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07-26-05, 11:47 AM | #1 | ||||||
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drop a flow how it goes got the dough man homie,u already know verse1: tored of all these homies tryna merk me unsteady but what these punks dont know is that im always ready tryna come from the top and also side to side but see i gots homies who be down to ride SATYIN ALERT!tellin me whats the buzz around tellin me all the plans and in the hood whats goin down cuz around my blcok niggas im the boss fools tryna come up undetected heads will be plastered and glued sound of guns blaring all these bitches screaming makin my move to the back til i see red ray's beaming thats when i yell down niggas hit the D-E-C-K but for some of my homies it was far too late [choorus]x2 drop a flow how it goes got the dough man homie u already know verse2: subliminal thoughts all rushing im goin insane like im bone thugs n harmony im insane in the membrane out in rage but homie its all in the game aint got time for goin around pin pointin and sayin names so fuck that shit move on to be a killer fast fowardin through the game nigga i be the hardest hitter my pen fillin many pages and bum rushing the past tryna catch my breathe cuz it all came too fast. slowin it down a bit tryna stay focus bitch i aint no fukin hoodinee no hokus pokus walkin a lonley path down the death row!!! bitches know my actions and for crossin well i alrady know that im a straight nigga only beef when needed better bring the seals and the marines cuz u gon need it! [chorus]x2 drop a flow how it goes got the dough man homie u already know verse3: man this the diabolical,logical make a model honorable,chronilogical order homie im ustopable when the city sleeps im the one knocturnal workin and hustlin merkin hittin ya real personal flippin them scriptz and changin the game ya'llalready know who i is no need to say my name dont even need a reason or purpose to this bcuz im a real nigga who be merkin ya you bitch now understand this as i grab my dick and flick turn the middle finger real large bitch yellin suck my dick!!!! hahaha.... [chorus]x2 drop a flow how it goes got the dough man homie,u already know...hahaha.........reality check wat up!!!!!! duabs and LIVIN LEGENDS WAT UP!!!!!!!!!!!! FLO WAT UP!!!!!! MESSENGER AND LYRICALFLOWZ WAT UP!!!!!!!! TONY GREEN WAT UP FOE HOLLA!!!!!!!!!!HAHAHAHA.................
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07-26-05, 11:49 AM | #2 | ||||||
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07-26-05, 12:00 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 07A8 D079
cuz around my blcok niggas im the boss fools
tryna come up undetected heads will be plastered and glued sound of guns blaring all these bitches screaming makin my move to the back til i see red ray's beaming ^^nice bars set up was nice, it would nice to see a few multis or a couple of metas, vocab can be upped some, but this was decent. Keep dropping.
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07-26-05, 12:01 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: D40E 67D5
ayo fam thanks for the feed baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!uppin!!!!!!!!!!holla at cha boy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!elevatin or what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hahaha................
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07-26-05, 12:10 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
I was loving the last verse but like homegurl said more metaphors would've been nice. But other than that if was on cd I'd buy it
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07-26-05, 12:16 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: D40E 67D5
yea homie thanks for the feed and spread the word for me homie!!!!!!!!!it is on cd it was of my 2 single cd..........but i never made publish nationaly so i thought id put it down here.......the beat is snoop dogg ft. oharrel.....smoke wit me or some shit like that the original song goes......do u wanna smoke....come and keep me company........you should smokes wit me or some shit like that i just took the beat and added my lyrics!!!!!!!!
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07-26-05, 01:33 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 6E69 7B24
yeah more metas....and unless ive over looked some of Bone Thugs And Harmony's work......Another Group Coined The Phrase:
"insane in the membrane" ^lol...but ya momentum on this was kew but, ya flow was nyce....and i love ya cockiness in this...yu gotta stand ya grounds respect
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07-26-05, 01:35 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: D40E 67D5
ayo baby thanks for the feed!!!!!!!!!!keepp em come em!!!!!!!!!!yea i think iyt was insane in the memberane
hahaha..............
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07-26-05, 01:45 PM | #9 | ||||
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fuckin hot shit homie......nice drop.....although you could do ya chorus a bit longer....
nice barz there mayne.
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07-26-05, 01:52 PM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: D40E 67D5
ayo mayne thanks for the feed uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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07-26-05, 03:08 PM | #11 | ||||
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this was good man, was really feelin the last verse, flow was good, vocab was ok, keep it up man
please RTF on one of my om's link in sig, thanks, again good job man
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07-26-05, 03:12 PM | #12 | |||||||
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IP: 8F74 F95D
liked last verse but like most ppl sed more metaz over all 8/10 keep up!!!!!!
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07-26-05, 03:27 PM | #13 | |||||
One Mic
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IP: 38B5 0CC0
yo man, this is amazin, you got skillz fo' real man. everythin woz good about this shit, flow woz tite, multis included etc. 9/10 keep it up homie
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07-27-05, 04:55 PM | #14 | |||||
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IP: C081 37B1
sound of guns blaring all these bitches screaming
makin my move to the back til i see red ray's beaming ^ Nice I like that outtta oall of your bars I like this dropp overall NICE 9/10 Keep it up man |
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07-28-05, 08:15 AM | #15 | ||||||
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IP: D40E 67D5
ayo man all yall man thanks homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!keep on RTF and ill RTF man so thanks really appriciate it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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