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Old 08-02-05, 11:18 PM   #1
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Old 08-03-05, 12:27 AM   #2
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Old 08-03-05, 12:46 AM   #3
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returnin the favor:

i think your just startin out, not bad tho for startin out at all
flow isnt bad, just needs polishing and shit
delivery isnt bad either, could be upped
only thing holdin it down might be the quality which can easily be fixed
keep droppin man! not bad
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Old 08-03-05, 12:47 AM   #4
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yea i just started recording lol thnx for the feed
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Old 08-03-05, 01:03 AM   #5
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yo dope hits...flows dope..beat aight....quality aint bad....the lyrics were pretty dope cant be mad i'd give this bout a 7.5....
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Old 08-03-05, 01:22 AM   #6
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yo dope hits...flows dope..beat aight....quality aint bad....the lyrics were pretty dope cant be mad i'd give this bout a 7.5....

cool thnx......................
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Old 08-03-05, 01:54 AM   #7
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HaHa Pretty Good Shit Dawg I Like The Beat Lols Flow Was Funny Some Good Shit In Here Man I Like That IQ Line Hell Of Funny Multi's Had Alot In Here Man Keep This up You Know
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Old 08-03-05, 03:16 AM   #8
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werd, nice beat, ur quality aint bad, just sounds kinda like u standin not close 2 tha mic, u know, good shit, werd
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Old 08-03-05, 01:59 PM   #9
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thnx........................upp
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Old 08-03-05, 02:48 PM   #10
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everything was low...sounded like it was playing through headphones, even through my speakers

work on that quality

beat is decent

u flowed well to it...though ur flow was monotone


not great...not terrible = aiigh
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Old 08-03-05, 02:53 PM   #11
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iight cool thnx *goes look wat monotone means*
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Old 08-03-05, 02:55 PM   #12
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Monotone means ur delivery style in ur voice was all the same throughout the verse for the most part to me


jus my opinion
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Old 08-03-05, 02:59 PM   #13
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Monotone means ur delivery style in ur voice was all the same throughout the verse for the most part to me


jus my opinion

I guess that's good then...
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Old 08-03-05, 03:42 PM   #14
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^^not really...gets boring to listen to after a while
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Old 08-03-05, 05:40 PM   #15
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yeah i agree with the rest said about Quality as for lyrics i can't really say because i don't know the guy you battling, but decent for a first.
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