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erotic sex
I cant stop it, i cant drop its sentimental Im goin mental shes goin menstral the sex is sensual Long lasting fast gasping orgasms off the chain Triggered the membrain its an orgasm train Thrusting in a foward motion screams and commotion Move into the shower for about an hour usin the lotion Screamin my name as the sex gets hectic Our sex is conceptive bout ta burst but im skeptic Bout ta blow my pop its getting hott shes workin me Goes down on her knees im feelin the breeze feelin tingly Up and down my spine Tonight im gettin mine so sweet Oh what a treat she gets up off her knees and trys to kiss me Not feelin that move Oh how so cruel trying to share my treats I knock her off her feets tear off the sheets then throw her to the streets Wonderfull night of sex was put to rest Not being able to be payed The world is crashing down Tonight I got clowned not succesfully layed |
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^^uppin people leave some feed please
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look NiggaPlease you should flow hood but you'll need a purpose and situation to start a circus on location like Barnum and Ringling you could have a bazaar sum blining calling your name while these cats balling with a dame, and that's juicy coo-chee easy to get at because it wet and fat, NiggaPlease to a party you could screw somebody brain up
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ayyo fuck you....what did you say? next time speak in english you sloppy mother fucker
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hey ass hole its barnum and bailey before you rhyme learn your facts barnum and bailey-ringinglin brothers....fool OWNED
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a sad dude with a bad attitude fuck the circus and the purpose you probably taller and dumb with a smaller income but I can't loan you money, voice tone sound funny like you'll stay whack and won't pay back
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^^or you could just stop while your ahead cuz ill merk you son you already owned by everyone on this site so stop wit the corny ass rhymes and go fiddle wit your dick
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notice you kiss butt alot do you piss and throw in pots? your rap affair abort go to the airport as a guy wicked buy a ticket and hall ass this is all fast, look this applies to you while you flies through blue skies for telling true lies like Arnold SHARANEGGAR
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hey bitch^^go fuck around somwhere else no one wants to here that bull shit
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but yo homey thanks for responding to my post for real yo
yeah dawg I'm off top of the dome with the hot unknown feel me so look niggaplease got a trigga squeeze pull it this is not bull shit just a flow oh no NiggaPlease got served and that's word |
ya man, no doubt lol but hey when u leave feed to me try and speak in english and the beef will be squashed cuz i didnt come to this site to be a hata i came to express my self ya dig?
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uppin....................
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uppin...cummon ya'll
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ayyo let me get some real feed!
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once again uppin my shit cuz no one peeps my work....
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wtf?
u got that name from rappin didnt u? cause every time u spit some shit people said nigga please elevate 2/10 or pick a different topic |
iight dog, i asked for feedback not fucking beef....get the fuck outa here wit that shit.....fucking leave proper feed back or go fiddle wit ya lil dick.
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heres some fuckin feed back u fuckin bitch
1.change ya fuckin font size 2.actually know what your tryna rap about 3.dont bitch when people telll u to elevate 4.go get some pussy then re write this 5.use the words in the right context |
well now i wont bitch, cuz if you gon tell me to elevate tell me what to elevate on which you didnt do the first time....thats all i ask for.....
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lol...E looch...aint seen ya for sometime now...
niggaplease just take his advice cos i think he prolly one of the few u cud turn to for lessons... nice try to ur piece tho.. holla at mine(sig)....thanx |
^^iight good looks
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uppin?..........
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was deffinetly a different peice lol. made me laugh in parts. was iiight u shoudl pick better more harder topics to rhyme about though. but nice for what u aimed for.
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lol thanks man^^
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dog i was feeling that .................some really funny shit......that she tried to kiss me had me rolling about...
hounestly this was nice.... good idea...(even if it is used alot)... flow was xellent.... could of done with being a lil bit longer though...... 8nahalf outta 10 ....... |
thanks man much appreciate it...........
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