Selling Mah Soul
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2318776

vocal chords spit flames, deep words through profound lips bathe
a revolutionary sound fit & made of merry-go-round flipped plays
about a sick plague, spoken free without mics, a sort of precision
going back to old times, like anarchy, it wasnt born with a system
s'like i reformed a tradition, of hip hop & writin through the years
and if ya wonderin if god exists, be prepared, cause proof is here
dont need a crew to fear, may not be the best- im the only one
and i know you rappers spit fake, through plastic phony tongues
so i'll unmask the puns, reveal the golden pen n pad on ma shelf
still mad at myself, but the scriptures i hold a shit-bag of wealth
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so how much are my writtens worth?

im approachin to take it, a univeral motion to stake this
i spit verses with jesus, then go play a game of poker with satan
hopin to rake in- loot, and get some holy sum of profit, see
bq's gonna put on one hell of a show, n son, thats the prophecy
your thoughts are weak, they wont phase my scheme
your mind will get the seed of doubt, when i misplace ya dreams
put my spirit in writing, and man its true, i plan to use
wouldnt sell my soul now...only cuz i know what it can produce

it all went wrong..

then i shown my work to da lord, but he was bored what i wrote
fuck..i took a long path, now i'll stab myself with the fork in the road
but before i had spoke, pureness did' i was shocked at the instance
i felt all the light swept away, then sighted darkness in the distance
i was thrwart n imprisoned, i fucked myself on a little promise
now id sell my soul to lucifer, but not even he's bidding on it

lmao dope as hell BQ, that drop was hott, my favourite lines...

fuck..i took a long path, now i'll stab myself with the fork in the road
^that was hella creative

i was thrwart n imprisoned, i fucked myself on a little promise
now id sell my soul to lucifer, but not even he's bidding on it
^^and thats funny as fuck1 well done girl! :thumbup:

this was good, flow was nice, imagery and emotion were awesome, very nice drop, keep it up girl

thx yall fo da feed

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you real cute :love: just as much as I give you for ya looks I'll give you for this piece 10/10 :love:

man nice really liked this one keep it up BQ u mad good at these like the structure and emotion u showed here too.....imagery isnt that good but aight jus work on that a lil bit more but everythin else is good liked the topic of course and the begining of it is the best there really enjoyed reading this keep it up BQ.....like ur topicals.......
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PLZ RTF WIT A VOTE IN MY TOPICAL BATTLES PLZ THNX U VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE...................

man baby you good nice drop keep em come and keep doin what ya doin holla at cha boy!!!!!!RTF on my OM http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201737

this was a nice drop...........flow was good and i liked the usage of multi's in your verse.....there was a nice creativity throughout.....these lines stood out to me
im approachin to take it, a univeral motion to stake this
i spit verses with jesus, then go play a game of poker with satan

keep it up..........

thx fo da feed errybody mizz fyre havent seen you n awhile

^^^nah i ain't been on fo a while been busy y'know..........

yeah i kno wat u mean

8.0 . nice ,very nice.
you got a tight flow.
i'd like to hear that on cd.
what up hit me back?

thx uppin.........

can i get sum feed pleaze

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s'like i reformed a tradition, of hip hop & writin through the years
and if ya wonderin if god exists, be prepared, cause proof is here


OMG, yur not even wack....that bar was kinda slick


then i shown my work to da lord, but he was bored what i wrote
fuck..i took a long path, now i'll stab myself with the fork in the road

^i got a fork in the road line...i put in a piece imma drop in the future...but, i like the way yu used it here....

but before i had spoke, pureness did' i was shocked at the instance
i felt all the light swept away, then sighted darkness in the distance
i was thrwart n imprisoned, i fucked myself on a little promise
now id sell my soul to lucifer, but not even he's bidding on it

^nyce business right there....and good way to end it.....


well, ma...im impressed....seriously...i havent really looked at yur stuff, but imma be paying closer attention from now on.....ya imagery and vocab was good.epecially in that 1st passage....yu got some skill and mad potential to do damage....i give yu props

lol, it seems the ladies of RV are truly holding it down....I want to collab with yu..and some other of the ladies.......on that matter....

Yea artik ladiez gotta hold it down round here thx fo da feed

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This OM was dope ,.............I never knew You had it in you like that It really made me wonder about sellin ma soul///////LOL nawl im j.k

dope peace though id give it s 9.5/10

nice keep it up gurl you sick !!!!!!!!!!

break yoself^ :shoot: lol.. lemme stop

but before i had spoke, pureness did' i was shocked at the instance
i felt all the light swept away, then sighted darkness in the distance
i was thrwart n imprisoned, i fucked myself on a little promise
now id sell my soul to lucifer, but not even he's bidding on it

same what A.P. said, this was nice.. def. ur best OM here
...but keep doin ur thang ma... hopefully i'll see anotha
OM by u that is good as this piece here......... 9/10

real good drop. flow's killa (like everybody's in r.a.w.) but wut really draws me 2 this piece is tha depth of tha content. i can tell u put alot of thought into this 1 and that's wut makes it worth readin. u showed alot of creativity in your lines and really got tha most out of tha concept u used that was possible. i give it a 10 straight up just cuz i enjoyed readin it from top to bottom. rtf.1.

Thx fo da feed...

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I like this. Decent Flow. Nice imagery. Good Approach and Nice concept. I wish you could've went longer though but your piece was so complex and well written. Upp on the vocab much more. Put More Multi'z in it. The best aspect in this piece was the "Imagery" and the Emotion was good, it seems the imagery took over this piece. Well done.

thx fo da feedback