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Castro... 08-02-05 11:18 PM

A battle of mine
 
Makeveli Trained Dissed-
http://outspoken.dmusic.com/

Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...857#post2338857
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...810#post2338810

Castro... 08-03-05 12:27 AM

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kaveh 08-03-05 12:46 AM

returnin the favor:

i think your just startin out, not bad tho for startin out at all
flow isnt bad, just needs polishing and shit
delivery isnt bad either, could be upped
only thing holdin it down might be the quality which can easily be fixed
keep droppin man! not bad

Castro... 08-03-05 12:47 AM

yea i just started recording lol thnx for the feed

Mentor 08-03-05 01:03 AM

yo dope hits...flows dope..beat aight....quality aint bad....the lyrics were pretty dope cant be mad i'd give this bout a 7.5....

Castro... 08-03-05 01:22 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Straight Aim
yo dope hits...flows dope..beat aight....quality aint bad....the lyrics were pretty dope cant be mad i'd give this bout a 7.5....

cool thnx......................

UNF 08-03-05 01:54 AM

HaHa Pretty Good Shit Dawg I Like The Beat Lols Flow Was Funny Some Good Shit In Here Man I Like That IQ Line Hell Of Funny Multi's Had Alot In Here Man Keep This up You Know

KOOL COL-B 08-03-05 03:16 AM

werd, nice beat, ur quality aint bad, just sounds kinda like u standin not close 2 tha mic, u know, good shit, werd

Castro... 08-03-05 01:59 PM

thnx........................upp

Tha Q. 08-03-05 02:48 PM

everything was low...sounded like it was playing through headphones, even through my speakers

work on that quality

beat is decent

u flowed well to it...though ur flow was monotone


not great...not terrible = aiigh

Castro... 08-03-05 02:53 PM

iight cool thnx *goes look wat monotone means*

Tha Q. 08-03-05 02:55 PM

Monotone means ur delivery style in ur voice was all the same throughout the verse for the most part to me


jus my opinion

Castro... 08-03-05 02:59 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tha Q.
Monotone means ur delivery style in ur voice was all the same throughout the verse for the most part to me


jus my opinion

I guess that's good then...

Tha Q. 08-03-05 03:42 PM

^^not really...gets boring to listen to after a while

§ïgú ƒrîdù 08-03-05 05:40 PM

yeah i agree with the rest said about Quality as for lyrics i can't really say because i don't know the guy you battling, but decent for a first.


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