it happened, deep shit...seems he wasnt happy at that moment.
Thoughts to his fam, RIP zig. |
I will miss you man..
We never got to meet in Canada, but I'm sure we'll meet again someday.. Walker Texas Ranger/Good MSN Talks... R.I.P. Brother... |
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stickied.......
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what happend, this zig guy died? how? anyways this peice was real emotional......10/10....best ive ever read
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lol at this bein stickied, anyway, it was an alright drop, kinda deep..
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This was a pretty decent drop..keep it up it was very deep..nice emotions..and good feeling going into this drop.. Structure was okay..could have been better..but overall it was a great drop keep it up
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shits sad to be honest....but it had very good imagery....it was simple...but then again it wasnt...i really was feeling this a lot...vocab wasnt there...but it didnt really need it......it said what it had to say...and left it at that....
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^that was deep chuuch defyned |
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The site is whack need keen support like a supreme court
Vicious rhyme from my suspicious mind can steam a fort Stress send vibration is like a presentation once scheduled can’t abort Brains I’ll clutch quicker than Dutch liquor in search for a sicker Way to rhyme but stay divine in the spine trash will get thicker |
best open mic what iv ever seen........
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my type schemes is like teams abide by umprie decision after some fire and religion// have a bold voice but like an old horse still got ability to work no silly jerk lazy// some cats attitudes as fat dudes stink severely// I have to think clearly just to stay on top and pray alot//
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^Get Out. Chuuch Defyned |
yo it was deep
but it isnt good neough to be open mic of the month the m,multies where ok there was no imagery plus every thing i ever put on here would seriously murk that ne thing u can look me up im the illest nigga on here word up props to u even though u dont deserve it... |
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