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BaM! vs Kon.Tay.Juz
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-09-05 at 02:37 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
BaM! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-05 02:12 PM.
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Kon.Tay.Juz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-05 02:16 PM.
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Your text stinks yo, even your audio mic tosses fresh mints
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They said SIG, you misunderstood what the establish meant! This battle is a Godsend, seriously easy win to seal Yeah, I rewind your tracks…..playing with hot wheels It’s ironic to think, another kon is behind tough bars… Only time his line’s are on point, when he types an exclamation mark! You belong in the dark, with a leash, and maybe a shock collar Just because vets ride your dick, doesn’t mean that you’re ballers! I could stop this right now, the war against bacteria would end today Drop the mic, but with your bad breath… it would probably run away! |
Im Equipped Wit the Winnin "Edge", But Please dont push me..
This Kids like a lez porno flick..............All I'm see'in is pussy.. Steppin to Me?.....kids gon' be chillin with christopher reeves.. Cuz I stay with Heataz that has santa....take off his sleeves.. Never bite the hand that feeds you.......You less than a man.. Call Me the pyro freak.....................Cuz nigga, i make bams.. Don't mistake me doe........cuz i got hoes on the streets..B... My lines the condom..So when you fuck em, You die from aids like easy.. I'm Equipped with acid spits, that detach your wrists, Blast this bitch.. ...........This Nigga got no game, like that white boi in hitch.. |
Im Equipped Wit the Winnin "Edge", But Please dont push me..
This Kids like a lez porno flick..............All I'm see'in is pussy.. Steppin to Me?.....kids gon' be chillin with christopher reeves.. Cuz I stay with Heataz that has santa....take off his sleeves.. Never bite the hand that feeds you.......You less than a man.. Call Me the pyro freak.....................Cuz nigga, i make bams.. Don't mistake me doe........cuz i got hoes on the streets..B... My lines the condom..So when you fuck em, You die from aids like easy.. I'm Equipped with acid spits, that detach your wrists, Blast this bitch.. ...........This Nigga got no game, like that white boi in hitch.. blah..... |
Voted For: BaM!
V/bam Structure-kon....Bam try and make ur lines end at the same point, then ull cop a better flow....Kon had good sttructure and better flow. Vocab-No vocab wut so ever in this battle biggest word excalmation lol so no vote in this catergorie Personals-Bam no doubt got kon on that...kon ur first bar was mad played i just thought of 2 pack wit that rhyme scheme playa.......Bam \had fresh shit. Punches-Bam.....bam had fresh punches hitting hard on everypoint.....Kon urs were kinda played but urs hit also just not as hard as bam. Multies-No multies were hott or noticable in either verses both up on that fo real originality-Bam was more fresh and hard hitting disses....kon urs was iight but u lacked punches that hit hard...no hate just stating my opinion RETURN THE FAVOR OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DISQUALIFIED |
sall hood ...................wasnt played to me. cuz i havent been on dis sirte forever. buit i guess its played if u say
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^^ay man no hate..........................................
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ayyo RTF or i will remove my vote!
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ill check out one of your links when i get 20 votes
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Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz
Your text stinks yo, even your audio mic tosses fresh mints Quote: Originally Posted by Kon’s crew Rep us in your sig. They said SIG, you misunderstood what the establish meant! ^^didn't rhyme homie...punch was weak...2/10 This battle is a Godsend, seriously easy win to seal Yeah, I rewind your tracks…..playing with hot wheels ^^flowed bad and punch sucked...2/10 It’s ironic to think, another kon is behind tough bars… Only time his line’s are on point, when he types an exclamation mark! ^^c'mon man...rhyme...played and basic punch too...2/10 You belong in the dark, with a leash, and maybe a shock collar Just because vets ride your dick, doesn’t mean that you’re ballers! ^^vets ride his dick?..more like a complement...2/10 I could stop this right now, the war against bacteria would end today Drop the mic, but with your bad breath… it would probably run away! ^^PLAYED OUT SINCE 1993...bad breath? OK...structure was OK.Flow sucked badly.Had too many lines that didn't rhyme.mint/meant....collar/ballers...mark/bars?...NO.As for punches...you need more concepts.That last bar...bacteria/bad breath?...need more creativity Im Equipped Wit the Winnin "Edge", But Please dont push me.. This Kids like a lez porno flick..............All I'm see'in is pussy.. ^^PLayed and basic...2/10 Steppin to Me?.....kids gon' be chillin with christopher reeves.. Cuz I stay with Heataz that has santa....take off his sleeves.. ^^Reeves lines are played..but punch ight..4/10 Never bite the hand that feeds you.......You less than a man.. Call Me the pyro freak.....................Cuz nigga, i make bams.. ^^No punch....1/10 Don't mistake me doe........cuz i got hoes on the streets..B... My lines the condom..So when you fuck em, You die from aids like easy.. ^^no punch...stop talkin bout yaself and diss..0/10 I'm Equipped with acid spits, that detach your wrists, Blast this bitch.. ...........This Nigga got no game, like that white boi in hitch.. ^^OK.....3/10 OK...structure was Nice.Flow was meh?...had a basic rhyme scheme.Punches lacked...but at least they were better than the other guy to give you the win.But here wat...next time use more creativity.You too basic and shit.And don't self glorify so much. Vote-Kon.Tay.juz VOTE IN LINK BELOW OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203668 |
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This was feedback posted for BaM!
checkin the polls...........................................
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ay oh famz.....im uppin this battle.............................
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This was feedback posted for BaM!
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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vote?...................
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This was feedback posted for Kon.Tay.Juz
just here checkin...................................
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yo kon tay juz why u even bother battelin this newbie?.........
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uppin this dayum battle...................................
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werrrd............................
FL=hurt sack |
Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz
Your text stinks yo, even your audio mic tosses fresh mints Quote: Originally Posted by Kon’s crew Rep us in your sig. They said SIG, you misunderstood what the establish meant! ^horrible rhyme, and the quotes screw up the flow bigtime Yeah, I rewind your tracks…..playing with hot wheels ^am I missing something? nothing here ryhmes w/ wheels It’s ironic to think, another kon is behind tough bars… Only time his line’s are on point, when he types an exclamation mark! ^ok, decent punch, decent rhyme You belong in the dark, with a leash, and maybe a shock collar Just because vets ride your dick, doesn’t mean that you’re ballers! ^what would be wrong w/ hitting a vet? that's hot. plus, that would be singular (baller), not plural; he's only one person I could stop this right now, the war against bacteria would end today Drop the mic, but with your bad breath… it would probably run away! ^horrible closing. fake personal, how do you know he has bad breath (especially if his mic tosses him fresh mints?)LOL. There's no war against bacteria, bacteria can't run, and bacteria causes bad breath, so you contradict yourself, dipshit. Kon: Im Equipped Wit the Winnin "Edge", But Please dont push me.. This Kids like a lez porno flick..............All I'm see'in is pussy.. ^HAHAHAHAH, great start and personal Steppin to Me?.....kids gon' be chillin with christopher reeves.. Cuz I stay with Heataz that has santa....take off his sleeves.. Never bite the hand that feeds you.......You less than a man.. Call Me the pyro freak.....................Cuz nigga, i make bams.. ^good personal, flow and rhyme.. you clinched the win here already... Don't mistake me doe........cuz i got hoes on the streets..B... My lines the condom..So when you fuck em, You die from aids like easy.. ^this line seemed a little forced, but it was aiight... I'm Equipped with acid spits, that detach your wrists, Blast this bitch.. ...........This Nigga got no game, like that white boi in hitch.. ^Man, you owned him this line, plus a great finisher. Damn, fantastic analogy. You live up to your name No question who gets this vote: Kon Tay Jus |
word up aiight 2-0 me..................................
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^ lol at that hate vote. whatever, dude, go be normal.
ps. -seal rhymes with wheel, go to school you stupid fuck. -you're = all vets on site = PLURAL -finally, don't talk about personals when all you have are mom and gay jokes pz. 2-1, slim :) |
Voted For: BaM!
just checking da pollls................................ |
dat was supposed to be feed ma fault
remove dat.............. |
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aiight
aiight, correction: wheels did have a riming word.. I didn't copy and paste the 3rd line when i wrote feedback. You got me there, happy? Oh, and by the way, "dick" is singular, ballers is plural. one dick can't make multiple ballers. I honestly feel sorry for you.
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one dick does make multiple ballers if multiple people are riding it. the stork must've dropped you on your head when putting you on the doorstep. :) up. |
Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz
Vote Kon.. Structure - Kon takes this.. Bam, your structure is on.. but watch what you do when you add a quote.. you need to make the quote part of the verse and it cant be off beat. Punches - Kon... Bam, your punches are weak and off topic.. one thing u say has nothing to do with the next.. Kon get this cause even tho his punches arent much harder.. they got some personal attachments that show hes aiming at Bam.. Vocab. - neither.. i dont see good vocab from anyone.. not only in this battle.. but on this site. Multis - Neither.. **Use multis in your verses.. make sure you keep with the topic, and put your punches in first.. but once you know you got them.. multis make your verse sound much better if you use them right** Overall vote goes to Kon.. punches and structure were more solid.. Both of you need to work on better vocab.. multis.. and put some strength in your punches.. peace |
"Just because vets ride your dick, doesn’t mean that you’re ballers!"
...so you're calling the "vets" the ballers now? nah, can't be because you say "your (singular) dick"... "you're (you are) ballers (plural), or are you changing who "you" and "you're ballers" refers to, in which case it still doesn't make any sense. LOL, keep digging yourself into a deeper and deeper hole. |
uppin this shit.....................
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uppin this battle yall........ill return da fav...i jus been busy lately
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Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz
yo my vote goes to Kon Kon:....you had a good structure....and your wordplay was definatly on point few lines here mad me laugh.. Bam: You had some dope lines too...but your strusture was all over the place...u need to fix that homie.... flow:Kon punches:Kon multis:not many Kon structure:Kon but yeah my vote....Kon rtf in my sig plz...i'll get this removed |
uppin this battle............................................ ..
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LOL waz hood...........................................
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waz hood
uppin this ma fuckin battle............ |
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