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Old 07-26-05, 11:47 AM   #1
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[chorus]x2
drop a flow
how it goes
got the dough
man homie,u already know

verse1:
tored of all these homies tryna merk me unsteady
but what these punks dont know is that im always ready
tryna come from the top and also side to side
but see i gots homies who be down to ride
SATYIN ALERT!tellin me whats the buzz around
tellin me all the plans and in the hood whats goin down
cuz around my blcok niggas im the boss fools
tryna come up undetected heads will be plastered and glued
sound of guns blaring all these bitches screaming
makin my move to the back til i see red ray's beaming
thats when i yell down niggas hit the D-E-C-K
but for some of my homies it was far too late

[choorus]x2
drop a flow
how it goes
got the dough
man homie u already know

verse2:
subliminal thoughts all rushing im goin insane
like im bone thugs n harmony im insane in the membrane
out in rage but homie its all in the game
aint got time for goin around pin pointin and sayin names
so fuck that shit move on to be a killer
fast fowardin through the game nigga i be the hardest hitter
my pen fillin many pages and bum rushing the past
tryna catch my breathe cuz it all came too fast.
slowin it down a bit tryna stay focus
bitch i aint no fukin hoodinee no hokus pokus
walkin a lonley path down the death row!!!
bitches know my actions and for crossin well i alrady know
that im a straight nigga only beef when needed
better bring the seals and the marines cuz u gon need it!

[chorus]x2
drop a flow
how it goes
got the dough
man homie u already know

verse3:
man this the diabolical,logical make a model
honorable,chronilogical order homie im ustopable
when the city sleeps im the one knocturnal
workin and hustlin merkin hittin ya real personal
flippin them scriptz and changin the game
ya'llalready know who i is no need to say my name
dont even need a reason or purpose to this
bcuz im a real nigga who be merkin ya you bitch
now understand this as i grab my dick and flick
turn the middle finger real large bitch yellin suck my dick!!!!
hahaha....

[chorus]x2
drop a flow
how it goes
got the dough
man homie,u already know...hahaha.........reality check wat up!!!!!!
duabs and LIVIN LEGENDS WAT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!
FLO WAT UP!!!!!!
MESSENGER AND LYRICALFLOWZ WAT UP!!!!!!!!
TONY GREEN WAT UP FOE HOLLA!!!!!!!!!!HAHAHAHA.................
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Old 07-26-05, 11:49 AM   #2
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Old 07-26-05, 12:00 PM   #3
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cuz around my blcok niggas im the boss fools
tryna come up undetected heads will be plastered and glued
sound of guns blaring all these bitches screaming
makin my move to the back til i see red ray's beaming
^^nice bars

set up was nice, it would nice to see a few multis or a couple of metas, vocab can be upped some, but this was decent. Keep dropping.
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Old 07-26-05, 12:01 PM   #4
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ayo fam thanks for the feed baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!uppin!!!!!!!!!!holla at cha boy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!elevatin or what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hahaha................
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Old 07-26-05, 12:10 PM   #5
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I was loving the last verse but like homegurl said more metaphors would've been nice. But other than that if was on cd I'd buy it
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Old 07-26-05, 12:16 PM   #6
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yea homie thanks for the feed and spread the word for me homie!!!!!!!!!it is on cd it was of my 2 single cd..........but i never made publish nationaly so i thought id put it down here.......the beat is snoop dogg ft. oharrel.....smoke wit me or some shit like that the original song goes......do u wanna smoke....come and keep me company........you should smokes wit me or some shit like that i just took the beat and added my lyrics!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-26-05, 01:33 PM   #7
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yeah more metas....and unless ive over looked some of Bone Thugs And Harmony's work......Another Group Coined The Phrase:

"insane in the membrane"

^lol...but ya momentum on this was kew

but, ya flow was nyce....and i love ya cockiness in this...yu gotta stand ya grounds

respect
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Old 07-26-05, 01:35 PM   #8
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ayo baby thanks for the feed!!!!!!!!!!keepp em come em!!!!!!!!!!yea i think iyt was insane in the memberane
hahaha..............
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Old 07-26-05, 01:45 PM   #9
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fuckin hot shit homie......nice drop.....although you could do ya chorus a bit longer....

nice barz there mayne.
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Old 07-26-05, 01:52 PM   #10
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ayo mayne thanks for the feed uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-26-05, 03:08 PM   #11
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this was good man, was really feelin the last verse, flow was good, vocab was ok, keep it up man



please RTF on one of my om's link in sig, thanks, again good job man
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Old 07-26-05, 03:12 PM   #12
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liked last verse but like most ppl sed more metaz over all 8/10 keep up!!!!!!
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Old 07-26-05, 03:27 PM   #13
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yo man, this is amazin, you got skillz fo' real man. everythin woz good about this shit, flow woz tite, multis included etc. 9/10 keep it up homie
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Old 07-27-05, 04:55 PM   #14
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sound of guns blaring all these bitches screaming
makin my move to the back til i see red ray's beaming

^ Nice I like that outtta oall of your bars

I like this dropp overall NICE

9/10

Keep it up man
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Old 07-28-05, 08:15 AM   #15
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ayo man all yall man thanks homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!keep on RTF and ill RTF man so thanks really appriciate it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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