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one mic & lyrical mage- gettin yo' speaker blastin'
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Me and mage, makin a name for ourselves, spittin wit passion This is just normal 007 ready for action Bustin my gat quick, always ready for war Comin back well, like we need to settle the score Lets sever these whores…. check out the methods I use I hate people that get all jealous cuz im better than you We ready for crews, step to me, you get battered and bruised But im way off the scale, you cant measure my fuse Can you see, the delightful way I flow to the beat When we target wins, some herbs go for defeat I’ve hurd people sayin they hot, when they rollin wit freaks How you gonna cope, wit me and mage patrollin’ the streets?? Fuck the beef, all that work, for the guy to go and retreat I aint wit that, so imma jus’ continue holdin the heat We steppin up our game for this, so it aint basic Some emcees think they hot, but they was jus’ stuck in the matrix Face it ,we ace bitch, watch as I demonstrate this Faithful, creation, threatenin different nations Believe me, we bringin lyrics too hot for the T.V. Battle either of us, you’ll have to “phone home”, just like E.T. We believe in the hype, to battle us you need to be tite Like Common, you best believe we both seein “the light” Its one mic and lyrical mage, getting yo’ speaker blastin I’d advise not to battle us, cuz it sparks a bad reaction (2X) lyrical mage time fo mage but the mics already started smoking one mic just left and mcees already started choking we a couple of niggas that just became yo resident sending down flame storms onto yo little settlement most mcees we come across know they lyrical fate but some die horrificly cause they try to abnegate yo crews abject...aw shit hes crying get a tissue at least god havent killed you like he did abihu im a hustler i addle niggas wit great comfusion disapearin from the pigs is my other great Illusion the booths on fire the mic melting wit blue flames sparks fly as the heat start meltin yo crew brains I send lyrical spells,like a abyss of firey hells I put slugs in u that come out as empty shells so start dodging my rhymes cause we aint faking we the grim reaper and yo soul fo da taking We believe in the hype, to battle us you need to be tite Like Common, you best believe we both seein “the light” Its one mic and lyrical mage, getting yo’ speaker blastin I’d advise not to battle us, cuz it sparks a bad reaction (2X) |
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uppin on this ringht here
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uppin this shit...
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tight on this its off the chain
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thanx for the feed legend. uppin this shit..................
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c'mon people lets get sum feed on this shit.......
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uppinnnnnnn.....................
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uppin fo them yall
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one mic...ur flow is good...and ur rhyme scheme is stock = good...but, throw a few twists in there every now and then
2nd cat...not bad...but ur verse lacked a clear direction and some complecity with rhyming...add some multi syllables not bad 1 |
ayo it was tight homie both need a lil work on vocab by twisting it wit some unique shit but besides that homie it was good keep it up holla for another collab homies?!!!!!!!!!!
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thanx for the feed Q and Optik. yer man im always down for collabs, jus' hit me up and im in.
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ayo RTF on my OM on the bottom of my sig homie its called out in the open..............
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ayo also RTF on my battles homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!peace
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thanx for the feed O. uppin this.......................
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Strange in America have to change my character or be denied
Rights so I adapt to rap and try to yap crap but got my brains fried Me and a sinister neighbor tried to administer flavor to our flowerbeds Had to hurdle oil to fertile the soil beside or drive way with shower heads The sun done damage to my hairs couldn’t manage my affairs the same After that |
yer ok lol. lets get sum feed on this.............
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uppin this........................................
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*I send lyrical spells,like a abyss of firey hells
I put slugs in u that come out as empty shells* ^^^I like that line...coo...^^^ The rest was str8...it unfolded nice...I see you tryin ta get lyrical. I think it couldve used a lil more multi's and edgier structure...but it was nice,Fam. Keep elevatin....nice drop! return favor,Thanx! |
thanx for the feed CS, appreciate it. uppin this shit.............
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