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A battle of mine
Makeveli Trained Dissed-
http://outspoken.dmusic.com/ Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...857#post2338857 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...810#post2338810 |
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i think your just startin out, not bad tho for startin out at all flow isnt bad, just needs polishing and shit delivery isnt bad either, could be upped only thing holdin it down might be the quality which can easily be fixed keep droppin man! not bad |
yea i just started recording lol thnx for the feed
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yo dope hits...flows dope..beat aight....quality aint bad....the lyrics were pretty dope cant be mad i'd give this bout a 7.5....
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HaHa Pretty Good Shit Dawg I Like The Beat Lols Flow Was Funny Some Good Shit In Here Man I Like That IQ Line Hell Of Funny Multi's Had Alot In Here Man Keep This up You Know
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werd, nice beat, ur quality aint bad, just sounds kinda like u standin not close 2 tha mic, u know, good shit, werd
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everything was low...sounded like it was playing through headphones, even through my speakers
work on that quality beat is decent u flowed well to it...though ur flow was monotone not great...not terrible = aiigh |
iight cool thnx *goes look wat monotone means*
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Monotone means ur delivery style in ur voice was all the same throughout the verse for the most part to me
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I guess that's good then... |
^^not really...gets boring to listen to after a while
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yeah i agree with the rest said about Quality as for lyrics i can't really say because i don't know the guy you battling, but decent for a first.
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def good for startin out flow was pretty good....good work keep doin it
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word.. beats tight.. flow was nice. quality was ehh.. really low.. lyrics was aiight.. i think you can use your flow to ya advantage.. when u pes ya flow up, it helped ya shit out a bit.. its coo for a first battle.. wasent bad at all.. but you can improve so keep droppin b.. -1
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thnx coo uppin.
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