The Mic
 

i was just walkin down tha street ..new kicks on ma feet
listenin to a hot beat from cassidy
in my own hood all good notin to fear
yeah...till a shady figure appeared and said here
now pleaz remove the speakers from ya ear
chea... as i noticed wat he put in my hand disapeared
i looked at this man shocked lik where da fuck did it go
in time wyte boi u'll fuckin know
i replied aight man tell me
yes...now i wil reveal u a story
that which was placed in ur hand was a mic a m-i-c
it was tha first one used by notorious b.i.g.
ya right..man u talkin bullshit
shut tha fuck up im tryin to tell u a story bitch
wat!!...ok ok keep talkin
be 4 i put ma head fones and start walkin
aight so that mic hits wer perfomed on
4 exampple juicy big poppa and dead rong
really
would i lie to u b?
idk u...u seem a lil crazy
maybe...but answer this..
wat would u get if u had one wish
wish...wtf?...how u go from a mic to a wish
nevermindill get back to dat soon
ayyo i got to be out its almost noon
hold up let me finish da story
be quick wit it i gots to go in a hurry
well that mic holds powers magical
right...im out..and i wont get back at chu
as i was walkin away he tapped me and said
wer u actually listenin to me...ima skitsophranic crack head
den i blinked...i was in my room lookin at the mirror on the shelf
as i realized that i was talkin to myself
damn........

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yo man on the real.....couldnt get much of a flow goin cuz of the off structure....but the story u told was iight.....made me laugh at the end a bit but kinda corny lol.....keep elavatin and postin......and rtf on my new o/m 1

ight ight......uppin

uppin...........

giv me sum feedback.....

on the real feed homie it was allright but upp on ur structure vocab and metaz u be straight homie peace RTF on my OM on the botton of my sig

uppin.................

yo man sick sig.... whho made it for ya :)

nice feedback, i believe you were the one who doesnt appreciate bullshit feed, well this my friend was bullshit feed......lol j/p......if u look closely....it says sig by sick one dip-shit.............

i noticed taz ... since i made yours too you bitch... so bow to down to your sig master *bitch slaps taz and wyte* :laugh:

haha....funny......uppin

tuff ur probally some little white kid that cant hold his own.....watch ya self

haha yes i am white.. and so are you :thumbup:

im white 2..............uppin

lookin for feedback..postive ....negative....as long as u giv me sum......

sick one better watch out, maddrapper might skull fuck you lol

woa^^^^^....kinda weird........uppin

sum feed wuld be nice....uppin

everything was iight man up on structure vocab multis u=mad potential...but battle me dawg newbie vs. newbie

need to work on the structure need to elevate just a little bit on the vocab

needs better structure, wordplay, imagery...wasnt feelin it all that much but it was decent jus work on those points i mentioned and u'll be aight kid

6/10 <---peep mines

..doS

Not bad man i liked it the end was a little corny but it was ight

Kinda Sloppy Structured and whateeva But Your Theory (Shall I Say) was Alright