Natural killa vs Stanza
 

Battle Rules:

12-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No d/r
No bullshit
3-0 KO
4-1 KO



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-08-05 at 06:17 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-05 04:45 PM.

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-05 05:12 PM.

welcomed in a crew due to narcotics,and he askin for a battle wit me thinkin it'd be exotic and erotic
this guy walks around tryna bag-dads(Baghdad),but flip his name in reverse and he's patriotic*
runnin to victory?,how,when i'ma pistol whip yo shin,and blast a missle throw your chin
he's got the brittle strings cause we all know that the 'midgets' are the ones concerned about 'little things'
stan loves babbling about havin a girl,but how sad he's only talking about his hand & pornography
but this man ain't winning this,cause he couldn't even spell 'before' correct in his biography**
he's tryna park without feeding the meter first,pissed off cause tony green gave him a fever and it hurts
but givin credit,I'll say his crew's groundbreakin
.............................................cause it's the first one where the leader is the worst!!
i can tap you on your head and make you bleed,but fags like you retalliate by spreadin out they seeds
but at least your not in denial,cause even you know that tephlon's way ahead of your league
flirting around with the monsieur in circles,snortin and snortin when you rap,a cross between urkel and merkel
cause tell me what straight emcee,that fucks girls,reps his crew,avatar,and font color with purple
stanza fails to breathe hot,like rejected pneumatics,he reps me in his sig,trust me,i never forget the fanatics
beggin for a record reset,cause he's ash-aimed,like snipers lookin to killin cigarette addictics
he turned prey/pray like converted non-believers,so he ain't kiddin me with gray
making a thread about whackness but himself he four-gets,like 3 yr olds on the 365 day


READ HERE
couldn't put hypher links due to amount of lines I guess....so gotta explain here

1st bar-"Stanza' flipped in reverse is az-nats...as-nats(nationals)

2nd bar-one hyper link i was able to get in...

3rd bar-He got 'before' spelled 'befor' in his prof...but he probably gonna change it now..
Here's stanza babblin about girlfried :rolleyes:
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...76&postcount=49

4th bar-ez
5th bar-Stanza talking about "why am I battlin teph?"
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...91&postcount=54

6th bar-look at his profile..he put his user font color,the color in which he reps his sig,and his avatar(a big purple ball or sumtin)...all in purple.If it not like that anymore...the faggot changed it.

7th bar-Stanza askin for a record reset...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189930
and in his sig he got an Open Mic with me in it(if he didn't change it)

8th bar-Stanza makin a thread about whackest drops..yet forgets himself..LOL
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192427

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uppin..................

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Damn Homie I knew You Was Wack but This Takes The Cake

Voted For: Stanza

NK
welcomed in a crew due to narcotics,and he askin for a battle wit me thinkin it'd be exotic and erotic
this guy walks around tryna bag-dads(Baghdad),but flip his name in reverse and he's patriotic*
original nice
runnin to victory?,how,when i'ma pistol whip yo shin,and blast a missle throw your chin
he's got the brittle strings cause we all know that the 'midgets' are the ones concerned about 'little things'
nice word play
stan loves babbling about havin a girl,but how sad he's only talking about his hand & pornography
but this man ain't winning this,cause he couldn't even spell 'before' correct in his biography**
weak
he's tryna park without feeding the meter first,pissed off cause tony green gave him a fever and it hurts
but givin credit,I'll say his crew's groundbreakin
.............................................cause it's the first one where the leader is the worst!!
tHIS WAS HARD damn!!!!!
i can tap you on your head and make you bleed,but fags like you retalliate by spreadin out they seeds
but at least your not in denial,cause even you know that tephlon's way ahead of your league
this was good but to me Stanza=Teph they both nice
flirting around with the monsieur in circles,snortin and snortin when you rap,a cross between urkel and merkel
cause tell me what straight emcee,that fucks girls,reps his crew,avatar,and font color with purple
LOL good one
stanza fails to breathe hot,like rejected pneumatics,he reps me in his sig,trust me,i never forget the fanatics
beggin for a record reset,cause he's ash-aimed,like snipers lookin to killin cigarette addictics
aight
he turned prey/pray like converted non-believers,so he ain't kiddin me with gray
making a thread about whackness but himself he four-gets,like 3 yr olds on the 365 day
good
this was a great verse i give it a 8.7/10(structure 4/10)cause of the ok punches and the great oiginality and creativity but your structure was horrible

Stanza

Yo

Im Bringin Nuttin But "Badluck" Into Yo Drops as if I Casted a Spell
And Crossin The Alphabets What The Only Time Youve Ever Excelled (x'ed l)
Nice!!!!
This Is a Punch for Punch battle Here Yet Noones Heard From You
They Say I Attack Like a "Pokemon" Because all i Do Is "Pic-At-chu"
played concept but i liked it
Your Shit Has No Kind Of flow control Like a Babies Ass Wit No Daiper
And You Shouldve Jus Left Your Pitty Ass Drops In That *Text Cypher*
some wont get this but this is true and funny LOL
This Is How It End With Me With The Win...Even Stevie Wouldve Saw
He Mad Bcuz He Was To Wack To Get In The Crew Battle Against RAW
Damn nice personal
8 Lines Done They Know Yove Been Sunned Like Bitchez On The Beach
Watch Me Knock The Flava Outta Ya Ass Like You Was Shittin Out Bleach
nice creativty
This Is It man Im Done With You and I Didnt Have To Crack a Joke
Spillin Crack in Yo Pocket Was The Only Time You Ever Drop Dope
aight finisher
This was a preety good job i liked the creativity and personals 8.7/10(structure 9/10)

if i had to vote it would be a tie but since ill decide to vote ill decide my vote on the structures cause the verses were both preety good but NK's structure was horrible

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

hmm......so a pikachu/pokemon line beats my shit?......RiGGGGGGGHT........w/e

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

Cant vote part crew
just checking da polls
ya kno

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No votes yet Damn
i at least expect 2 votes
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I Know Rii These kids Better Get In here And Vote It up Be4 I Have to Whope Some Ass

This was feedback posted for Stanza
 

checking polls for crew and former crew...........good drops from both

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y the fuck nobody voting??????????????????????????

my goodness......someone vote already...............

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Voted For: Stanza

uppin this Stanza you got it.........................

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^^^Yall get that removed ment to leave feed back but NK Stanza killed you.......

Voted For: Stanza

Natural Killa was aight in tha begginin with tha personals but punches werent that funny, u need 2 work in that, and the ending was aight, but overall not to cool

Stanza basically this shyt was funny as hell especially in the begginin where he was sayin that the shyt about tha alphabet, his structure was set, and his ending was cool this vote goes to Stanza

RTF on ma battles please

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Voted For: Stanza

Stanza nailed this verse.. natural killa, ur verse was too long and not enough connecting words throughout it to attach to ur rhymes.. stanza got structure, good worded rhymes with hot punches.. im satisfied..
vote stanza RTF

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: Stanza

v/Stanza

I thought stanza had better punches and some good wordplay. His punches hit harder and he also made his verse good in just a few lines, as Natural wrote about 16 but not really as hard hitting as Stanza's.

But Natural killa did have some good punches and wordplay but not as hard hitting. So that's why i voted for stanza.

'They Say I Attack Like a "Pokemon" Because all i Do Is "Pic-At-chu"-- best line thought it was real good wordplay.

This was feedback posted for Stanza
 

checkin the polls on this battle............................

herbs voting............................................

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Voted For: Stanza

stanza's verse was short and to the point... it was clear disses and you knew exactly what he was talkin about... on the other hand, natural killa's lines were WAAAAAY to complex... dont get me wrong, i understood every line but all of nats lines were stretched and the wordplay was really forced... like his opener about as-nats... it really brought down ur verse... sorry nat, i wasnt really feeling any of your lines except for the line about the leader being the worst in the crew, i thought it was amusing although lines like that are played to fuck....
nothing really stood out in stanza's verse, it just wasnt completely wack. none of his punches or lines connected at all because he also had a cuppla played concepts (crack in pocket) and forced word play ( WTF at the exed L line...).
the only reason Stanza gets this vote is because his punches werent so complicated... he was short and to the point, making it a better text read
V/ Stanza

uppin.................1-0 in stanza's favor.......

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: Stanza

Structure-Stanza, had a better flowing verse due to good structure, natural killa....ur verse was very poorly structured, try to make each line end at the same point...

Vocab-Natural killa, the little vocab that i saw came from natural killa...it was better than stanza's, stanza up on ur vocab...even though ur puncehs handled it.....

Personals-Both had pretty decent personals....but Stanza's were more effective and appealing than killa's..but both could up on those.....

Punches-Stanza, very good punches, made me laugh wit that pokemon shit...very good punch ma man, natural u had ok punches nothing very promising....nor hard hitting no hate though good job.......

Multis-Natural killa, had better multis by far, i can say this becuz he is the only one who had multis in this battle....stanza work on gettiing some multis into ur verses fo real....

Originality-Stanza was more original and fresh than natural....natural was kinda all over the place while stanze was staying on point and just straight dissing natural....and killa...u shouldnt have to explain ur personals :thumbup:
V/STANZA

RTF SINCE I KINDLY PEEPED THIS AND ANALYZED IT OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED